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Saga Dinner Party - AU Romance (Anakin/Padme, Sola, Bail, Barriss...) Author announcement 8/21

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Reihla, Sep 1, 2004.

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  1. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Woohoo...Sola's getting hooked up. I was sitting there going "Wait a minute, she's a mom!" then realized that she was a widow. :) Great post.
     
  2. leia_naberrie

    leia_naberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    I like the expansion into Padme's feelings - I didn't realize how much I missed that from the original until now.
     
  3. Reihla

    Reihla Jedi Master star 3

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    Kynstar - everyone is in loooove!

    That was the idea. Lots of war & action stuff going on elsewhere. I just figured a little romance never hurt anyone.

    Dally ? I am really enjoying this delightful story.

    Yay. Of course there will be more. :D Check back Wednesday.

    Jazz_S ? Ever since I read the vig, I was interested in what they would talk about.

    Getting to their conversation was a big part of why I went ahead with this. I?m glad you are looking forward to it. :)

    leia-naberrie ? I like the expansion into Padme's feelings ?

    Padmé is delightfully complex (as you know ;) ). I also tend to think she works too hard. This little romantic interlude is designed to get her away from all that.

    Darth Ishtar - Sola's getting hooked up

    Yup. She just seemed so practical and grounded in AOTC. I?ve always been curious about her and her life. Plus, I figured as the sister of a Queen she wouldn?t be intimidated by Bail and his titles.

    Thanks for reading!

     
  4. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Well, does this mean with author replies, there's hope of a post? Please?
     
  5. leia_naberrie

    leia_naberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    Pretty please? [face_batting]
     
  6. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Looks like Anakin's kiss has had quite an effect on Padme.

    ?Well, Barriss, let?s head to my suite. Do you have time to come in for a drink? I have just about anything you can name and I?d welcome the opportunity to learn more about you and about the Jedi Order.?

    Doing a little research on our mystery man, are we Senator??? :p

    In fact, tomorrow he would probably regret ignoring the important dignitaries whose political favor he should even now be currying. At the moment it just didn?t seem to matter. In fact, he couldn?t summon up as much as a shred of remorse. He couldn?t imagine any place else he?d rather be or anyone else he?d rather be with. For the first time in distant memory he was reluctant to let an evening end.

    *sigh* Loved the part with Bail and Sola.


     
  7. Vivid_Scripts

    Vivid_Scripts Jedi Master star 4

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    i don't really have much to say that hasn't already been said: this is great, Rei. You seem to perfectly capture the lighthearted romantic atmosphere and the interactions between Bail and Sola are great. Excellent insight into Senator Amidala's mindframe and psyche, btw.

    I'm still waiting for everything to blow up in their face, though. ;)
     
  8. Kazzy

    Kazzy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh this is wonderful! So far I'm loving every second of it - and nothing would be better than another chapter!

    The scene between Padmé and Anakin on the balcony had me breathless. Wow! It was beautifully written.

    The Sola/Bail bits were nice too. Too characters who usually hover in the back ground. It's nice to see them get some development - and you do so so very well!

    :)
     
  9. Reihla

    Reihla Jedi Master star 3

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    Thanks Gina, and Vivid and Kazzy! :)

    It was tempting to jump the gun and post early, but I managed to convince myself to stick to my schedule. :D

    Here?s today?s entry!



    Dinner Party. Ch. 5. Puzzles.

    Sola had been wrestling with herself about the propriety of asking Bail to join her for a drink when he?d given her a reprieve by inviting her to enjoy more of this amazing city-world.

    The evening had already been wonderful, more so for the unexpected gift of companionship from the man at her side. He was a Prince, so she was certain he awed most beings he came into contact with. As Naboo nobility and the sister of a former Queen, Sola had been less than impressed by his titles and far more sympathetic to his duties.

    Not that he wasn?t impressive. In fact, he was exceptionally handsome, so much so that it left her breathless. He was indeed princely, standing head and shoulders above her, with dark hair, a closely trimmed goatee and eyes as black and sparkling as the night sky.

