Kyrie Eleison (a young Jag Fel short story)

Eeeeeew. That was NASTY!!! [face_disgusted]

 

Danyelle is evil incarnate!
Thanks for the post, though.

 

LOL Mel...yeah that was disgusting.

I like Jags closing thoughts though.

 

Heh, on this post, Sticks had the same comment five times... She's evil! Agh!!! Of course, Danyelle isn't evil incarnate, that's me. Just ask Becca about my plans for Parts III and IV of Into the Unknown.

Sometime, with her permission, I'm going to post all the amusing things Sticks says in betaing this story, like the number of times she has said, "Mmmmmm, Orlando Bloom" or "Mmmmmm, Josh Hartnett."

Anyway, today I've spent some time working on the additional scene for OP+J, finishing the club scene in ItU, and writing out a Jaina/Jag first kiss vignette, so more here once I write it! Keep an eye out for "Escape", a mushy little vignette that's completely outside this story arc but still of interest to all you Jaina/Jag fans.

Mel

 

Soooooo....more soon?

 

Good postie. Not quite what I expected, but it was good.

 

Wow, without Jaina, Jag is one troubled guy.

 

Mely, it sounds like inspiration has bitten you hard. All that writing. Makes me tired reading about it.

Danyelle sounds like a spoiled child who is used to getting her way.

 

Well, RebelMom, I've got the house to myself the whole week, so hopefully I'll be able to write a lot. I make no promises about next week, though, as I go back to school Sunday.

 

Man, the weirdest thing happened to me last night. I dreamed the scene with Danyelle! Man, it was STRANGE!!

 

Hmm, perhaps you like Danyelle, Jaeger.

 

Well, considering I'm female......that could turn out rather interesting.

 

Ewwww.

Oh, and btw... She's evil! Agh!!!

Anyway, yeah. Gimme more to beta, Mel.

 

OK fine, Becca's right, im wrong.

SHES A B***H!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Someone knock this stuck-up bimbo out for me...that was really gross. Ugh.


I really liked the last line tho...you think youll never meet her, Jag, but just wait until Mike Stackpole comes in and plays around with your life!!!!!!!! (and Melyanna too, but mike stackpole got there first. )

 

Eh, she's not bad. ::cringes at the responses I'll be getting after this post::

 

Ewwww! She's-- she's-- she's a-- *words fail the sheltered and innocent Mcily* Darn, can't think of a bad enough word!

 

Jaeger: That's really frightening. Something tells me you need help...

wompy: ALWAYS check the gender of a poster before making a comment like that!!! Honestly...

Jaeger: No, that's frightening. Still.

Sticks: Seeing you gave me two posts for WA to toy with, I really should give you something for KE... But no, what do I give you? A vignette and the first post of the CoH repost/rewrite/retitle. Have fun with those till I get the next one up!

Jaded: Well, I could have told you that... Oh, wait, that's a good thing that I knew what the character was going to be like, isn't it? And yes, poor Jag thinks he'll never leave Nirauan to meet the one woman his father would approve of... It makes you wonder, doesn't it, since Jaina wasn't commanding Rogue Squadron till after she and Jag got engaged, why he approved of her? (Plot hint for ItU. )

stevo: If you don't count in the immaturity, demandingness (that word's a Mel original ), seductiveness, and general ability to annoy, she's great.

Mcily: I think the word you want there is *ahem*.

 

Eh, not Womp_rat's fault, Melyanna. I didn't put it in my profile, and a LOT of people seem to be mistaking me for a boy. Hmmm.... wonder why. Heh, yes, I DO think I need help--and more of this story just MIGHT be the cure! post soon!

 

Maybe tomorrow, Jaeger. Maybe tomorrow. I have a fun dinner scene to write for Into the Unknown next, including a *coughcoughfightcoughcough* between Jaina and Jag.

 

*runs of to the Fresher to hurl* Ewwww... UGH... I HATE Danyelle, however the kisses were WONDERFULLY described, you make a fellow SMOOCH author proud *Sniff*

 

Hehe, I set stevo straight on why we don't like Danyelle.

 

UP!

 

Yeah i read that in ItU...Wedge working behind the scenes again!!!!

This needs a nice, clean post to clear up all the vomit and angry vibes in this thread...

BTW, i noticed that Jon was the "best man"...nice touch, Mely.

 

OK, I can see why immaturity, demandingness (that word's a Mel original ),
seductiveness, and general ability to annoy could be seen as a bad thing

But I still like her.