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Before - Legends Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 19-12 completed for this year

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2009.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Title: Diary of Kaagi Adin
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: before JA about 120 b.b.y.
    Characters: Kaagi Adin
    Genre: diary
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    Summary: Kaagi Adin writes in his diary
    Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to George Lucas.

    Entry 1 by me

    I am Kaagi Adin and an initiate of the Jedi-temple. I have celebrated my 7th birthday a week ago and got this diary from master Yoda.

    Master Yoda has written the first 100 entries in my diary and they are funny to read.
    He began my diary when I was 2 and found on my home planet Moniron. These were the first two entries:

    First entry done by master Yoda
    ?We are beings of light.?
    Kaagi Adin, little being of light he is.
    Dark raven black hair and silver shining eyes.
    Found by padawan Aaqu Maerhin and Master Gli-Ra-Ond on Moniron.
    Taken to Jeditemple to be trained after getting permission from authorities.

    Second entry by master Yoda
    Kaagi is becoming friends with padawan Aaqu after week in temple.
    Wetted me with plastiform syringe he did.
    Got that from padawan Aaqu, he should know better giving kids those toys.
    Masters not safe no more. All wetted in restaurants and hallways.
    Initiates trouble they give.
    But fun it is to see Yaddle wet.


    Yes his writing is the same as his speech but he is very nice.
    With this diary he gave me a fountain pen and said ?new it was when begun this diary I did. Your heritage it is young Kaagi.?
    I will continue soon. Now it is time for lessons by master Yoda.

     
  2. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Masters not safe no more. All wetted in restaurants and hallways.

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    But there's nothing wrong with having a little fun!

    What a lovely start to Kaagi's diary.

    Please PM me when you update

    Looking forward to more

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  3. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    First entry done by master Yoda
    ?We are beings of light.?
    Kaagi Adin, little being of light he is.
    Dark raven black hair and silver shining eyes.


    Sweeeeeeeeet! @};-
     
  4. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    But fun it is to see Yaddle wet.

    I'd have liked to see Yoda and Yaddle a few centuries or so prior. Hint hint.
     
  5. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Aww, this is really cute!! Love Yoda's entries :)
     
  6. MeleanaKenobi

    MeleanaKenobi Jedi Youngling star 2

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    But fun it is to see Yaddle wet.

    Lol! What's going on in Yoda's head!
     
  7. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    More are coming.


    You will see a lot of Yoda and Yaddle in this diary.

    he is having fun.

    Thanks all for reading and here is the next entry with the mini challenge for January

    Entry 2

    Lessons, yes I have to follow a lot of them and that way not much time to write in my diary. But today they were interrupted when Master Yoda sped on his hoverpad to the crèche and he said ?follow young Kaagi.?

    I followed him and there was my friend Aaqu Maerhin carrying a little crying baby.

    Master Yoda wrote in the great book where all new arrivals were logged:
    ?Rian Solma, homeworld Bor-Rhimmol, orphaned at 4 months old, species humanoid with lifespan of 250 years.?

    Master Yoda asked me to help with the new arrival and I did.

    Little Rian quietened down soon.
    And that was because I smelled something and that something was his diaper. I got a new diaper and gave it to Master Yoda. He changed the diaper and that solved our little problem of a crying Rian.

    Master Yoda asked if I wanted to help with feeding and I sat down in a chair. He put Rian in my lap and a bottle in my hand and there I was feeding little Rian. When he was burping some of the milk came on my tunics but I didn?t care.

    Aaqu Maerhin told me that the people on Bor Rhimmol saw Rian as a bad omen because he was Force sensitive. They even accused him of causing the flood disaster that killed his parents and many more. And Aaqu has given him a new name because Fabria Slooma sounded like a girls name and that would have given laughters even here in the crèche.

     
  8. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Master Yoda, linking people as well.

    Master Yoda wrote in the great book where all new arrivals were logged:
    ?Rian Solma, homeworld Bor-Rhimmol, orphaned at 4 months old, species humanoid with lifespan of 250 years.?
     
