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Kyrie Eleison (a young Jag Fel short story)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Melyanna, Jan 3, 2002.

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  1. Rebecca191

    Rebecca191 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Eeeeeew. That was NASTY!!! [face_disgusted]
     
  2. JaegerGhent

    JaegerGhent Jedi Master star 5

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    :mad: Danyelle is evil incarnate! :mad:
    Thanks for the post, though. :)
     
  3. Freyja

    Freyja Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL Mel...yeah that was disgusting. ;)

    I like Jags closing thoughts though. :)
     
  4. Melyanna

    Melyanna Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Heh, on this post, Sticks had the same comment five times... She's evil! Agh!!! Of course, Danyelle isn't evil incarnate, that's me. Just ask Becca about my plans for Parts III and IV of Into the Unknown. ;)

    Sometime, with her permission, I'm going to post all the amusing things Sticks says in betaing this story, like the number of times she has said, "Mmmmmm, Orlando Bloom" or "Mmmmmm, Josh Hartnett." ;)

    Anyway, today I've spent some time working on the additional scene for OP+J, finishing the club scene in ItU, and writing out a Jaina/Jag first kiss vignette, so more here once I write it! Keep an eye out for "Escape", a mushy little vignette that's completely outside this story arc but still of interest to all you Jaina/Jag fans. ;)

    Mel
     
  5. JaegerGhent

    JaegerGhent Jedi Master star 5

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    Soooooo....more soon? :)
     
  6. womp_rat208

    womp_rat208 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Good postie. Not quite what I expected, but it was good. ;)
     
  7. stevo

    stevo Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow, without Jaina, Jag is one troubled guy.
     
  8. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Mely, it sounds like inspiration has bitten you hard. All that writing. Makes me tired reading about it.

    Danyelle sounds like a spoiled child who is used to getting her way.
     
  9. Melyanna

    Melyanna Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well, RebelMom, I've got the house to myself the whole week, so hopefully I'll be able to write a lot. I make no promises about next week, though, as I go back to school Sunday.
     
  10. JaegerGhent

    JaegerGhent Jedi Master star 5

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    Man, the weirdest thing happened to me last night. I dreamed the scene with Danyelle! Man, it was STRANGE!!
     
  11. womp_rat208

    womp_rat208 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hmm, perhaps you like Danyelle, Jaeger. ;)
     
  12. JaegerGhent

    JaegerGhent Jedi Master star 5

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    Well, considering I'm female......that could turn out rather interesting. ;) :p
     
  13. Sticks

    Sticks Jedi Master star 4

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    Ewwww.

    Oh, and btw... She's evil! Agh!!!

    Anyway, yeah. Gimme more to beta, Mel. :D
     
  14. JadedofMara

    JadedofMara Jedi Padawan star 4

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    OK fine, Becca's right, im wrong.

    SHES A B***H!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Someone knock this stuck-up bimbo out for me...that was really gross. Ugh.


    I really liked the last line tho...you think youll never meet her, Jag, but just wait until Mike Stackpole comes in and plays around with your life!!!!!!!! (and Melyanna too, but mike stackpole got there first. ;) )

     
  15. stevo

    stevo Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Eh, she's not bad. ::cringes at the responses I'll be getting after this post::
     
  16. JaegerGhent

    JaegerGhent Jedi Master star 5

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  17. Mcily_Nochi

    Mcily_Nochi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ewwww! She's-- she's-- she's a-- *words fail the sheltered and innocent Mcily* Darn, can't think of a bad enough word!
     
  18. Melyanna

    Melyanna Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jaeger: That's really frightening. Something tells me you need help... ;)

    wompy: ALWAYS check the gender of a poster before making a comment like that!!! Honestly...

    Jaeger: No, that's frightening. Still.

    Sticks: Seeing you gave me two posts for WA to toy with, I really should give you something for KE... But no, what do I give you? A vignette and the first post of the CoH repost/rewrite/retitle. Have fun with those till I get the next one up! ;)

    Jaded: Well, I could have told you that... Oh, wait, that's a good thing that I knew what the character was going to be like, isn't it? ;) And yes, poor Jag thinks he'll never leave Nirauan to meet the one woman his father would approve of... It makes you wonder, doesn't it, since Jaina wasn't commanding Rogue Squadron till after she and Jag got engaged, why he approved of her? (Plot hint for ItU. ;) )

    stevo: If you don't count in the immaturity, demandingness (that word's a Mel original ;) ), seductiveness, and general ability to annoy, she's great. ;)

    Mcily: I think the word you want there is *ahem*. ;)
     
  19. JaegerGhent

    JaegerGhent Jedi Master star 5

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    Eh, not Womp_rat's fault, Melyanna. I didn't put it in my profile, and a LOT of people seem to be mistaking me for a boy. Hmmm.... wonder why. :D Heh, yes, I DO think I need help--and more of this story just MIGHT be the cure! ;) post soon!
     
  20. Melyanna

    Melyanna Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Maybe tomorrow, Jaeger. Maybe tomorrow. I have a fun dinner scene to write for Into the Unknown next, including a *coughcoughfightcoughcough* between Jaina and Jag.
     
  21. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    *runs of to the Fresher to hurl* Ewwww... UGH... I HATE Danyelle, however the kisses were WONDERFULLY described, you make a fellow SMOOCH author proud *Sniff*
     
  22. Mcily_Nochi

    Mcily_Nochi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hehe, I set stevo straight on why we don't like Danyelle. ;)
     
  23. Mcily_Nochi

    Mcily_Nochi Jedi Padawan star 4

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  24. JadedofMara

    JadedofMara Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah i read that in ItU...Wedge working behind the scenes again!!!!

    This needs a nice, clean post to clear up all the vomit and angry vibes in this thread...

    BTW, i noticed that Jon was the "best man"...nice touch, Mely.
     
  25. stevo

    stevo Jedi Padawan star 4

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    OK, I can see why immaturity, demandingness (that word's a Mel original ),
    seductiveness, and general ability to annoy
    could be seen as a bad thing :p

    But I still like her. :)
     
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