main
side
curve
  1. Welcome to the new boards! Details here!

Saga - PT *Jedi Tragedy* A little drabble for the Order 66 Challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by JediMaster_Jen, Jun 7, 2005.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Registered:
    Jun 3, 2002
    Title: Jedi Tragedy
    Summary: The first clone to receive Order 66



    Disclaimer: George Lucas owns Star Wars, not me.




    They were heroes. They were warriors. They were about to be simultaneously eliminated. Their blood was about to be spilled on a hundred worlds from the Core to the Outer Rim. Their honor was about to stripped from them. They were protectors of peace and justice. They were about to be betrayed by a Republic they had faithfully served for a thousand generations; murdered by those they trusted.

    “Execute Order 66,” came the grave and haunting voice of Lord Sidious. Chancellor; Emperor Palpatine.

    “It will be done, my Lord.”
     
  2. AnakinsHeir

    AnakinsHeir Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    May 2, 2004
    Great drabble! A lot of emotion in those few words.
     
  3. Arwyn_Whitesun

    Arwyn_Whitesun Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Jul 13, 2002
    Blaster fire rang out. The Jedi were now just a memory. :_|

    Nicely done, drabble, JMJ!


     
  4. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Rangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

    Registered:
    Jul 7, 2000
    Well done drabble. =D= So sad...
     
  5. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Force Ghost star 9

    Registered:
    Mar 26, 2001
    The great thing about a drabble like this is how concise and poignant the impact is.
     
  6. LadyPadme

    LadyPadme Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Sep 26, 2002


    Sometimes short and to the point effectively conveys more than a novel.

    Great job!
     
  7. _JM_

    _JM_ Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Jun 26, 2001
    The Jedi were now just a memory. ..what is sad is that in many ways the Jedi were not even that as Palpatine did so much to distort what was remembered of them and to make peoples memory of the Jedi inaccurate.

    Very short and sweet.
     
  8. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Registered:
    Jun 3, 2002
    AnakinsHeir Great drabble! A lot of emotion in those few words.

    Thanks a bunch. :)


    Arwyn_Whitesun Nicely done, drabble, JMJ!

    Thanks. [face_dancing]


    HealerLeona Well done drabble.

    Thanks.

    So sad...

    It was, wasn't it? :(


    DarthIshtar The great thing about a drabble like this is how concise and poignant the impact is.

    Yep. A drabble allows you to get right to the point.


    LadyPadme Sometimes short and to the point effectively conveys more than a novel.

    I agree. Sometimes it's easier to tell the story in short format.

    Thanks for reading. :)


    JM The Jedi were now just a memory. ..what is sad is that in many ways the Jedi were not even that as Palpatine did so much to distort what was remembered of them and to make peoples memory of the Jedi inaccurate.

    That's very true. Palpatine made sure of that.

    Thanks. :)
     
  9. Gina

    Gina Jedi Master star 4

    Registered:
    Jun 3, 2003
    Excellent drabble! Very emotional and powerful. :)

     
  10. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Registered:
    Jun 3, 2002
    Gina Excellent drabble! Very emotional and powerful.


    Oh, you make me blush. [face_blush] Thank you very much.
     
  11. JOINME

    JOINME Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Jul 25, 2005
    Its amazing how, in just a few short sentences, you can make a powerful impact.

    Although many peeps would say hey, the Jedi cant be limited to a few sentences, yknow they went out fighting, there was more to it blah blah..lol..really in the end, your drabble just sums the Jedi order up perfectly. The way they went down, destroyed by the one thing they trusted so much it blinded them to its darkness..
    Oh the irony!

    Your drabble is just perfect in describing the end of the Jedi Order and the Jedi Purge.

    And thats why its so sad. :(

    Thanks for sharing!

    LOVE AND PEACE AND... JEDI FOREVER. ;)
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.