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How to write evil (Getting inside the mind of your villain. Also home of the villain's database.)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by Spike2002, May 11, 2003.

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  1. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Name: Sza'cun'bula
    Weapon(s) of choice: Negative Race Defence Army Trooper bodyguard
    Vehicle(s) of choice: Negative Race Battleship
    Species: Negative Race Controller species
    Homeworld: Negative Race breeder world #325, Galaxy 2135
    Hair: None
    Eyes: Red
    Rank: High Controller
    Most related quotes: "This galaxy will fall, I promise it!"
    Distinguishing features: His ruthless streak
    Bio: As all of his species, he was born in a breeding facility in a faraway galaxy from his species home. Shortly before the Yuuzhan Vong arrived, Controller Sza'cun'bula was sent to the GFFA to scout it for an invasion by his species. Causing small amounts of havoc between the opposing Republic and Yuuzhan Vong forces, he completed his mission shortly after the war ended and was sent back to the staging point at the Yuuzhan Vong galaxy, which his species had conquered a millennia earlier. With the foiling of the invasion by a Jedi/Yuuzhan Vong alliance, Sza fled back to his Home Galaxy, where he beseeched his rulers to give him more forces to invade the GFFA.
    Story(ies) appeared in: The New Invasion and The Beginning of the End
     
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    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Name: K'r'vthh Tr'vth
    Weapon(s) of choice: Plasma blaster
    Vehicle(s) of choice: N'Rall Cleansing-class Battleship
    Species: N'Rall, (then mutant variant)
    Homeworld: Koveckt
    Hair: Dark grey
    Eyes: Pupiless red, (then altered to purple)
    Rank: Commander, (then advanced to Holy Emperor)
    Most related quotes: "Your imperialistic attempts to destroy the N'Rall have failed!"
    Distinguishing features: The antennae on his scalp, not a feature in normal N'Rall
    Bio: An N'Rall, a violent species from Wild Space, K'r'vthh Tr'vth was a normal member of his species, with a taste for human females, especially ones who were his slaves. While on a raiding mission, he and his crew were captured by unknown extragalactic aliens and biogenically altered into mutants that would do their bidding. K'r'vthh Tr'vth, as the captain of the captured ship, became the leader of the mutants. Having no choice but to obey his new masters, he started causing havoc among the Southern Outer Rim, attracting the attention of the Jedi and the Galactic State. In a bloody coup, he gained control of his entire species, and soon enough the N'Rall Imperium and the Galactic Federation of Free Alliances was at war.
    Story(ies) appeared in: The Beginning of the End
     
  3. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Name: Vua Carr
    Weapon(s) of choice: Nang hul krula, (a bug launcher, similar to a portable E-web cannon), amphistaffs, blorash jelly.
    Vehicle(s) of choice: Yuuzhan Vong worldship
    Species: Yuuzhan Vong
    Homeworld: Yuuzhan Vong worldship, Domain Carr
    Hair: None
    Eyes: Black
    Rank: nuun (Elite warrior)
    Most related quotes: "Infidel!"
    Distinguishing features: Tendency to snarl a lot.
    Bio: A veteran of the war between the Yuuzhan Vong and the Republic/Galactic Alliance, Vua Carr was a traditional Yuuzhan Vong warrior who was offered amnesty in exchange for swearing loyalty to Yu'Shaa. Becoming a part of Yu'Shaa's elite strike force, Vua was sent to Coruscant with the rest of his team to ally with the Jedi to defend against the attacks from the Negative Race advance force. Holding the Jedi in extreme contempt, Vua Carr performed well in battle, killing over a dozen enemy troopers in hand to hand combat, no easy task, even for a Yuuzhan Vong, but eventually his hatred for the Jedi and the Force overcame him, and he betrayed his team to hunt down the force users once allied with him.
    Story(ies) appeared in: The New Invasion
     
  4. Calandria

    Calandria Jedi Padawan star 4

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  5. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I read and commented.
     
  6. SpeldoriontheBlended

    SpeldoriontheBlended Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oooh. Sugar Trip rules!

    EDIT: Spike, did you manage to speak to Kit', or shall I just PM her?
     
  7. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I talked to her on MSN, but she went away :(
    I'll catch up with her sooner than later.
     
  8. Kit'

    Kit' Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Sorry Spike, I have a bad habit of wandering away from my computer during the midst of a conversation because something else catches my attention.... [face_blush]


    If it goes ahead (and I want to talk to Am first) then I'd rather it didn't during the current awards. There was some discussion a couple of years ago about not having a bunch of small awards as well as one big one - but we'll see what happens.

    Kithera :)
     
  9. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I have a bad habit of wandering away from my computer during the midst of a conversation because something else catches my attention....

    *sniff* :_| Am I that boring? ;)
     
  10. SpeldoriontheBlended

    SpeldoriontheBlended Jedi Padawan star 4

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  11. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Kit...honey...we're still waiting here :p
     
  12. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Name: Xcelcior Melgrot
    Weapon(s) of choice: Black-bladed lightsaber, Force lightning
    Vehicle(s) of choice : The Bleak Omen
    Species: Human (originally but varies)
    Homeworld: Falcrin
    Hair: None (varies)
    Eyes: Black (varies)
    Rank: Dark Jedi, Master
    Most related quotes: (Can I get back to you?)
    Distinguishing features: The tattoo at the center of his forehead, his eyes (but again, varies)
    Bio: Born 370 years before TPM, descendant of Avernus Starkiller, son of Valstrid Melgrot. Finds the secret of near immortality. Too many spoilers.
    Story(ies) appeared in: The Legend of Black Saber, The Sith Mandate, The Heir of Starkiller

    EDIT: Popping the eyes back in!
     