    She had to admit to herself that he?d impressed her on another level as well. Bail Organa was an incredibly good dancer. Until tonight she hadn?t realized how much she?d missed the activity. During their years together at the university she and her husband had been avid dancers. Once they graduated, married and started a family it seemed there just wasn?t much opportunity. Then, when he?d fallen ill?

    Sola deliberately pulled her thoughts out of the past. For the first time in a long time she wasn?t feeling like a widow, or Ryoo and Pooja?s mom, or Amidala?s sister, or Ruwee Naberrie?s quiet daughter. She felt?like Sola.

    Even more important, tonight she wasn?t lonely and it was this man?s fault. She made a conscious choice to hold on to that feeling as long as possible.

    ?Senator I would love to see Coruscant by night.? She said, flashing him a smile she hoped wasn?t too bright. This courtship stuff was complicated and she?d been out of circulation over a decade. The last thing she wanted was to appear over-eager or promise more than she would feel comfortable giving.

    Judging from Bail?s answering grin, she?d given exactly the right answer.

    ?Well, then, we should go this way.? He cupped her elbow in a warm hand, gently steering her to the left at the next intersecting corridor. They took a turbolift up several stories before finding themselves in a hallway lined with numerous sets of double doors. Bail stopped before a particularly elaborate set and placed his palm on the security pad. The wooden panels swung inward and he led her inside.

    She felt a shiver of apprehension as the doors automatically shut behind them. The area they found themselves in was dark and quiet. Vague outlines of furniture were dimly visible in the starlight that spilled in from a panoramic transparisteel window.

    Bail guided her through the shadows, stopping to turn on a small lamp that illuminated a huge wooden desk at the center of the room. It was a soft light, barely pushing at the darkness around it. Still, she could make out that they were in an office, an elaborate one that reminded her of the Throne Room at Theed Palace. Numerous cloth-covered chairs circled the desk, a sure sign that the occupant was used to holding conferences on a regular basis.

    Her escort seemed to sense her discomfort and tried to ease the tension.

    ?This is my office. My home away from Alderaan, as if there could be such a thing.? He gave a wry grin. ?I?m told I have one of the best views in the complex. I?ll just show it to you and then I can take you back to your suite.?

    She very much appreciated his sensitivity, along with his subtle reassurance that he had, indeed, only brought her here for the view. Her unease faded and she felt a return to the comfortable camaraderie they?d shared earlier.

    ?No hurry. I?m enjoying your company and my girls aren?t waiting up for me.? She smiled at the mention of her daughters.

    He must?ve noticed. ?Tell m
     
  10. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    NO! Bad Barriss! Baaaaaaaaaaaaaad dumb Bariss! I love to pieces your Bail/Sola.
     
  11. qtrhrs78

    qtrhrs78 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Another great chapter. I'll have to see the next post before I pass judgment on Bariss. :)
     
  12. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Ferus? OMG! Anakin is going to have convulsions! Loved it! Barriss sounds like a sibling, they love to do stuff like that to each other. YIKES! I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Loved the interaction between Sola and Bail. I remember how terrifying it was to date as a single mother. You're making decisions not only for yourself, but for your kids. Scary!

    Lovely work, as always!
     
  13. Kynstar

    Kynstar Jedi Knight star 5

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    Ohhh I sooo loved those parts with Bail and Sola!!

    Not that he wasn?t impressive. In fact, he was exceptionally handsome, so much so that it left her breathless. He was indeed princely, standing head and shoulders above her, with dark hair, a closely trimmed goatee and eyes as black and sparkling as the night sky.

    Isn't he sooo handsome!! [face_love]

    Great job!!! Uh oh... man oh man... I truly hope she realizes once she talks with Ferus that it wasn't him. *Shudders* Ewwwwwwwww juz even imagining of Ferus doing that balcony scene with Padme juz makes me [face_sick] totally ewwww!
     