  9. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Awww...how sweet of Kaagi to help with the baby!

    And poor little Rian! I can't imagine anyone blaming a helpless little baby for anything [face_frustrated] [face_frustrated] [face_frustrated]

    Good thing the Jedi rescued him.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  10. Qui-Gon_Reborn

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    Awwww...so cute!! [face_love] [face_love]
     
  11. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He is;)

    yes some people blame innocent babies for their misfortune. But Rian is now quite safe.

    Qui-Gon_Reborn thanks for reading.

    Entry 3

    I have a new room mate and he is a human boy and found by master Arin on Brentaal. He was given as a baby to be raised a Jedi and his parents insisted that he kept his name.

    Jemboo giggled when he introduced himself as Aenoeala Jemboola Daeaala.

    I started to say welcome Aeno but he interupted me and said call me Jemboo. My people?s entire names are a mouth full and no stranger can pronounce them the way it should be.

    Jemboo it is and he is funny.
    He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers.
     
  12. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    So there are more people as gifted as Ani used to:

    Jemboo it is and he is funny.
    He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers.


    Can´t wait to see more friendships forming.
     
  13. KELIA

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    He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers

    I'm sure that will come in very handy!

    Jemboo giggled when he introduced himself as Aenoeala Jemboola Daeaala.

    That is a mouthful!

    Good thing he is happy being called by the much easier to pronounce Jemboola

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  14. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    You will see more of Jemboo

    Thank you and Jemboo is in the next post, trouble for Kaagi and a heart of the temple.
    The last part about the spider is from one of our instructors at the fire department.

    Entry 4
    Seno Fien is one of our teachers and he gave us lessons how to program computers. I already know I want to become a healer like Aaqu Maerhin and Master Gli-Ra-Ond and paid little or no attention to his teachings.
    My room mate Jemboo helped me with the programming and that got us ?the looks? from teacher Seno Fien.

    The looks, yes he can appear quite intimidating and what we had done was ?not done? because his computer crashed. What was the case? Jemboo wrote a virus-program to knock out personal files and loaded that in one of the student workstations.
    Not the average workstation but the one connected to the Master?s and I was scheduled to use ?that station? because Seno Fien wanted to rehearse and I was the first on his list.

    And after that disaster I had an extra lesson from Seno Fien and no; it isn?t computer programming. He had taken me to the room where the heart of technology for the entire Jeditemple is.

    Yes the mainframes.

    I could see them, walk around them, hear their humming and their beeps. And what was my work?

    I had to clean the ducts.

    Seno Fien smiled when I showed him a large spiderweb with little crumbs and flies caught in it. ?They are the first web-designers? he told me.

     
  15. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    what was my work?

    I had to clean the ducts.


    Aw, and it wasn't even his fault! Well, not entirely.

    Oh well, at least he got a valuable lesson out of it.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=

     
  16. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    I hope so, too.

    Sometimes students learn something... :rolleyes:... sometimes they don´t!
     
  17. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    This student learns something and more.

    Thanks again for reading and here is the next entry.

    Entry 5

    I could teach Jemboo also something.
    Banister riding.

    I have learned that from the grand master of banister riding; Master Yoda.
    He is using the banister often and sometimes you can see him together with Master Yaddle having a competition.

    Jemboo did it the dangerous way when I saw him the first time and I showed him how Master Yoda had taught me to do it.

    Sitting and with your knees poised to brake if you encounter an obstacle.
    And that obstacle came our way today.

    Tyvokka a Wookiee Jedi master was ascending the stairs and Jemboo was on his way down. I yelled and Jemboo was just in time to miss those hairy arms. He stopped and what did Master Tyvokka do?

    Barking with laughter he told us of his adventures in the great forrest of Kashyyyk and he took us to one of the training rooms and showed us how to use the ropes.

