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Before - Legends Mesa Banished! Jar Jar Bink's Journal - Dear Diary Challenge 2009 Finally Updated 8/9

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Lolly_Tolly, Jan 10, 2009.

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  1. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Jar-Jar and job hunting... wish him luck, I do. ( [face_laugh] )


    You're doing wonderfully with the accent. Good post. :)
     
  2. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    no worries on length lolly. and i believe you're right... jar jar doesn't seem like the sort to write extensively.

    LOL! binks looking for a job? oy... i can imagine how THAT one went. this is going very well, and i'm looking forward to more.

    :snoopy
     
  3. Ubersue

    Ubersue Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Heehee! This is very cute. Looking forward to reading more!
     
  4. Lolly_Tolly

    Lolly_Tolly Jedi Master star 4

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    Gkilkenny: Oh, yes. So many possibilities... [face_devil]

    Darth Muis: Yeah, actually, I'm quite surprised at the number of readers, too. I'd be happy to PM you!

    VaderLVR64: Don't worry, yet! It's going to get worse.

    GuNgAnFaN3090: Oh, don't worry, you'll find out! :D

    NYCitygurl: Job hunts suck even more, if you're an annoying frog person. :)

    Jaidyn_Knightfall: That's a pretty big maybe.

    CrystalSaber_1: That is every Obifan's dream! =P~

    Daena_Benjen42: He's going to need all the help he can get, because the Force is not going to be helping him any time soon. :)

    Trimaj: Did you happen to include cooking utensils in that image, at all?

    Ubersue: Thanks!

    So here it is, the next entry! Yay!

    Bad News

    Mesa no get job.... Da Naboo no think my good at job. Dey threw thing at mesa! Knife, thing. Den dey hit mesa wit pot thing. Now mesa in pain... In swamp making mud pie. My hab no food. Mud no taste good.

    My wish mamma here, so she make food. What she make out of it from?! My no know! Wish my had listened to her when she teaching mesa....
     
  5. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    no, i can honestly say it did NOT include cooking utensils...

    *snerk* ok, that was hilarious. poor jar jar, not having anything to eat. hope he can catch some fish or something, or maybe find some fruit.

    another good update.

    :snoopy
     
  6. Darth Muis

    Darth Muis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Poor Jar Jar. I wonder how he's going to survive...
     
  7. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Poor Jar Jar! [face_laugh] =D=
     
  8. GuNgAnFaN3090

    GuNgAnFaN3090 Jedi Knight star 5

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    That was great! [face_laugh] Poor Jar Jar. :( I hope he finds some food soon...

    Great update once again. I can't wait to read more. I can't believe they threw knives at him! Oh wait, yes I can. [face_not_talking]

    =D= =D= =D=
     
  9. Jaidyn_Knightfall

    Jaidyn_Knightfall Jedi Youngling star 2

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    The Naboo threw things at Jar Jar?! I think my opinion of them just dropped another few notches.

    My wish mamma here, so she make food. What she make out of it from?! My no know! Wish my had listened to her when she teaching mesa....

    It's usually a good idea to listen to your mom when she's telling you things.:p

    Great job, Lolly!
     
  10. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Psst... Jar-Jar, fish not mud pies! (Could see him sitting in a swamp and wondering what he was supposed to cook...)


    Good entry. :)
     
  11. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Give him a job cooking.[face_sick]
    When is usa tinkin wesa in trouble!:eek:
    Now! when wesa gives him a job cokking.o_O

     
  12. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Aww, poor Jar Jar!! He's annoying, but he doesn't deserve to haev stuff thrown at him :(
     
  13. ardavenport

    ardavenport Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jar Jar should go find some nice tasty bugs like the one we saw him chasing after in the Clone Wars cartoon. If he's lucky, he won't have to pay for them.[face_laugh] You've got his 'voice' down very well.
     
  14. StormtrooperSyndrome

    StormtrooperSyndrome Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Curse you, Lolly! You're making me sympathetic toward Jar Jar!