  13. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    And he's one helluva villain too!
     
  14. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Why, thanks, Spike, but I've got fix the profile. His eyes popped out.
     
  15. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Looking forward to seeing more of your villains on here :)
     
  16. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I should hope so, I've got four more that I'll be putting up within the next few minutes. Do you think I should make some profiles for my minor villains as well, like Joparan of Oxine and Count T'zarn and the like?
     
  17. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Name: V?l-slech
    Weapon(s) of choice : lightsaber, his charming seductive personality
    Vehicle(s) of choice : The Searing Blade
    Species: half-human/half-Rosk
    Homeworld: Born on Tenlaw, lived mainly on Coruscant
    Hair : Black
    Eyes: Red
    Rank: Once a Jedi Knight, but always more of a Dark Jedi than anything else
    Most related quotes: (Can I get back to you on that?)
    Distinguishable features His extremely pallid Rosk flesh and his red eyes
    Bio: Born 185 years before TPM to H?r-anna, the Rosk woman Xcelcior Melgrot had rights to. H?r-anna gave V?l-slech to the Jedi Order in the hopes that his father?s tainted blood could be counteracted; this didn?t work. V?l-slech had enough of his father in him that he was able to commit wrongs without the other Jedi knowing that any trespass had been committed. Left the Order at 45 standard years of age.
    Story(ies) appeared in : The Sith Mandate
     
  18. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Name: Darth Magnor
    Weapon(s) of Choice: lightsaber, Force chokehold
    Vehicle(s) of Choice: The Filth Slayer
    Species: Human
    Homeworld: Coruscant
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Black
    Rank: Sith Apprentice
    Most related quotes: (Can I get back to you on that?)
    Distinguishable features: His scars, most of which inflicted by his Master
    Bio: Born 160 years before TPM to Senator Isaan Branstock and his wife Velenry Branstock, and had a twin sister, Maythga, who was only very slightly Force-sensitive. A Sith Master named Malisk murdered Isaan and Velenry in order to open her path to the child Magnor. At the age of twenty the Sith apprentice is commanded to kill off the last of Avernus Starkiller?s heirs.
    Story(ies) appeared in: The Sith Mandate
     
  19. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Name: Darth Malisk
    Weapon(s) of Choice: Force blistering
    Vehicle(s) of Choice: N/A
    Species: Human
    Homeworld: resides on Coruscant
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Gray
    Rank: Sith Master
    Most related quotes: (Can I get back to you on that?)
    Distinguishable features: Her waist-length hair and her piercing eyes
    Bio: Complex, but I?ll try not to add too much about past and future lives. Sith Mandate life: Born 190 years before TPM. Begins Sith training at age 14 under Darth Varian. Begins recalling past life as Drusylline Malisk, which occurred a thousand years before. By age 30 she has replaced Varian as Sith Master, and she finds young Magnor as an apprentice.
    Story(ies) appeared in: The Sith Mandate (Other lives: The Heir of Starkiller and The Resurgent Destroyer)
     
  20. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Name: Avernus Starkiller
    Weapon(s) of Choice: black-bladed lightsaber, Force lightning, seductive personality
    Vehicle(s) of Choice: The Executioner
    Species: Human
    Homeworld: Falcrin
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Black
    Rank: Jedi Knight, Sith, Dark Jedi
    Most related quotes: (You know the drill)
    Distinguishable features: his regal face and his intense eyes
    Bio: Born over a 1200 years before TPM, raised as a Jedi and turned to the Dark Side. Was a Sith for a time, then left the Order vowing that he would create his own Dynasty and that he his descendants would do away with every Jedi and Sith. Creates the seven original black-bladed lightsabers, occupies Mersigh, and so on.
    Story(ies) appeared in: The Sith Mandate and (if you want to throw out most of what I just told you) The Resurgent Destroyer
     
  21. Calandria

    Calandria Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Your villans look more like villans than my villans ever do! I find it sooo hard to write down right evil characters. I always end up making them like Sugar Trip. Kinda likeable.

    Problem is, the next villane coming up in my story can't be really likeable. He'll be something like a Dark Jedi Master and that's about all I've figured out so far.

    Oh, well, I'll just keep trying...
     
  22. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    TW, put your minor villains on. I did.
     
  23. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks Calandria. Actually the only way I can do it is because I'm just twisted [face_devil] :cool: ;) Anyway if you need any kind of help or advice from my twistedness, feel free to ask.
     
  24. SpeldoriontheBlended

    SpeldoriontheBlended Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oooh. You're making a Sithy thingie? Is that for a new fic? Oooh! Sith rule. :D
     
  25. tatooinewizard

    tatooinewizard Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Speldorion: Well, it's Dark Jedi versus Sith, with very few good characters. It's in progress now in the Before the Saga board. I'll edit the link in a few minutes if you'd like to check it out. By the way I know it says 111 posts, but don't be intimidated by the size. There's only about six writing posts in all of that so far.
     
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