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"Feels Good To Be Bad." * 12/21*SARGE GETS HIS MAN, QUI GETS OBI***** THE END!!!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by ewen, Nov 26, 2002.

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  1. jedibear30

    jedibear30 Jedi Master star 1

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    great as usual,ewen. looking forward to more soon. glad to see obi getting a "small" break. hopefully, the force will help them out of this mess, since sideous doesn't seem so inclined. gotta go. need to study for and take my online exam. see ya later. only two weeks of shopping left. YAY!!!!
     
  2. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :D perfect as always i can't wait to see how they get out of this!!!!!!!!
     
  3. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    Uh-oh, this is getting worse and worse. :( Poor Grubek, Dooku is going to torture him, probably. :_|
     
  4. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    DRL crept up on me and struck bad. But I am back for a least a few days before things at work get too busy again.

    There were too many posts to reply separately ( luv lot's o posts :) ) so I will just say that it would be nice to see padawan stick up his ... get a taste of reality thanks to dooku [face_devil]
     
  5. jedi7

    jedi7 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Grubek, I have only one thing to say to you, SHUT UP!!!!!! Dooku's really sittin on a powder keg there, all those weapons & such, I have one Xmas wish for him...KABOOM!!!!!! Oily, really is the perfect word for Dooku ewen. :) 7
     
  6. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Dooku is more a oily smelly spinless pig ;)
     
  7. ewen

    ewen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Grubek came back to the cell in no worse shape than when he left.

    He had promised Dooku he would think over the offer to join him. The boy had no desire to link up with anyone on the dark side, but neither did he want to face what Obi-Wan had. So he did a very Unjedi-like thing, he lied. He would not really think it over. He hoped Master Jinn had figured a way out of this mess. A mess he blamed Obi-Wan for because his birth father was the Dark Lord himself.

    He recanted to Master Jinn what Dooku wanted.

    ?We do seem to have a problem. I don think, however, that Master Yoda will suspect something is wrong. I know he expects me to contact him in a day or two and if I don?t, his suspicions will grow. Then of course if he tries to contact me then he will know something is wrong because along with our sabers our other gear was confiscated, including the comm links.?

    Qui-Gon had noticed that Obi-Wan had become more withdrawn as the day drew on. He could sense Obi-Wan disparity and almost dejection through their bond.

    ?What is it that stresses you so much padawan? I mean I know we are in a certain dangerous and precarious situation but what?s that not new for us.?

    Jinn had tried to interject a little humor to coax Obi-Wan out of his melancholy mood. He had spoken the truth though. Obi-Wan and he had been through a lot together and after this round of torment they would again later find themselves in another situation equally as trying.

    ?Nothing master. It?s just that I think that I am the reason we are here.?

    ?Self pity from you, it can?t be. You know Obi-Wan I was his former padawan and Dooku wanted me with him again.?

    ?Yes but master he will use me to turn you. He also hold a grudge for my fat?for Darth Sidious.?

    ?Then we are both pawns in his hand Obi-Wan. If there is blame to be cast then it must jointly fall on both of our shoulders. Do you blame me for this??

    ?Certainly not master. You can?t help it that Dooku was your master and now wants you by his side.?

    ?Just like you can?t not help who your father was. I must emphasis ?was? because I am your father now and I wish more people around here would recognize that for what it is.?

    Obi-Wan could see his master?s point. Qui-Gon could no more blame Obi-Wan for his father than he could for his master having Dooku as a former master.

    Grubek had grown weary of master and apprentice as they tried to console each other.

    ?O.K. now that you two have agreed that none of this is either of your faults. What can we do to get out of this? We are not without the force to aid us in our escape.?

    Jinn looked at Grubek as if he had gone quite insane.

    ?You are absolutely right Padawan Grubek. We have the force and let me assure you that Dooku?s force of the dark side will out do ours anytime. The force of the dark has a way of combating with a more intense vengeance that that of the side of good.?

    ?What is that suppose to mean Master Jinn; the dark side provides more of its self to its evil counterpart??

