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Saga Diary of Timo Herefa, for the diary challenge 19-12 completed

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 15, 2009.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Title: Diary of Timo Herefa
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: ROTS - intertrillogy
    Characters: Timo Herefa my OC
    Genre: diary
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    Summary: Timo Herefa writes in his diary
    Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to George Lucas.

    Entry 1
    I have a book.
    It is a diarie.
    Is that spelled good?
    Enga helps now.

    I am Timo and Master Enga gave me this book.
    I am only 4 years.
    I am in the healers ward.
    I hurt my leg.
    It is in a splint and now it does not hurt.
    Tomorrow my crèche master will come to get me back.

     
  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Entry 2

    I am home.

    Healers ward was nice but home is more.

    Spanners who had helped me yesterday came again.
    He had a friend with him and he is funny.

    Spanners is funny too. His real name is Aiden O-Lenge.
    The two told me stories and Bant too.

    She gave me a hoverchair and I could return home with Master Solma.

    Thanks Master Solma for helping me to write.

     
  3. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Spanners who had helped me yesterday came again.
    He had a friend with him and he is funny.

    Spanners is funny too. His real name is Aiden O-Lenge.
    The two told me stories and Bant too.

    She gave me a hoverchair and I could return home with Master Solma.


    Yah, it´s the bird with another diary and weaving a web that conects folks!
     
  4. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Yes you will see Timo through the events of the end of the clone wars, ROTS and beyond.

    Entry 3

    I do not like the splint. I cannot run and swim with the others.

    Master has to wash me and help me with everything.
    Only the fresher gives no problem.

    And I can only wear these silly pants.
    They are white with wriggly blue lines.
    My tunic is normal and beige.

    Master Solma is helping me now and he spells the names of my friends.
    Marc Tilliani, Tosh Gailan and Julliu Arenda are 3 and they are very interested in my splint. And they are nice. They help me and play with me.

    Zsasa is nice and he is 9. He is a Shistavanen, same as Shika Diir.
    Shonalla is from another group and she was the first to welcome me back. She is my friend too.

    Keren is 4 and he is my room mate.

    The others were playing and I wanted to play too.

    Zsasa solved this. He came with an idea and talked with Keren.

    We built a garage and I sat in the middle in my hoverchair and was the owner of the garage. That way I could play with the others. The garage was Keren?s idea.
    Tosh and Julliu were helping with the repairs.
    Marc and Zsasa were customers coming with the speeders to our garage.
    Thanks Zsasa for helping me.

    And thanks Master Solma for helping me with writing.

    This was a big entrie.
     
  5. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    This was a big entrie.

    Indeed. But it was welcome, most welcome.
     
  6. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Thank you and he is writing more helped and doing it on his own.

    Entry 4

    I cannot go to the sports lessons and was alone in the rooms.
    But something nice happened today.

    Master Solma has taken me to the childrens farm.
    Master Ekiway is there and he cares for the animals.
    He told me a story about chickens and an owl.
    The owl was very funny.

    I saw the Nerfs and master Ekiway milked one Nerf and gave me milk.
    It was warm and tasted nice.

    Master Ekiway put a little chick in my hands and I felt a rapid beating of a heart.
    He told me that a chick?s heart beats fast.

    The others ? Keren, Vera, Ger, Jaidaan, Jannori, Shaa Mi, Shonalla and Warmi ? had sports and came back.
    Zsasa helped me to write all of this. Have diner now.

    ---

    This is my second entrie.
    I could copie the divikult words.
    I told them about my visit and Warmi was not nice after I bumped him with my chair.
    Warmi waited for me when I was alone and he called me names. I was stupid and something more.
    I am little and he is big.
    Good that he is in anoter group with Shonalla.

    And now he is the only Shistavanen that is not nice. Zsasa is and Jannori and of course Master Shika Diir.
     
  7. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Kiddo, do not listen to that stupid Warmi!

    [face_not_talking]

    You are great the way you are.
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He is and you will see

    Entry 5
    Bad splint.
    Why?

    Master Nas Aena came and took most of my room mates on a training trip.
    Jedi Knight Melian Norrin is the other adult on that trip.
    Keren and Vera are gone. They are of my group.

