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Before - Legends Gate-way to Infinity (poetry?some angst)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by mujapple-juicey, Mar 10, 2009.

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  1. mujapple-juicey

    mujapple-juicey Jedi Master star 4

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    Passing, leaving.

    That's what they always do.

    That's what they never notice.

    That's something they'll never remember.

    That's one thing they'll never regret.

    And that's that.





    edit: isn't it weird how this is the 50th post in this thread and it's also my 1234th post!
     
  2. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    *pauses and goes to profile to look...* Um... 4158. (And... possibly funny-weird? And that can be the best kind.)

    Now, then, on to post.

    Passing over, passing on is an interesting theme this post... who was doing the passing thru?

    And yay for for small milestones! [:D]
     
  3. mujapple-juicey

    mujapple-juicey Jedi Master star 4

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    Abandonment
    Never abandons
    The abandoned.

    (say that ten times fast :p )


    What will happen
    When trust shatters
    Beyond recognition
    And when nieghbour
    Turns on neighbour
    And when words
    Become a liar's tools
    And when truth
    Does too?


    ~~~~~~
    guess those are a subspecies of mini-poem :p
     
  4. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Yep... there totally is.


    For some reason, I'm reminded of Palpatine here...
     
  5. mujapple-juicey

    mujapple-juicey Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm assuming it's the word "tools" that jiggled the thought :)



    If every star collapses in its glory
    If doors to freedom slam shut
    If the sky shatters before your eyes
    If the gap becomes more than a black hole
    If mercy starts to lie
    If every form of love becomes denial
    If wishing wells dry up
    If the wind is silenced
    If every thread were cut
    If birds become wingless
    If trees shed poisoned leaves
    If there were nothing but light to blind us all
    If darkness can't be bothered to relieve the chaos
    If truth refuses to forgive any liar
    If lies laugh at truth
    If dreams slip through battered sewers
    If the ice forces open abysses in the roads
    If hopes' legs are knocked from under them
    If life dies a slow death
    If all is silent like a blink of an eye
    If future starves to death
    If the past turns its back on you
    If the present is everything
    If the present is nothing
    If everything were nothing
    What would be left?


    ~~~~~~

    just an apocalyptic confession from niece... her mind is a mystery I don't wish to solve...
     
  6. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    'tools'? *reads again...* No. Not exactly. It was the overall tone of lies and shadows causing mistrust.

    And this one. Woah... I like the doom, doom, doom of missing that for every door closed and every bleakness displayed, somewhere, there is an open window that someone has forgotten about where hope can enter in.
     
  7. mujapple-juicey

    mujapple-juicey Jedi Master star 4

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    DaenaBenjen: doors... windows... oh look another plot/muse bunny to work on....


    UPDATE:

    A dream is the color of glass
    And in that dream, you follow a path
    A path paved by only a wanderer's steps
    That doesn't exist until it's walked

    A dream is the color of fear
    And if you trace that fear to silence
    Silence broken by a shutting door behind you
    But you know there is no one and nothing there

    A dream is the color of life
    As a maze encrypts itself around you
    There is no path out, nor in, nor at all
    As the maze's name is life

    A dream is the color of hope
    Hope, that a saviour might come along
    Hope, that a dream within a dream?
    ?a hope within a hope, might be fulfilled.

    A dream is the color of light
    With hope answered, and a saviour beheld
    A lit trail to the future, for you and not you alone
    As the saviour is a host, and you the parasite

    A dream is the color of time
    You, the parasite, takes, and takes to the end
    Not the end of time, but that of trust
    And when trust fails, betrayals succeed

    A dream is the color of time
    Time, in abandonment, you and you alone
    There are countless abandoned, yet all are still alone
    Waiting, waiting to the end of both trust and time

    ~~~~~~

    By no means do I implicate that anyone is running around in the Twilight Zone. :p
     
  8. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Oh, I don't know... sometimes it FEELS like I'm walking around in the twilight zone... ;)
     
  9. mujapple-juicey

    mujapple-juicey Jedi Master star 4

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    DaenaBenjen: Ah, don't we all ;)


    The sky is grey.
    The snow was white.
    The blood is red.

    But colours blur,
    And colours fade.
    So all is black.

    The wind is loud.
    The memories are louder.
    The silence is loudest.

    But music staggers,
    And music fades.
    So all is quiet.

    Blank is black.
    Blank is quiet.
    Blank is the end.
     
  10. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Interesting... aftermath of battle? (And even though it fades to black, that still is not the end!!!!)
     
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