    Yohooo, we went flying.
    And I had a great afternoon with Tyvokka and Jemboo.

     
  18. AzureAngel2

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    A wookie jedi master, cool!
     
  19. KELIA

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    Flying on ropes - now that sounds like fun!

    Glad to see Master Tyvokka wasn't upset about the banister riding.

    Sitting and with your knees poised to brake if you encounter an obstacle

    A most important rule!

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  20. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Yes and he was from the wookieepedia.

    Master Yoda taught him to ride.

    Thanks again for your support and here is the next update.

    Entry 6

    The great archives are nice to visit but you have to meet the right archivist. There are dull archivists and haughty ones like Master Amoel. If you ask her a simple question she grilles you about it and keeps asking more questions. And that keeps you in the archives for quite a lot of time.
    Once it was enough for me to be late for my lessons. Lessons from Master Yoda.
    But I was very honest with Master Yoda and told him about Master Amoel. And that had the nice master smiling ?Amoel precise and keeping you occupied she is.?

    Ah yes there are nice archivists too. One of them is my great friend Shh-kir. He is 139 years old and a Barkanian lizard. That is a big species with sharp claws and spikes all over his body and tail. He is 3 metres long and his full name is Tss-kik-Shh-Kir-ssj-kr.

    That?s like Jemboo?s full name and difficult to pronounce for us humanoids. He told me when I visited him for the first time his full name and told me that I could call him Shh-kir after that.

    I visited Shh-kir today with Jemboo.
    Jemboo had never met Shh-kir and both exchanged their full names with Shh-kir pronouncing Aenoeala Jemboola Daeaala faultless.
    Great!
    Why?

    Master Amoel came striding towards us and now I have to address her by her full name too and that?s including Master Madame Jonata Djannaella Elleneyella Amoel. Four words more and what?
    Difficult ones too and of course I didn?t get it right the first time. That had me long after Jemboo was gone listening to her and getting Jonata Djannaella Elleneyella right.

    Shh-kir was making those sisssing noises that are his way of being funny and when Master Amoel went to help another student ? she was pleased with the result ? I went to Shh-kir.

    Shh-kir told me that I can call him just Shh-kir and he revealed that he calls Amoel just that: Master Amoel.
     
  21. KELIA

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    If you ask her a simple question she grilles you about it and keeps asking more questions. And that keeps you in the archives for quite a lot of time.

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    And I thought Master Nu was tough!

    At least Kaagi has a friend in Shh-Kir.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  22. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Sweet up-date! Very linguistic!

    [face_love]
     
  23. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    And in Jemboo. All archivists are tough;)

    the next is more adventurous.

    Thanks all for reading and here is the storm mini challenge

    Entry 7

    I was reading my notes for the next lesson when Jemboo and Sjaaki came into the main room.

    They had discovered a large climbing tree in one of the gardens and told me it was just fun climbing to the top where you could see the roof of the temple. And if the roof is open you can feel the wind through your hair.

    I followed them.
    Sjaaki is a Dressellian and with those agile limbs he can climb and teach us a lesson. The roof was open.

    Tree climbing could be done and up we went, practising our Jedi-skills and Sjaaki giving us advise to where put your hands and feet.

    We reached the top of the tree and could find a nice perch to sit.
    Only one thing happened.
    The weather went whacko.

    And that had us sitting in a swinging tree in the storm, holding on and calling for help.

    Help arrived in the form of Master Yoda and Master Tyvokka and they gently floated us down after closing the roof.
     
  24. AzureAngel2

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    :_|

    Tree climbing could be done and up we went, practising our Jedi-skills and Sjaaki giving us advise to where put your hands and feet.

    Now I found out why I am bad in climbing trees.

    :p

    Only joking. Sweet up-date, dear bird!
     
  25. KELIA

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    Probably not the best way for the initiates to learn you should check the weather before climbing a tree, but at least they were rescued

    :) :) :)

    I just hope they didn't have to endure a lecture from Yoda :p

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
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