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Beyond - Legends Fighting in the Shadows - What's in a Name? challenge submission - Luke/Mara

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Nov 30, 2004.

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  1. Senator_Leia73

    Senator_Leia73 Jedi Master star 4

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    LOL I loved it! It was really sweet. I could see them saying every word. The characterization was perfect. :D
     
  2. LukesTheMan

    LukesTheMan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Perfect! You did a great job of capturing Luke and Mara. :D
     
  3. Jedi-Tiger-Lilly

    Jedi-Tiger-Lilly Jedi Youngling star 1

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    =D= I could really hear Luke and Mara saying everything here. And the ending was priceless! =D=
     
  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host Who Loves Fanfics & RPGs star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Loved the dialogue--it was perfect! Also got a kick out of the fact that Mara was ticklish and that "sparks" could still ignite after such a long, harrowing night.[face_laugh] @};-
     
  5. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Community Squirrel Whisperer star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Ohhh, how sweet. Loved Mara's observations oabout how baby's are so exhausting and just when you want to chuck them out a window they smile.... that brings back some wonderful memories of my own. Thanks. :D :D
     
  6. MirandaFair

    MirandaFair Jedi Master star 4

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    ?You have no clue how many times you?ve been in imminent danger of taking an unscheduled flight,? she said dryly.

    Aww...that's such a great line. You nailed Mara and Luke's characterization. Really enjoyed this and it was just right...not over the edge in sentiment and sugar. That's always a hard balance and you accomplished it in leaps and bounds.

    Enjoyed this, thanks![face_dancing]
     
  7. JediJainaSoloFel

    JediJainaSoloFel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That viggie was amazing! I was seriously smiling all the time. You know, when I first read about Luke and Mara being parents, I thought that it was going to be very interesting. I was disappointed that we got to see so little of it in the NJO. This was a great insight into what it's like being a new parent (something you would know about;))

    Bravo!=D=
     
  8. cheersweetie27

    cheersweetie27 Jedi Master star 3

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    Awww, that was sweet. I liked how Mara was worried that she wasn't a good mother. I think that is something every parent thinks for a moment at the beginning. Nice work.
     
  9. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm WAY behind on some author's comments. [face_blush] Oops!

    Senator_Leia73 Thank you! :D

    LukesTheMan
    Glad you liked it. :)

    Jedi-Tiger-Lilly Thanks for reading! [:D]

    Jade_eyes When you've got chemistry... ;)

    Healer_Leona Kids are cute for a reason, it's a survival technique! :p

    MirandaFair They ARE tough to write, glad you think I did them justice! [face_mischief]

    JediJainaSoloFel The EU hasn't let us see much of them parenting a younger Ben. :(

    cheersweetie27 I experience it at least once a week. [face_shhh]
     
  10. verybusy

    verybusy Jedi Knight star 2

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    Thanks for moving this up and into my view totay. This was exactly what I needed during a 1 1/2 hours audio conference. :)

    I really loved it.

    VeryBusy
     
  11. TnTornado

    TnTornado Jedi Knight star 3

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    Jun 10, 2006
    Great fic MammaVader, loved it - I'm gonna hafta go look at some of your older ones!

    TnTornado
     
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