    Oh, and please add me to the PM list. I can't wait to see more of Jar Jar's misadventures. [face_laugh]
     
  15. Lolly_Tolly

    Lolly_Tolly Jedi Master star 4

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    Trimaj: Knowing Jar Jar, he'd probably pick something poisonous. *is suddenly struck with an idea*

    Darth Muis: Wonder no more, for the next post is here!

    VaderLVR64: Thanks!

    GuNgAnFaN3090: Yeah, he'll find some food. ;)

    Jaidyn_Knightfall: It sure is. That's how I know how to cook! :p

    DaenaBenjen42: lol. Thanks!

    Gkilkenny: No. Even I'm not going to go there.

    NYCitygurl: That's a matter of opinion. I'm sure there are people who would disagree.

    ardavenport: I haven't seen any of the cartoons, I refuse. Although, it sounds interesting. :) Thanks!

    StormtrooperSyndrome: I seem to be doing that to a lot of people. :p You're on the PM list!

    A/N: Sorry for the lateness. I miscalculated days, and then DRL came in the form of school.... [face_frustrated] Anyways, here's the next chapter!



    Food

    Today, mesa huntin for food. Found small shell thing. Moi moi, yum yum. My no know what dey are, mesa only know dat my like them muchly.

    My found place to sleep. Mesa call it home. It has bed and diaree. Nothin' else, but mesa no mind. Da sun gone to bed. My will go too.
     
  16. Darth Muis

    Darth Muis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I hope I'm wrong, it might not be the best idea for Jar Jar to eat those shells... Just a hunch really. I'm glad he's found a place to call home!

    Keep up the good work L_T! I'm enjoying it!
     
  17. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Great update! =D=
     
  18. GuNgAnFaN3090

    GuNgAnFaN3090 Jedi Knight star 5

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    I like this update. Jar Jar gets something to eat and a place to sleep. Nice day.

    =D= =D= =D=

    Can't wait for the next update. [face_peace] Great job.
     
  19. Jaidyn_Knightfall

    Jaidyn_Knightfall Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Eating shells doesn't sound too appetizing. But then again, I'm not a gungan.:p I'm glad Jar Jar found someplace to live, too.

    Keep up the good work, Lolly!
     
  20. TheMacUnleashed

    TheMacUnleashed Jedi Knight star 4

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    Mesa like thiss chapter. Mesa hopes you posts soon. It makes mesas day all the better.
     
  21. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    mesa berry berry happy, that Jar Jar hesa found a place, mesa a tinking is a nice place to besa staying in.

    Oooh that was hard to do.8-}
     
  22. IrishRover

    IrishRover Jedi Youngling

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    Mesa like! Is muy muy funny!
     
  23. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    He has a bed and his diary? All's... mostly well, then, right?


    Good entry. :)
     
  24. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Aww, poor Jar Jar. I hope those shells don't come back to (figuratively) bite him.
     
  25. Lolly_Tolly

    Lolly_Tolly Jedi Master star 4

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    Darth Muis: The shells are ok, well those ones are anyway. :p

    VaderLVR64: Thanks!

    GuNgAnFaN3090: Unfortunately, nice days are few and far apart. :)

    Jaidyn_Knightfall: You?ve never eaten oysters?

    TheMacUnleashed: Da next posta is on itsa way! lol. That didn?t go so well.

    Gkilkenny: I?m not even going to bother doing Jar Jar talk at the moment. :p Unfortunately, he won?t be able to stay there forever. Speaking of which?

    IrishRover: Haha! Thanks!

    DaenaBenjen42: Yes, all?s well, although not for not much longer.

    NYCitygurl: Well, those shells won?t, but? well we?ll see.

    A/N: Yep, it's late again. Many apologies. :)



    Missing!

    Mesa lose mya diaree! Can?t find it! My no know where it is. Mesa look eberywhere! It not under bed, it not on bed, it not near bed, it not anywhere!

    Mesa no know where bed is eeber, anymore! Diaree is in pocket?.

     
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