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Episode II: The Blood of Heroes (Sequel to Episode I: Duel of the Fates)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Darth Geist, Aug 11, 2001.

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  1. Darth Geist

    Darth Geist Jedi Master star 5

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    EXT. SPACE

    The Last Chance coasts through empty void.

    INT. LAST CHANCE - BRIDGE

    Jenner Agravaine sits in the captain's seat, receiving a HOLOGRAPHIC MESSAGE
    from a stoic Cygnus.

    CYGNUS
    There were too many Jedi. We couldn't get
    to him.

    JENNER
    Return home, Cygnus. Out.

    He cuts the transmission, and raises a hand to his chin with a regretful sigh.

    JENNER
    New plan.

    EXT. JEDI CITADEL - KNIGHTS' QUARTERS - NIGHT

    Traffic is light at this time of the pre-dawn morning.

    INT. KNIGHTS' QUARTERS - CADE'S DORMITORY - NIGHT

    An angry Cade storms into his room, his arm in a sling. Without turning on the
    lights, he flops onto his bed and jabs his finger at a holo-recorder,
    telekinetically pressing a button.

    The HOLOGRAPHIC IMAGE of his drunken friend BRILD appears, behind which we see a
    loud party.

    BRILD
    Cade! Where are you? Party can't start
    without you-

    Cade jabs his finger again, cueing the next message. The image of Sage Deross
    appears, sitting on her bed in her dormitory.

    SAGE
    Hey, Cade. Just wanted to make sure
    you're okay. Call me.

    He flips through several more similar messages, cutting each one off before the
    first word. Finally, he shuts the recorder off. Immediately, it turns itself
    back on, displaying the hooded face of DARTH SIDIOUS.

    SIDIOUS
    Cade Saliere.

    The young Jedi sits upright, curious but not afraid. Through the image of
    Sidious, we see Cade's face.

    SIDIOUS
    I am called Sidious, a disciple of the
    True Force.

    CADE
    "True Force?"

    SIDIOUS
    What those in power call the Dark Side.

    Cade backs away, reaching for his saber.

    SIDIOUS
    Peace, Jedi. No need to show your strength.
    I know it well, as I know whose strength you
    envy. Young Skywalker.

    The young Jedi lowers the unlit saber.

    SIDIOUS
    I offer you friendship, and counsel. I
    can make you a greater man than he will
    ever become.

    Cade's breathing turns heavy.

    EXT. CORUSCANT - SENATE CHAMBER - DAY

    SHIPS of all kinds buzz around the mushroom-shaped building. Alien anchorman GOL
    THE INFORMER fills us in.

    GOL (V.O.)
    The senate has banned all journalists
    from the chamber; however, we suspect
    they may be discussing Jenner Agravaine,
    and how to...

    His voice fades out.

    INT. SENATE CHAMBER - DAY

    Palpatine stands at the Chancellor's podium, presiding over a full house. He
    presses a button, sounding a bell and calling for order. The surrounding
    SENATORS fall silent.

    PALPATINE
    As many of you know, a band of terrorists
    attacked a Jedi gathering last night, killing
    and wounding many of our best defenders. Clearly,
    these were Agravaine's men! How shall we defend
    ourselves?

    VARIOUS SENATORS
    War! War!

    PALPATINE
    Order! The first to speak will be Bail Organa
    of Alderaan.

    BAIL ORGANA, a young man slightly older than Amidala, moves his platform
    forward. Compassionate and rational, he presents his case.

    BAIL
    To those who call for war: Tell us how to fight
    a war against one man! Jenner has no homeworld;
    mine has renounced him. If we chase him, he will
    hide. If we attack where he may be hidden, we
    risk a thousand times the death he deals now.

    Three-eyed delegate AINLEE TEEM speaks up.

    AINLEE TEEM
    What would you do instead? Stand by, and
    await his next attack?

    AMIDALA (O.S.)
    I suggest another way.

    The chamber falls into a hush.

    PALPATINE
    The chair recognizes Senator Amidala of Naboo.

    AMIDALA
    Jenner may flee an armada, but a smaller group
    may take him by surprise. A handful of Jedi
    could track him and bring him to justice, without
    war, and without bloodshed.

    Palpatine raises a brow, impressed.

    PALPATINE
    A novel approach, Senator. What say you?

    BAIL
    I second the motion!

    PALPATINE
    Well spoken! Senators, cast your votes!
     
  2. Darth Geist

    Darth Geist Jedi Master star 5

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    Out of respect for what happened, I'm going to put this on hiatus for a week or two (for the record, I wrote the previous installment the day before the attack).

    MTFBWY
     
  3. Grand_Admiral_Jaxx

    Grand_Admiral_Jaxx Jedi Master star 5

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    I'm seeing an eerie similarity between Agravaine and Bin Laden.

    Good posts... I will be waiting when you get back
     
  4. Grand_Admiral_Jaxx

    Grand_Admiral_Jaxx Jedi Master star 5

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  5. Scarr1106

    Scarr1106 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Looking forward to the next update, Geist. BTW, your sensitivity is appreciated. A lot of us lost friends on 9/11.
     
  6. Darth Geist

    Darth Geist Jedi Master star 5

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    I'll be getting back to work on this soon. In the meantime, I'd like to invite everyone to join the Tournament of Fools, a game where sixteen of the worst films in history battle it out for the title of Worst Movie Ever Made. :D
     
  7. Grand_Admiral_Jaxx

    Grand_Admiral_Jaxx Jedi Master star 5

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  8. Scarr1106

    Scarr1106 Jedi Youngling star 3

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  9. Darth Geist

    Darth Geist Jedi Master star 5

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    I'd like to get back to work on this soon.
     
  10. Scarr1106

    Scarr1106 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Hope you do. I'll be reading!
     
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