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Saga - PT Fractured Ties A/P for the Mini-Games Challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Mar 23, 2020.

  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host Who Loves Fanfics & RPGs star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Note: This is for Idiot's Array Sabacc Card Challenge
    #4:
    "Satellite implying "a lot of fairly nasty things...deception, deceit, betrayal.
    Characters: A/P

    Thank you @Raissa Baiard for this fascinating challenge
    And thanks to @devilinthedetails for the lovely, lingering imagery of shimmersilk
    @};-

    ~

    Their love is poised on a precipice of secrecy - of impossible denials and heart-breaking choices, as Anakin must continually bid the love of his life goodbye, never knowing if or whether he will see her again.

    The resentment he feels towards the Jedi for forcing this silence of something so lovely, so treasured, burns inside, and the fact that he has those feelings must also be denied.

    He channels it into fierce and reckless actions during the confrontations with the Seppies.

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    Padme feels like their love is as gossamer-fine and fragile as shimmersilk, easily torn and because of that, it must be cared for tenderly and preserved at all costs against the ravages of circumstance and war.

    She hates that Anakin must leave, that she cannot proudly proclaim to stranger and friend alike, "I'm a woman in love!"


    The fact that all this is seen by a malevolent and hidden schemer sets them all up for the bitterest betrayal - as they are maneuvered into playing right into his hands.

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    :eek:
     
  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    touching and they had no way out to prevent disaster
     
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  3. devilinthedetails

    devilinthedetails Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    This was very beautifully and poetically written! A lovely A/P work, thank you for sharing!
     
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  4. amidalachick

    amidalachick Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    This was so bittersweet, but also beautiful and poetic as @devilinthedetails said! Anakin/Padmé will always hold a special place in my heart. Beautiful work. [face_love]
     
  5. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host Who Loves Fanfics & RPGs star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Thanks everyone. @};- This prompt seemed to match their situation perfectly. [face_thinking]
     
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  6. hitokiri-black

    hitokiri-black Jedi Master star 1

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    Aug 8, 2005
    So lovely. Really speaks of Anakin's growing frustrations. And Padme is caught between being proud of their love and knowing that it will always be difficult. Very poetic.
     
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