    ?You have summed it up correctly I think Padawan. Even when Dooku was a Jedi master, he possessed more power through the force than any master other than Master Yoda. Now that he is on the side of the dark force, his power is probably multiplied two-fold. No we will at least have to wait until we see if Master Yoda or Mace send back-up.?

    Grubek thought he would make a smart remark to Master Jinn. He did not like the way the master had handled their capture thus far.

    ?I suppose it doe not matter to me. I mean after all Chancellor has been more than hospitable to me. You might even say he was cordial.?

    Master Jinn saw the smirk on Grubek?s face and knew exactly who those words were for. They were a condemnation of Jinn?s handling of the situation. He meant he didn?t care because he was not the one who would suffer at the hands of Dooku, but instead Obi-Wan would.

    ?There is an old saying handed down from the peasants on my homeworld. It is not used much now but I can think of no better way to say this to you Padawan Grubek;
     
  8. jedi7

    jedi7 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Qui-gon, hope your crazy plan works. Grubek, keep actin up and I'll use some of those Hutt torture techniques on you. :mad: [face_mischief] 7
     
  9. ewen

    ewen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hi Jedi7

    Just thought I would give everyone a head's up on the next post.

    Not sure when I will post.

    Will have to see how much interest this one generated.

    I will say though, you will be in for a very big SURPRIZE!!!!

    You might also say I have been taken over by a bit of the DARK SIDE.

    Not good at all.

    I'll let you guys decide when I should post the next one.

    PEACE ewen
     
  10. JoeyKenobi

    JoeyKenobi Jedi Youngling

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    Good post Ewen. I wonder what Qui-Gon's up to? I would like to see how he plans on stealing the jewels. Hopefully he has a plan, he better he's going to need it.

    Grubek is just a little snot nosed brat of a padawan. I think I'm having darkside thoughts by hoping he gets tortured :)

    JK
     
  11. jedibear30

    jedibear30 Jedi Master star 1

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    got my interest ewen. how much of the darkside possessed you. am i gonna have to come after you with yoda's stick. i will, ya know! lol. great as usual. looking forward to more. gotta go. cleaning bedrooms tonight
     
  12. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    Oh dear. :( Poor Qui. :_| I really hope that his plan works. If not... :_|

    Great post, ewen. :)
     
  13. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OH PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE POST AGAIN TONIGHT I HAVE TO SEE WHATS GOING ON I FEAR YOUR BIG SURPRISE WILL BE QUIGON TURNING TO THE DARKSIDE I JUST FEAR IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AND POOR OBIWANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN :mad: I HATE YOU QUIGON RIGHT NOW I REALLY DO GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!
     
  14. ewen

    ewen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'll post first thing in the morning.

    I don't know though I do have Jedibear30 threatening me with Yoda's gimer stick.

    I might have to go into hiding after posting.

    PEACE ewen
     
  15. PadawanKimberly

    PadawanKimberly Jedi Youngling

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    this is a great story keep it up. i wonder what you plan next, i have a feeling it is going to be good. so keep up the great work.
    ^__^
     
  16. ewen

    ewen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ?Qui-Gon had fifteen men, soldiers as they were, to keep under control. It was reiterated over and over during the trip to Alamar that there was to be no violence, a threat of it, but no weapons would be drawn. He assured the men he would use the force if need be to procure the diamonds, jewels and credits out of the King?s safe and they would be on their way; without a shot of any kind being fired.

    There were complaints and grumbling behind Jinn?s back about an attack made on someone without violence, but the soldiers feared Dooku?s wrath too much to oppose Jinn personally or otherwise. They had been trained to do what they were told and they would do it even it they ended up forfeiting their life for this raid.

    Jinn planned to allow no man on either side to be injured or killed. His plan also included giving the valuables back, once Dooku had been defeated. He had no use for them.

    Qui-Gon had learned that things do not always go as they planned and this mission even though sent on by Dooku did not go as Jinn had hoped it would.

