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Before - Legends Halcyon, Horn, Keana case 1 Olympics triathlon

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jun 10, 2023.

  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    Halcyon, Horn, Keana case 1 Olympics triathlon
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: 166 BBY

    Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to Lucasfilm and Lucasfilm belongs to Disney.

    Characters
    Tarhin Engaron, 324 Dunai elder, CorSec instructor
    Jake Keana, 29, human, CorSec lieutenant
    Zeno Horn, 23, human, CorSec soldier
    Han Halcyon, 55, human, Corellian Jedi
    Elmar Halcyon, 23, human, Corellian Jedi



    Single Sentence Shot Put: A story told in a single sentence about your character, family, friendship or couple.

    My stay at the Jedi-temple was exciting but I think you will need my expertise to solve this gang-war and I have this lightsaber to aid us.
     
  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Host: Finish the story, Anagrams & Scattegories. star 8 VIP - Game Host

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    Great start to learning more about these characters and their interactions.
     
  3. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    and more about them in the next part


    Tennis Match: Write a story of 100 or more words that is dialogue-only to create a true volley of words.

    “I know Elmar and the lightsaber you have built is perfect for a Corellian Jedi of the Halcyon family.”

    “Do you own one too Han?”

    “Yes, and I know that your grandfather did have a lightsaber when he came back to Corellia.”

    “Jarin Keana. Luka didn't follow in his footsteps and I neither.”

    “But you joined CorSec. The first Keana to do this, Jake.”

    “And like you Zeno, I had Tarhin as my instructor.”

    “We have a case of fighting gang-members in the Sothi district to untangle. Horn, Keana and Halcyons follow me. It will be simple with two trained Jedi-knights.”

    “And a very old instructor.”

    “I am not old.”

    “For us you are but we don't care what your species is.”

    “No worries Tarhin. I had to learn all about the missions from Stellan Gios, Avar Kriss and Elzar Mann but they were from long ago.”

    “Let's go.”

    “Can I pilot the airspeeder?”

    “You can Elmar.”
     
  4. pronker

    pronker Force Ghost star 4

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    It's not easy being a pioneer, and the volleyer knows this. Good support.
     
  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    And he will have all the support from his colleagues in this

    400 Word Cross Country: Exactly 400 words about your character, couple, family or friendship with any theme.

    “Pittin pup, did they teach you this on Coruscant?” Jake Keana is in one of the back passenger seats and holding on.

    “Pitin pup. You are a pitin pup lieutenant Keana. You did some reckless driving too when I was with you. But yes my son is. Elmar there.” Han Halcyon knows it when he sees it approaching the Sothi district and going to the place where flashes are seen and heard.

    “They sure are at it.” Jake grumbles. “The rivalry between the Solla and Gorando has come to a climax and the battle-ground is chosen by that Solla scum with the main building – a big factory – being owned by the Gorando.”

    “Departing airspeeder now. Take the controls Tarhin.”

    “Reckless youth.” Tarhin does by grabbing the yoke and sliding it to the right when Elmar activates his lightsaber and jumps down.

    “I know.” Han Halcyon follows his son.

    “And reckless dad.” Tarhin has to compensate for the loss of two persons in the airspeeder and is searching for a safe place to land.

    The two Corellian Jedi are soon busy diverting the particle slugs and blaster discharges to do no harm.

    “And we have a few tricks too.” Jake Keana crawls over to the front-seat and activates the smoke bombs.

    They drop down.

    “But Elmar and Han.”

    “Corellian Jedi are trained to deal with situations like this.” Zeno sees a safe place on another building that is slightly higher. “Get us down on that building. Jake will create another diversion with his smoke-bombs.”

    “How are we going to get there?” Tarhin has landed the airspeeder in a flurry of smoke.

    “Using this.” Zeno gets a hoverboard from the trunk, hops on it and flies into the smoke.

    “We don't have the Force.” Jake shrugs with his shoulders. “And with Zeno taking that hoverboard we are stranded.”

    “Not at all.” Tarhin activates the controls and begins to hover over the remaining gangmembers.

    It doesn't take long before Solla and Gorando members are lying side by side on the roof guarded by Zeno, Elmar and Han.

    “And now Coronet city police to arrest and process them.” Jake contacts dispatch.



    “Lightsabers made the difference.” Elmar smiles when he boards the airspeeder as the last one.

    “Case solved.” Zeno grins. “Take us back Tarhin.”

    “Okidoki.”
     
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  6. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Host: Finish the story, Anagrams & Scattegories. star 8 VIP - Game Host

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    Nice wrap up to the mission
     
  7. pronker

    pronker Force Ghost star 4

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    Marvelous action scene!
    That's a skill in itself, adjusting the speeder's balance.

    Excellent and so resourceful, nice use of the cross country prompt because they sure must have traveled an impressive distance in the action.
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    thank you
    action for Tarhin, just like he is used to and will be after his return to Moniron
     
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