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Beyond - Legends Mara the Burninator (L/M vignette; humor - yet another in the Temperature series - Cover Art added)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by obaona, Nov 2, 2003.

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  1. NarundiJedi

    NarundiJedi Jedi Master star 6

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    Love the colors in that cover art, oba! The contrast of warm and cool is intentional, right? ;)

    Yeah, I know I should be in bed now. [face_blush] Going there . . . :p

    Jae Angel
     
  2. _3MD_PsychoSniper

    _3MD_PsychoSniper Jedi Youngling star 4

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    I just read through the whole series.


    very good.
     
  3. kayladie97

    kayladie97 Jedi Master star 4

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    Oooh, I loved the cover art! Very nicely done!

    And yes, I do suffer from low self-esteem. *breaks into whining mode* Why can't I find my own Luke!?

    Ah, well...
     
  4. Jedi-2B

    Jedi-2B Jedi Master star 4

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    Loved the cover art, with all the different phases of Luke, and all the representations of Mara. Fantastic job, oba.
     
  5. Rivad_Bacar

    Rivad_Bacar Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Argh! Company Firwall keeps me from seeing L/M art! :(
     
  6. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Gabri_Jade: Thank you. ;) Aye, I have many talents. [face_mischief]

    NJ: Yep, that was intentional. ;) I hope you slept, dearest. :p You better have! :p

    _3MD_PsychoSniper: Thank you. :)

    kayladie97: Thank you! :D *attempts to bolster self-esteem* You're good, you're wonderful (did you know good literally means 'perfect' even though the connotation is 'okay'?), I keep wondering where you got that username . . .

    And someday, you will have a Luke of your very own. ;)

    Jedi-2B: You're the first person to comment on that aspect, and I'm proudest of that part. :p Thank you! :D

    Rivad_Bacar: :_| :_| :_| If you PM me your email address, I can send it to you that way. How does that sound? :)
     
  7. Lt_Jaina_Solo

    Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Knight star 5

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    I love the cover art, obaona!
     
  8. Rivad_Bacar

    Rivad_Bacar Jedi Youngling star 2

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  9. Arina_Jaylin

    Arina_Jaylin Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Apr 17, 2003
    Mara burning people [face_devil] MORE PLEASE :D
     
  10. Ariapaige

    Ariapaige Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 25, 2002
    oba! the cover art is awesome! I can't wait for the next vig.

    ;) Paige
     
  11. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Lt_Jaina_Solo: Thank you! :D

    Rivad_Bacar: Sent. ;)

    Arina_Jaylin: :p Aye. And I'll try. :p

    Ariapaige: Thanks! :D ;) And you can cross your fingers. :p
     
  12. maramijade

    maramijade Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    am I missing it. . . where's the cover art??!!!

     
  13. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Page 2, post 47 or 48. (Sorry, I should probably put it in the first post. :p )

    Hope that helps. ;)
     
  14. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Coming in fashionably late... Isn't revenge a dish best served cold?

    Nice cover art.
     
  15. _3MD_PsychoSniper

    _3MD_PsychoSniper Jedi Youngling star 4

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    so, more soon ?
     
  16. Rivad_Bacar

    Rivad_Bacar Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Awesome art Oba! Thanks for the email! :D

    Rivad goes off wisteling merrily for the weekend...
     
  17. maramijade

    maramijade Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    really wonderful Obaona!

    I espially like the farmboy smile in the top left hand corner. . .

    and the swagger in the frontal Luke is wonderful!
     
  18. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    RebelMom: As soon as you said that, I got this image of you sashaying (sp?) into a party that's half over. :p And nope, it's not . . . not with Mara, anyway. ;) And thanks! :D

    _3MD_PsychoSniper: Let's hope so. ;) See note.

    Rivad_Bacar: Hehe. :p You're welcome. :D

    maramijade: Thank you! :D Those are my two favorite, too. ;) I chose the best pics (IMHO) of Luke and Mara for the largest and clearest images in the front. :)


    Author's Note: Well, boys and girls, the verdict is in - I sent a vignette to Jedi-2B for her opinion, and she partially agrees with me - it needs a lot of work. But she says I shouldn't throw it away. :p In the meantime, I'll probably try to do another vignette and then go back to Heat Rises, as suggested by my wonderful beta. :)

    So if you have any more titles, you can keep postin' them. :p
     
  19. Jaina_Solo_Durron

    Jaina_Solo_Durron Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Niiiiiice...if only we were all as gorgeous as Mara ;)

    -JSD
     
  20. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    I don't think I can sashay...I usually hide by the walls.

    titles: hmmm, how about Lukewarm? :p
     
  21. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    Jaina_Solo_Durron: Don't even start, you silly. :p

    RebelMom: It'd be funny to do something like that. ;) I'll think about it. ;)




    That said, I may have a possible vignette. [face_mischief] :p
     
  22. _3MD_PsychoSniper

    _3MD_PsychoSniper Jedi Youngling star 4

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    Keep up the good work.

    Maube some J/TK mush for a J/TK junkie ?
    And some Janson for a Wes fan ?
    Maybe have that Lukewarm 1 done with
    L/M stuck someware with Wes and forced to
    join up to make Janson shut up.






    -PsychopathicSniperpathic
     
  23. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    :p Other characters will no doubt appear, but I don't know when or how. This series is largely focused on Luke and Mara, so it will be mostly just the two of them. :)
     
  24. kayladie97

    kayladie97 Jedi Master star 4

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    How I came up with my username is mind-numbingly boring. My real name is Kathy and I was trying to find something that hadn't already been taken on AOL (way back before I got a cable modem-yay!) so I came up with K-(for Kathy) lady...and just played around with the spelling a bit. The 97 is for the year my son was born.

    Hey, wake up! I told you it was boring!!

    Thanks for the self-esteem boost...that was much appreciated!

    I can't wait to read what you come up with next.
     
  25. obaona

    obaona Jedi Master star 4

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    *giggles* That's a cool story. ;) I just find it interesting how people get their usernames. (People ask about mine a lot. :p )

    So, you liked the self-esteem boost, eh? ;) Here's another: I used your title. :D Jedi-2B is looking at it as we speak, so here's crossing our fingers that I did your fantastic title justice. ;)

    Oh, and thank you. :D
     
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