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Before - Legends I, Obi-Wan - Diary Challenge Entry - updated 5/27

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Jan 3, 2009.

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  1. jedidas3

    jedidas3 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Well done...You've done a tremendous job of capturing the inner struggle of Obi-Wan as a Padawan. His turmoil leaps off the page.

    Great job!
     
  2. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Despite being 900 years old, Yoda can be pretty smart sometimes ;)
     
  3. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Yoda is smart but maybe if he wasn't so cryptic it wouldn't take Obi-Wan so long to figure out what is right or wrong.[face_laugh]

    Nice one=D=
     
  4. EGKenobi

    EGKenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    Great diary.

    Can I be on the PM list for this one please?

    Thanks
     
  5. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jade_eyes Wise, the little troll is! :p

    Corellian_Ale I keep trying to tell my kids the same thing, but they aren't convinced! :rolleyes:

    earlybird-obi-wan Thanks for reading!

    KELIA Can you imagine? Oops, did I say that out loud? [face_blush]

    jedidas3 Thank you!

    NYCitygurl He has his moments!

    Gkilkenny I think Yoda does it just to drive everyone crazy! [face_mischief]

    EGKenobi Sure! And thanks for reading!








    [b]Entry #9[/b]


    My name is Obi-Wan Kenobi. And I am a Jedi Padawan.

    I?m almost afraid to write the words. What if I write them and Master Qui-Gon changes his mind?

    Then I have to laugh at myself, because Master Qui-Gon has not shown himself to be one who changes his mind quickly or easily. I should know that better than most. There was a time that worked against me. Now it is in my favor.

    He has chosen to become my Master. That is not a commitment he makes lightly. Not to me. Not to himself. Knowing more of what happened now, I am not surprised at his reluctance to take on a Padawan. I am only surprised that he did, and that it was [i]me[/i].

    I can?t even begin to say how much my life has changed. I was right to hope that Qui-Gon would come to my rescue. He did. In more ways than one. He changed my life. I was one thing before he became my Master. And now I am another. I hope I will prove worthy of his faith in me.

    But now I sometimes wonder if he didn?t need [I]me[/I] as much as I needed him. Just as he changed my life, perhaps I have changed his. I hope I have. Our fates our intertwined, the Force has made that clear. One way or another, what happens to one of us will affect the other.

    And I wouldn?t put it past Master Yoda to throw us together because he saw that we needed each other.

    Master Yoda is sneaky. And he's had a long time to practice.
     
  6. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Marvelous... sweet. Yoda is sneaky huh? LOL [face_mischief] ;)
     
  7. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    And I wouldn?t put it past Master Yoda to throw us together because he saw that we needed each other.

    Master Yoda is sneaky. And he's had a long time to practice.


    A very long time, indeed. [face_laugh]
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Master Yoda is sneaky. And he's had a long time to practice.

    [face_laugh] sneaky indeed. He is manipulating all Jedi.

    Lovely update=D==D=
     
  9. Corellian_Ale

    Corellian_Ale Manager Emeritus star 4 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    And I wouldn?t put it past Master Yoda to throw us together because he saw that we needed each other.

    Master Yoda is sneaky. And he's had a long time to practice.



    I guess that's why Palps hated him so much, he didn't like competing for "Most Sneaky"!

     
  10. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Master Yoda is sneaky. And he's had a long time to practice.

    Truer words were never written :p

    I'm thrilled to see Obi and Qui finally being paired together. They do need each other and it's great Obi can see that.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  11. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Finally Qui-Gon has accepted Obi-Wan.

    Great update.=D=
     
  12. ardavenport

    ardavenport Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Yoda sneaky? Of course he is. [face_mischief] Obi-Wan is learning fast. And it's so nice to see him back as a padawan. :)
     
  13. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jade_eyes We always knew the little troll had a darker side! :p

    Valairy_Scot And practice makes perfect!

    earlybird-obi-wan Just as I suspected! [face_mischief]

    Corellian_Ale Maybe once they were best buds and then... well, you know how fast rivalry can ruin a friendship!

    KELIA Master Yoda: The Hidden Sith

    Gkilkenny Thanks for reading!

    ardavenport He deserves it, that's for sure!






    [b]Entry #10[/b]



    Today is a special day to me, but I do not think Master Qui-Gon knows. Today, I am thirteen. Thirteen is of special significance. Once, it was a date I dreaded. When I waited to discover my fate as a Jedi, while I wondered if [i]any[/i] Master would claim me as their own, this day loomed like a death sentence in my mind.

    Now, I find that I am happy to have passed this milestone. My joy is possible only because I am the Padawan of Master Qui-Gon Jinn.

    But does he know what today means to me?

    Sometimes, I think I see a teasing glint in his eyes, but then his expression is serene and suitable to a Jedi Master. There is no requirement for him to acknowledge this day, though it is the custom among Masters and Padawans. I want to tell him, and yet I don?t. What if he thinks me so ill-mannered that I am seeking gifts or attention? That would be horrible.

    And embarrassing. Mostly embarrassing.

    Perhaps it is best to wait and see.


    ~~~~~~~~~~


    My Master did not forget. He even gave me a present. He gave me a?rock.

    That it has great meaning to him, I do not doubt. But still.

    A rock?

    This Padawan business is rather more complicated than I anticipated.



     
  14. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    A rock?

    This Padawan business is rather more complicated than I anticipated.


    You think, Obi? [face_laugh] Just wait...there's pathetic life forms to come, then Tahl will steal Qui's attention from you, then Anakin will steal Qui from you - oh, heck, there's plenty of years before you find all that out.

    Enjoy.

     
  15. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    LOL!! Obi's mystification at the gift just flows off the screen. [face_laugh] It's definitely a gift he'll come to understand with getting to know Qui-Gon and sharing and learning from one another.
     
  16. Corellian_Ale

    Corellian_Ale Manager Emeritus star 4 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    He gave me a?rock.

    [face_laugh] All I can think of is Obi-Wan wearing a sheet over his head that has about 14 holes in it.

    good grief :p


     
  17. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    padawan business complicated[face_laugh] wait until you become a master[face_laugh]

    Nice humor in this update
     
  18. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    A rock?

    This Padawan business is rather more complicated than I anticipated


    Awwww, give it time Obi.

    I'm sure you'll be able to figure out the significance.

    Loved the Qui knew it was Obi-s lifeday.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=



     
  19. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    A rock?
    Which turned out to be very important to him.:cool:
     
  20. jedidas3

    jedidas3 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Loved the last part...I can just see Obi's expression when he gets that rock. Hang on to it, Obi, you'll need it.
     
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