  14. leia_naberrie

    leia_naberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    Ditto Kynstar - [face_sick]
     
  15. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It was Padmé?s turn to look expectant as her tormentor paused dramatically before giving her answer.

    ?Ferus Olin.?


    Wow, that's certainly a very interesting twist to what I thought would happen! I can't wait to see what happens when Padme tries to remind Ferus what happened, and, of course, Anakin's reaction to everything! Awesome post!

    JS

    P.S. You do realize I'm going be hanging on tenterhooks waiting for you to post again, don't you?
     
  16. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    Now the burning question is, is barris really that cruel or that THICK? :p
     
  17. Vivid_Scripts

    Vivid_Scripts Jedi Master star 4

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    POP!

    i get the feeling that it just blew up in their face...
     
  18. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    I think she's just cruel.
     
  19. Dally

    Dally Jedi Master star 4

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    Oh no!! This won't be good! Don't leave us hanging too long!
     
  20. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    It was Padmé?s turn to look expectant as her tormentor paused dramatically before giving her answer.

    ?Ferus Olin.?


    Oh, that was just evil. :p
     
  21. Reihla

    Reihla Jedi Master star 3

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    DarthIshtar ? NO! Bad Barriss!

    Hey, a gal?s gotta have a little fun, especially when you just know that Anakin probably deserves it for something he?s done to her in the past?

    Glad you?re liking Bail & Sola :)

    qtrhrs78 ? I'll have to see the next post before I pass judgment on Bariss.

    Yeah, that?s probably a good plan. After all, Anakin did tell Barriss that he and Amidala were already acquainted.

    VaderLVR64 ? Ferus? OMG! Anakin is going to have convulsions!

    To say the least? [face_laugh]

    Loved the interaction between Sola and Bail.

    Both of them piqued my imagination at one point and I couldn?t resist throwing them together to see what would happen. So far, so good.

    Kynstar ? Isn't he sooo handsome!!

    You won?t find an argument here! :D

    juz even imagining of Ferus doing that balcony scene with Padme juz makes me totally ewwww!

    I confess, I hadn?t really gone there in my mind. Not a good visual!

    leia-naberrie ? Ditto Kynstar

    Yeah, like I said, I didn?t fully contemplate that scene from the perspective of ?what if it really had been Ferus?. Too horrible for words!!!

    Jazz_S ? I can't wait to see what happens when Padme tries to remind Ferus what happened, and, of course, Anakin's reaction to everything!

    I confess, I?m looking forward to it myself.

    DarthBreezy ? Now the burning question is, is barris really that cruel or that THICK?

    I think perhaps she is a delightful combination of both. [face_mischief]

    Vivid_Scripts ? i get the feeling that it just blew up in their face...

    Keeping in mind that no matter how bad things seem, they can always get worse... [face_worried]

    Dally ? Don't leave us hanging too long!

    I?m going to try to resist the urge to post early. We?ll see how I do?

    Gina ? Oh, that was just evil.

    Guilty as charged. [face_devil]


     
  22. leia_naberrie

    leia_naberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    When is the next update?
     
  23. Reihla

    Reihla Jedi Master star 3

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    I'm sorry, I meant to post sooner, but I had to make a sudden trip out of state to handle some family matters. I have my files with me and was hoping to finish up the next post, but I haven't had a chance yet to get my act together (we've spent the last 3 days driving).

    My laptop is something of an antique with a dial-up modem, but it works pretty well for writing (except for my tendency to type like I'm on a regular keyboard). I'm not going to promise anything datewise, but I'll try to get the next chapter up by the end of the week.

    After that, I won't be back to regular updates until the week of the 24th. I'm really sorry about this, especially the short notice, but I didn't realize how quickly I'd have to drop everything.
     
  24. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    eep, poor thing. We'll be patient.
     
  25. leia_naberrie

    leia_naberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    Ouch, real life is a bitch, isn't it? :( Well that explains a lot! ;) Don't you worry, you've got us completely hooked on this one. :p
     
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