Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by Hazel, Jan 4, 2013.
Aww, Max is so good for her here. I can't wait for the memorial. And the final chapter.
Max is always good for an adventure seems like. And good at getting Claire out of a funk.
That does sound like a fun adventure. If you are immortal can't you just walk around on the ocean floor and look for Atlantis?
I think Connor does something like that on the movie, but it wasn't on great depth. I'm not sure how it would work the deep ocean. The pressure might cause them to black out, not to mention the bad visibility and the fact that there is a whole lot of ocean to search in.
I love that Max just barges in and starts messing with her stuff I hop the memorial goes well! I think Claire should go adventuring with Max
Bravo! Beautiful and moving close. Thank you for sharing Claire's eventful history with us all.
Oh, but this was the perfect way to wrap it up! There was a wonderful sense of closure here, of peace - not of a goodbye, but a new page turned. I hope her and Max's search goes well, in more ways than one, that's for sure.
This was the perfect place to wrap this together. Thank-you so much for sharing Claire's story with us.
Nice wrap up. There is an ending and then the start of a new future. Great job!
That is so beautiful! My favorite entry of them all, and a fabulous way to end the diary. I was planning to quote my favorite line, but I can't even pick one! I love knowing that Claire is happy and at peace, even with Darius gone. And the hints (well, more than honts ) that it may work out with Max this time thrilled me!
I would LOVE to see more stories about Claire from you!!!