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Before - Legends Mando, Poetry Thread (with translations) - 11/22: Aay'han

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by MsLanna, Jul 13, 2007.

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  1. Corellian_Ale

    Corellian_Ale Manager Emeritus star 4 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I can't remember which ones I've read already, and which ones are new to me, so I'm gonna' just read 'em all!
    *(just going to focus on the English translations, I promise to be more diligent in the future.

    :_| Great, and I start out with one to make me depressed. Which of course means it's marvelous! It sounds as if someone has lost their lover, likely to war... [face_worried]


    [quote=MsLanna]
    Remembering

    just being with you
    being alone no longer
    makes me complete
    and connects me

    Don't you remember?

    just being with you
    I was a song
    all hear me
    I was beautitiful

    Don't you want to remember?


    [u]just being with you
    a fire in the void
    see my colour
    fill the sky (daylight)[/u]

    You cannot remember.


    but I remember
    remember us
    all todays
    all tomorrows

    Beloved, I remember.
    [/quote]

    [quote=MsLanna]
    Fire

    I know your name
    wrote it on my heart
    and it burned
    I know your face
    painted it on my soul
    and it burned

    I know the distance between us
    Measured it
    And burned
    I know the years between us
    Counted them
    And burned

    I worked, fought, tried
    burned
    I dreamed and made it truth
    Burned

    see you, I did
    touch you, I did
    and I burn
    under your eyes
    under your hands
    I burn

    Now all is ashes
    darkness, dust in wind
    all know
    a dream made real
    is ended[/quote]

    Def. a pattern... [face_hugs] [i]I wrote it on my heart and it burned[/i] And I truly loved the part I underlined...

    [face_cry]

    [quote=MsLanna]Pain

    to see you unable to touch
    to hear you unable to reach
    to know your hurt but unable to help
    to hear your sad song though all times
    that is pain

    your heart without beat
    your face without laughter
    my world without you
    how can I return alone to half a song
    it is pain

    I know pain
    your blood on my face
    - not right -
    your blood in my hands
    - not right -
    your heart singing the song of goodbye
    not right at all, not right at all

    I now pain well
    I/me alone
    soul alone
    heart alone
    together gone/no more
    'we' gone
    completely gone
    That's pain[/quote]

    Lanna, these are all so Emo beautiful. [face_wink]






    [quote=MsLanna]~ untitled (without name) ~

    I know your pain under too many other names
    The fire of your eyes burns me to ash
    Distance between heart and soul is growing
    Ever stronger cold like ice dark as night

    I know your name and all it's pains
    I'm drowned (killed under water), by the darkness in your eyes
    I travelled so far and further
    Finding that even with you, I am without you

    When the heart is dead, where does the head go?
    I don't want to know, just follow my sigh[/quote]

    You def. don't need a title for this one... you've really got a poets mind. [face_hugs] And in three languages no less.



    [quote=MsLanna]All one

    My brothers are all one
    are too many to count
    - all one -
    One face, one voice
    one indomitable heart
    - all one -

    my brothers are strong
    beautifully deadly
    - as one -
    storms of cold
    storm of heat
    - as one -

    My brothers stand as one
    never fall
    - not one -
    each one is more than important
    must come home
    - each one -

    I am with my brothers
    other face, other voice
    - still one -
    indomitable hearts
    with them no longer a stranger
    - all one -[/quote]


    Ah! The shiny boys! [face_grin]



     
  2. MsLanna

    MsLanna Jedi Master star 6

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    Jul 8, 2005
    Thank Ale. [:D]
    I am not really writing any poems right now.
    I hope it'll come abck ebcause it's definitely fun.:D

    You can leave hugs for the unknown poet with me, I'll hand them on - possibly.:p
     
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