Before - Legends Far From Home - from the Qui challenge, cover art added

What a fabulous ending to a wonderful story. I love that Qui-Gon was from Naboo. It just seems to fit somehow. But I really enjoyed that his family always remembered him and though he wasn't with them he was still considered family.

 

Oh, that was such a beautiful story!
I am so glad you extended what you wrote for the challenge thread, and into such a fine piece of work. It was heartbreaking for Amir and Lenora to make that decision and I almost wanted to say "How could you?" But at the same time I wanted to just hug them and thank them for the magnificent sacrifice they made and show them how much Qui-Gon meant to so many.
Fantastically written.

 

Uhhhh... Remember me? Well I'm sorry this is sooooooo late. I was caught up with exams & didn't have time to read the rest. But I finished this story & it was great! Once again I'm sorry this is late. I loved Baby Qui-Gon!

 

DreamOfKenobi That's exactly what I wanted it to be! Thanks

Gina Aw, shucks. Thank you!

mouse2 You never forget a child, no matter how far from home they might be.

kateydidnt Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

LilQui-Gon Glad you're back!


Also, if you liked this please check out a wonderful story featuring these same characters. Written by ithesock you can find it here The Fields of Elysia

 

*sniffle, sniffle*

Oh, that was so beautiful!
Ack! I'm sitting at work with tears in my eyes!
How sad the siblings never met!
Oh!

 

Awww, this was so so good. It reminded me of the farmer branch of my family...

 

By the Force, what a wonderful story!

Your stories are always so enjoyable, I don't know how I missed this one, but I'm glad I had the pleasure of reading a story about the early days of Qui-Gon and how he came to be a Jedi. This was so sweet, I really felt for the characters of Lenora and Amri, they really came across as wonderful people. I bawled my eyes out when they had to give up Qui-Gon, you portrayed the heart ache so well!

and gosh, the ending was so beautiful... He was from Naboo! I really liked that.

This was very but simply and I it.

 

First, thank you to everyone who read this story. Your wonderful reception of it gave me the courage to submit it to the Archives, where it will soon be posted. Second, Gina provided some absolutely gorgeous cover art, please check it out on the first page. Again, thank you!

Jennifer_Lyn Check out Fields of Elysia!

raisedbywolves So glad you liked it!

JOINME Thank you, it was a definite labor of love with this one.

 

Oh my god. I'm sitting here at work with tears in my eyes. Wonderful & heartbreaking. If I was at home I would be a sobby mess.

 

Oh, I really need to go snoop around the back pages some more. That was a lovely beginning for Qui-Gon; you picture such a wonderful family for him! They were very noble to give him up as well.

It would seem like an odd symmetry that both Qui-Gon and Palpatine would come from Naboo, along with Padme. The planet itself would be a bit of a vergence in the Force.

 

Oh, wow. Very, very well done! Especially love the epilouge

 

adawn Thank you for reading!

ardavenport What is that? Is that a plot bunny scampering about? A vergence in the Force?

nickenobi-nz Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.