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Saga EVEN IN DEATH (From: The Rise of Skywalker)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hopefulwriter, Feb 3, 2020.

  1. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Knight star 2

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    Jan 6, 2016
    Writer: Hopefulwriter
    Rating: G for everyone
    Time Frame: From: The Rise of Skywalker
    Characters: Kylo Ren, Rey


    He was exhausted, panting, rivulets of water streaming down his face. He felt hot from
    exertion…cold in the wet spray.

    Rey was a formidable opponent…could he fight longer….she could fight stronger….
    Both using the force to destroy the other. The waves crashing around them as fierce as their own battle.

    Then…in the near distance…a mirage…or what he thought was a mirage…Han Solo…
    his father…just as he remembered him the last time he saw him….before he killed him.
    He was almost smiling… that endearing, cocky smile that he sometimes used on his mother.

    Ren shook his head and blinked his eyes…it couldn’t be…….

    He watched as his father approached him…closer and closer…..

    Then…..

    His father placed an aged and work callused hand on his cheek…just as he’d done many times when he was a child…Ren stood still…looking into his eyes…each saying nothing.

    Something moved in the heart of Kylo Ren…..he saw love and forgiveness in those eyes.

    Even in death….the power of love was stronger than the dark!
     
    Last edited: Feb 7, 2020
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  2. mavjade

    mavjade It's so FLUFFY! Fanfic Manager star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    Sep 10, 2005
    What a beautiful look at TROS!

    I particularly liked this line:
    I immediately could see that scene in my head as I read it. And the end! If we've learned anything from Star Wars it's that!

    Great story!!
     
  3. amidalachick

    amidalachick Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Aug 3, 2003
    Glad to see another lovely Rise of Skywalker story from you!

    Love this line. You really captured the tenderness and love between father and son in this scene.

    Great work! =D=
     
  4. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Knight star 2

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    Hi Mavjade,
    Appreciate you taking time to read EVEN IN DEATH. Thank you for your comments.
    I love writing SW fan fiction, especially Han and Leia and original characters and have done
    so for 38 years.
    Hope you will enjoy the other stories I've written and posted here if you choose to read them.
    Lynda V.
     
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  5. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Knight star 2

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    Jan 6, 2016
    Hi 'Chick'
    Appreciate you taking time to read EVEN IN DEATH.
    Thank you for your encouraging comments. Lynda V.
     
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  6. academygrad88

    academygrad88 Jedi Master star 5

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    Apr 6, 2004
    Very nice. I liked the Han Solo part of the movie even if it was only in Kylo's mind.
     
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  7. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Knight star 2

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    Hi Grad88, Thank you for taking your time to read.
    Appreciate your comments.
    Hope you will like the other stories I've written and posted
    here if you choose to read them. Lynda V.
     
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  8. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    Jun 14, 2005
    I also read it and was deeply touched by it. @};-
     
  9. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Knight star 2

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    Hi Azure, nice to hear from you. Appreciate you taking time to
    read and comment. Lynda V.
     
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  10. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host Who Loves Fanfics & RPGs star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Aug 31, 2004
    This iline s exquisite!
    Even in death….the power of love was stronger than the dark!
     
  11. Hopefulwriter

    Hopefulwriter Jedi Knight star 2

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    Hi Nyota, thanks for taking the time to read. Always appreciate your
    comments and encouragements. Lynda V.
     
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