    Jinn was informed that they would make their destination in an hour.

    The Jedi master got up to stretch his legs. He had so much more to think about besides the mission and his son. There were old memories that crept into his mind. Memories of a brother ten years previous, alive and well and celebrating the tenth birthday of his first son. A brother he would never see again.

    I think that is why Dooku sent me to this particular planet to rob the King. I bet he was surprised when he could elicit a rise out of me when he spoke the name of the planet Alamar. Does he think this some kind of test? That I would hold a grudge, exact revenge on another, and turn to the side of the dark so easily is absurd. I admit I have no love loss for this King. I know very well he is to blame, but?..

    Jinn?s attention was drawn back to the men of the ship?s bridge making ready for their departure and attack on King?s Fa-Reen?s palace. He reached for the force. He needed reassurance that he would not betray it and the Jedi during this mission.

    Their entrance was made easy with Jedi mind control. Once inside the men under?s Qui-Gon?s orders entered the main quarters of King Fa-Reen himself. He had at least twenty guards by his side, each with weapons aimed at Jinn and "his? men.

    ?Seems we are at an impasse gentlemen. Does anyone care to be the first to hand over their weapons??

    Jinn tried to be calm and reserved as he spoke. However his stomach was doing what Obi-Wan?s did in times of stress, churning butterflies.This was the first time in his life he had done anything against the law or the Jedi code.

    King Fa-Reen spoke next.

    ?I think you should call off this attack. Who are you? You wear the attire of a Jedi.?

    One of the soldiers offered more information than he should have.

    ?He is. This is Master Qui-Gon Jinn of the temple Coruscant.?

    ?Enough!?

    Jinn did not want his name batted around the room, especially since in was in a middle of a very serious crime.

    ?Let?s get what we came for and be out of here. If done calmly King Fa-Reen, no harm will come to anyone.?

    ?You think I plan to tell my royal guards to stand down and let you take all my treasures??

    ?Treasures taken from your people are they not; gotten by you the same way they will be gotten by me. Better we have them than you. Justice will at least be more equal will it not if we steal what you have stolen??


    Jinn knew this man to be corrupt and evil to his soul. He would never have robbed the king, but he wanted him to know what he was. Jinn was only role playing but since he was not acting for the Jedi he took advantage of the situation to tell the king what he thought of him. He was beefing up his acting talents by speaking what he felt was the truth. He had to admit he felt a certain power over this man; an evil power that he had never felt before and it was not uncomfortable or distasteful to feel it, as he thought it would be.

    Maybe this is how the guard that killed my bro
     
  17. jedibear30

    jedibear30 Jedi Master star 1

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    i can't believe you did that! you are lucky i am going to bed now or i would hit you with that stick. lol. it was a good post, but i hope you have a good reason for touching the darkside tonight. i like angst and all, but not this much. well, gotta go for now. busy day at work tomorrow. wal-mart broke sales records last friday and we are trying to keep it up. made 1.43 billion dollars in one day. looking forward to more. bye
     
  18. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    That was truly evil.
     
  19. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    You are far too evil, ewen. Far too evil. :_|

    What happens to them now? ?[face_plain]
     
  20. PadawanKimberly

    PadawanKimberly Jedi Youngling

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    This is good. keep it up. so update again soon and good job so far this is a good story.
     
  21. ewen

    ewen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I told you I felt a little evil.

    Someone is missing here Linari_Tanis where are you?

    I will have a post up later today.

    Blame it on Jedibear30. I have to keep looking over my shoulder as I write because of her continued threat to use a saber on me.

    I might wind up like the King, missing my head.

