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Before - Legends Halcyon, Horn, Keana case 2 Olympics triathlon

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jun 11, 2023.

  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    Halcyon, Horn, Keana case 2 Olympics triathlon
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: 133 BBY

    Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to Lucasfilm and Lucasfilm belongs to Disney.

    characters
    Rick Horn, 26, CorSec agent
    Cor Halcyon, 22, Corellian Jedi
    Jaco Keana, 22, CorSec agent

    Single Sentence Shot Put: A story told in a single sentence about your character, family, friendship or couple.

    “My father was called a pitin pup by his dad but I can prove that I am an excellent pilot to get us to the Azurro nightclub where that man is killed and maybe we will catch the killer.”
     
  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Nice segue into the actual sleuthing.
     
  3. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    what follows is a tennis match with of course arguments about flying

    Tennis Match: Write a story of 100 or more words that is dialogue-only to create a true volley of words.

    “Alright Cor. You are the pilot and no jumping down before I can take the controls.”

    “My father Elmar was famous for it and he copied it from his father Han.”

    “Stay at the controls this time. It's a simple flight to Treasure ship row.”

    “We have Coronet city police waiting for us.”

    “Alright you two. Get seated.”

    “And we have arrived. Come with me.”

    “I think he knows who did this.”

    “Are you sure?”

    “He is a Corellian Jedi.”

    “That girl?”

    “Or that one. We will see. Cor has to observe the victim first.”

    “The cops will keep all the members of the nightclub here. No worries about escaping suspects.”

    “Sheesh what a mess.”
     
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  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Host: Finish the story, Anagrams & Scattegories. star 8 VIP - Game Host

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    Great blend of banter followed by details on the case.
     
  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    and now ending with solving the case


    100 Word Sprint: A 100 word drabble about your character, family, friendship or couple using any theme

    “He sure has had a party before the murderer got him.” Jaco Keana observes the room with the victim surrounded by various pieces of underwear, empty bottles and remains of delicacies.

    “An easy case for us.” Cor Halcyon reaches out for the victim and closes his eyes. “I know who did this. We saw her.”

    “A Jedi makes the difference.” Rick Horn follows with Jaco to the main room where a girl is sipping from a glass of ale.

    “Caught you.” Cor grabs her right hand in a grip and holds his activated lightsaber before her face.
     
  6. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    I love seeing these more local-style examples of CorSec. It's like enjoying Spider-man in Queens instead of the Avengers in outer space. Same awesomeness, different stakes.
     
  7. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Host: Finish the story, Anagrams & Scattegories. star 8 VIP - Game Host

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    Awesome. =D= She never saw that coming.
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 7

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    It is great to write about Corellians
    No, with a Corellia Jedi working at CorSec;)