    But Marc, Julliu and Tosh are still here; Marc because he can go with Master Ekiway to get a new Nerf for the farm and Julliu and Tosh because they have to visit the dentist.

    Ger, Jaidaan, Jannori and Maaia are gone too and they are of the Bantha clan.
    Master Sephiin has now only Shaa Mi, Shonalla and Warmi.

    Nice splint.
    Why?
    Master Bant came and had a nice picture of a volcano for me. Shika Diir had sent it to her and it is from Ganaris and the Caradara National Park. Shika will return on 23 selona and she will bring more pictures.

    Thanks master Bant for helping me with this entry.
     
  9. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Thanks, Bant AND bird!

    :D
     
  10. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Thanks[:D]

    Entry 6

    I write this.
    Now my splint is gone and I have a breese. Master Bant helped me with it. I will get terapie in a few days.
    Marc has left with Master Ekiway.
    They are going to Alderaan to get a new Nerf and Marc has named the new Nerf and master Solma has taken him to the hangaar.

    I was alone with Warmi and he was pestering. Master Sephiin came. He did not see that Warmi had put the controls of my hoversjair in my room.

    And I am afreed of Warmi. He had said that he would put them next time somewere else if I told it to one of the masters.

    I said notting and Warmi gave them back because I had to visit the fresser. With the breese I can do that alone now.
     
  11. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    :eek:

    Stupid Warmi!

    [face_not_talking]
     
  12. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He is but you will see more.

    The next entry has the mini challenge storms.

    Entry 7

    No Warmi to pester me today. He is going with Master Sephiin to the senate.
    Shonalla and Shaa Mi are going too.

    I had a nice day with Tosh and Julliu.

    Shaa Mi and Warmi returned with master Sephiin.

    Master Sephiin told my master that Shonalla was injured and in a hospital.
    Not the healers ward and Master Sephiin told me that the hospital was closer to the senate.
    Shonalla will return in 2 days. She is older but she is one of my friends.

    Warmi gave me a stormy look and now I am afraid.
     
  13. AzureAngel2

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    Warmi gave me a stormy look and now I am afraid.

    *gives Warmi a very stormy look one of those Anakin ones

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P3080206.jpg]

    and goes grrrrrr*
     
  14. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Nice for Warmi but he isn't that bad. You will see

    Entry 8
    I have a new toy.
    Master Solma gave me a pakkage.

    Out came a fluffie oul.
    I have seen ouls in a book.
    Master Solma has nice stories about ouls and about bievers.
    And Master Ekiway has those stories too. When he comes back I will visit him and the new Nerf.
    Here is the oul
    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/timo1owl.jpg]

     
  15. AzureAngel2

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    Awwww. I love the owl!

    [face_love]
     
  16. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He will be drawing more.

    Entry 9

    Master helped me dress and in the morning I could play.

    Warmi came and away was my control for my hoverchair.

    Master Solma saw it in the fresher and Warmi apologized to me saying that it was a great misunderstanding and now he will be nice to me. He is now gone with master Sephiin to see a holomovie.

    Tosh Gailan and Julliu Arenda are to the dentist Morrin Miwert with master Solma.
    I have had therapy (difficult word and Master Adin helped me with this entry. Also the first part.)

    He told me a story about the owl and the owl needed help with his foot.

    Owl was brave and I was brave too.

    Only once I made a sound and that was because Master Adin was distracted. He said that he sensed something familiar.

    Now I am going to see the workplace of Master O-Lenge.
     
  17. AzureAngel2

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    Master Solma saw it in the fresher and Warmi apologized to me saying that it was a great misunderstanding and now he will be nice to me. He is now gone with master Sephiin to see a holomovie.

    :D I hope it stays this way! [:D]
     
  18. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    You will see what will happen after this entry;)

    Entry 10

    I repaired a spanner with an itsi.
    Tomy Itsi helped me write this entry.

    Spanners is the nickname of master Aiden O-Lenge and he has gotten that after he broke a cheap hydrospanners with his bare hands.

    We have seen the big engines of the transports. Hyperspace engines and all the cannons of the Delta Aethersprite fighters and they were exiting.

    Now we are going to have a barbecue.