    PEACE ewen
     
  22. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey i was missing too hehehe, that post was most evil and i really hope quigon doesn't get the same judge obiwan did or we can basicly say for sure quigon will never see obiwan again!!!!!! :_| Pleasee say i'm wrong, pleaseee say quigon wont go to jail PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
    :_|
     
  23. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh and if u do make quigon go to jail i may just have to come after you with my pet sith and his saber ;) [face_laugh]
     
  24. jedi7

    jedi7 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Qui-gon doesn't seem guilty, but you sure left me wondering...and it seems as though the King was tipped off that they were coming. Poor Obi-wan, what a lousy week, and Grubek... well Yoda, I would have hit him anyway. Post soon!!!, before the dark overtakes us ewen :D 7
     
  25. ewen

    ewen Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Master Windu, Yoda, and Qui-Gon talked and decided that Obi-Wan would stay with Master Yoda while Qui-Gon was held for suspicion of murder. Obi-Wan still continued to voice his opposition to his father?s arrest.

    The ?Sarge? came down and talked with Master Jinn for that was where he was taken, to the city jail. The ?Sarge? having grown to like and admire Master Jinn did not believe for a second that Jinn was guilty of mass murder. He told Jinn how Obi-Wan?s investigation was going. He told him that there were a couple of kids at the party who had since come forward and told that Obi-Wan had not threatened anyone at the party. The opposite was true according to them. He had been very careful when showing his saber.

    While Qui-Gon was pleased the ?Sarge? had made some headway in Obi?s case, he now worried about how to prove his own innocence now that he was incarcerated.

    ??Listen Jinn if I could be of help in your investigation by your Jedi friends I will make myself available to them anytime day or night. Even if I do have to travel to Alamar with them.?

    ?Thank You for your offer. I will pass it along. I think that Master Yoda and Master Windu, two of my closest friends, plan to travel there in a day or two. I will tell have to them contact you before they go. Also I would like to thank you for investigating Obi-Wan?s case. It means a lot to me.?

    ?Well I always like to get my man in a criminal case. I just like to make sure it?s the ?right? man I get. The same goes for you know, so I will looking for that call from your friends. ?

    It had been a week since Qui-Gon was arrested. He missed seeing Obi-Wan. Face it, Qui-Gon missed everything about his life; the life he had before this happened.

    I wish I could have been more up front with Master Yoda and Obi-Wan for that matter. I just can?t open the bond, not yet. I hope Obi-Wan will understand. I know he needs me right now. However he has Mace and Yoda to comfort him.

    The preliminary hearing for Master Jinn would be tomorrow.

    ####the next morning####

    As luck would have it when he walked into the court Qui-Gon found he had the same judge Obi-Wan had. If memory served Qui-Gon right, this judge did not particularly care for the Jedi.

    One thing did brighten his day. In the court room between Mace and Yoda sat Obi-Wan. The ?Sarge? had hired a friend to be the attorney for his new friend, Qui-Gon. He didn?t have to hire him. The man was a close friend to him and he was doing the work pro bono which meant the Jedi would not have to pay the enormous amount of money to secure an attorney; money the Jedi temple could not have afforded anyway.

    A low moan could be heard throughout the courtroom from several of the masters and Jinn?s friends who had come to the hearing. The first day the courts could even think of starting Jinn?s trial was six weeks away.

    The judge wanted to say a few things.

    ?Master Jinn you are lucky to get a court date as quickly as you have. I hope that you know you will not be released on bond. You will have to stay in jail until after your hearing, unless you are found guilty of course. Maybe you are the reason for Padawan Kenobi?s lack of respect for the law.?

    Jinn did not like the remark but he just cocked one eyebrow up and look sneeringily at the judge before him. He was then led out of the courtroom still in manacles and a force collar.

    Mace followed Jinn back to the holding cell. Yoda was to go back to the temple. Obi-Wan who was not allowed to talk to Qui-Gon or worse yet make any physical contact, followed Master Windu. He would go home with Master Windu when he left. Mace told Obi-Wan to wait beside the main doors of the holding cell of the city courts while he went over to talk with Master Jinn.

    Obi-Wan strained to listen. Evidently Mace thought he was far enough away from where Obi-Wan stood that the conversation could not be heard , but that was not the case. Although he could not here everything, Obi-Wan listened carefully so he could make out the bits and pieces.

     
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