     
  19. AzureAngel2

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    Spanners is the nickname of master Aiden O-Lenge and he has gotten that after he broke a cheap hydrospanners with his bare hands.

    Good heavens, people! [face_laugh] What a coincidence! Master O-Lenge... ;)
     
  20. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Yes and he is writing the next entry (DNA I.D.)

    Entry 11

    Done by me, master Aiden O-Lenge.

    Timo has seen the clones attacking the Jedi.

    We ? and we is Master Tomy Itsi, Timo and me ? were entering an elevator to get to the basement of the temple where we were going to visit Sarghi Vellia and Natala Joma and their hobby, an old wheelchair with an engine. I had made a diner on the barbecue and had put the remains in a sack. In the basement is also the waste-disposal ? fire proof and as Itsi has told me many times O-Lenge proof ? for remains of barbecues.

    The elevator came to an unscheduled stop and the door opened. Timo saw only a little of the awful things happening before I could close the door.

    They tried to override the command but I could use my skills learned from the firefighters and made the elevator untracable.

    But Timo started to cry and I know why. Master Solma once told me Timo has healing hands and healers are among the most sensitive of all Jedi.

    We arrived safely in the basement and the training course and I helped Sarghi Vellia ? who had felt his master become one with the Force only moments ago ? in the wheelchair. Sarghi took Timo in his arms and soothed him.

    Natala Joma had been helping Sarghi with the wheelchair and she hopped aboard. We fled using the training course and stopped halfway at a shed. In that shed I had organised some barbecues and it had all the tools to make a mess and help us disappear.

    I used the clippers to cut Timo?s hair in a millimetre cut.
    My hair met Itsi?s hands and Itsi?s mine. The result was a lot of hair and with the Nerf-bones and some clothes I made a little fire. Hairs and clothes were arranged and Tomy had constructed a bomb with help from Natala.
    That bomb was put behind a grid leading to a crawlduct. It was timed and would create a mess.

    Coming to the exit for the civilians we could escape because Hroni Amet ? a shopkeeper who gave supplies to the restaurants of the Jeditemple ? was there with his supplies for Natala. Another initiate ? Zsasa ? had joined us and he ? like Hroni a Zabrak ? ran towards him with Natala disguised as a Zabrak following him.
    That had those clones distracted and we got away.

    Sarghi had a solution to get us away from Coruscant and we headed to the Senate district where the Millennium Falcon became our transport.
    Now we are headed for Corellia and Timo is finishing his picture that will be his entry in the diary.

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/timo2darth.jpg]

     
  21. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Entry 11a
    Tomy saw my drawing.
    He smiled and put another one in my diarie.

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/yoda-acryl.jpg]


    Master Yoda will fight that evil man.

     
  22. mujapple-juicey

    mujapple-juicey Jedi Master star 4

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    yes Yoda will! These are really well-written!
     
  23. AzureAngel2

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    :_|

    The last two entries are very emotinal and I slightly cried, even though I am NOT a sensible healer. Well done, bird. Especially using your two paintings for your story.
     
  24. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Thank you for reading this diary.

    More are to follow and thank you again.

    Entry 12

    Master Spanners helped me to write this.
    I am back in the Falcon. No action for the ship.
    Maybe she will get some action in the future.
    My diary is still here in the sickbay.
    We had an adventure WOW.

    I went with Masters O-Lenge and Itsi and Padawan Sarghi to a big hospital.
    I met fire fighters and there was a big fire in another hospital.
    No one was injured and the adults were playing.
    It was a big disguise party and I met two Padawans who got new names and families.

    Sarghi got a new name too. I gave it to him and it is a hero name. Master Solma has told me the story of Salmar Rhovanniun. And it was funny.

    They were talking like Master Yoda and I tapped my boot to my brace and they thought that Master Yoda was coming.

    I have a new family too. Hanjo Tavar and his wife Maariah will take me to their new house in Cormond. Hanjo will teach me.

    And Aiden and Tomy will come too. They will get a new home. Corellians will protect us.
    Master Rostek Horn told me that.
     
  25. AzureAngel2

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    I am back in the Falcon. No action for the ship.
    Maybe she will get some action in the future.


    You can be sure about that, Timo!

    :D

    Great stuff, as usual. Thanks, dear bird.
     
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