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Saga Metamorphosis. Final Chapter: New Beginnings. Completed 7/2/10!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Raptor517, Sep 12, 2006.

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  1. Raptor517

    Raptor517 Jedi Knight star 4

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    Raptor517, May 17, 2007
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  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Nice ending of this chapter Jef getting a job and looking for more.
     
    earlybird-obi-wan, May 17, 2007
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  3. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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    Great job! Happy to see you back!
     
    G__Anakin, May 18, 2007
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  4. Laine_Snowtrekker

    Laine_Snowtrekker Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Wow! An update! Yay! [face_dancing]

    This was a cool update--them getting jobs and all.

    Thanks for the PM. Always appreciated.
     
    Laine_Snowtrekker, May 18, 2007
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  5. Ewok-Kenobi

    Ewok-Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    hehe, i kinda need to update the temple escape... but i might not be able too, because schools just beggining to get to me. il try, though!
     
    Ewok-Kenobi, May 18, 2007
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  6. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    ?Don?t kill the clone. As long as he doesn?t realize what happened, he?s not a threat.?


    Compassion is always a good trait. [face_good_luck]

    Superb update, easily worth the wait!!
     
    Healer_Leona , May 18, 2007
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  7. padawanlost

    padawanlost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Good to have you back!

    I can't wait to see how these three continue to interact. I do like their perspectives on each other.


    Hope to see more soon! =D=
     
    padawanlost, May 20, 2007
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  8. Raptor517

    Raptor517 Jedi Knight star 4

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    More is on the way!

    Good to be back, G.

    A little less action-packed, but vital for the rest of the fic. Glad you liked it!

    Good luck with school, and thanks for sticking with this!

    Yes it is, but compassion is not what's on our shadowy friend's mind....

    They will grow a bit apart in some ways, but much closer in others.



    Thanks to everyone who's sticking with this!

    Raptor517
     
    Raptor517, May 25, 2007
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  9. Raptor517

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    Raptor517, May 29, 2007
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  10. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    great update and Cavisek and Lyn'das are cool.=D=
     
    earlybird-obi-wan, May 29, 2007
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  11. Ewok-Kenobi

    Ewok-Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    great update!
     
    Ewok-Kenobi, May 30, 2007
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  12. Laine_Snowtrekker

    Laine_Snowtrekker Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Great chapter.

    Interesting idea of the academy of martial arts.

    Thanks, as always, for the PM.
     
    Laine_Snowtrekker, May 30, 2007
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  13. Darth_Marrs

    Darth_Marrs Jedi Knight star 4

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    Great post.
     
    Darth_Marrs, May 30, 2007
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  14. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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    Great job!:)

    That was intresting
     
    G__Anakin, May 30, 2007
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  15. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    If you have questions, I suggest you bring them to others of your rank. Just so you know, we use very few machines. Work will make you strong, and keep you humble, like me. Have you ever heard of a broom, mop, and dustpan??

    ?Huh??

    WHAM! Lyn?das flew into the wall again, then dropped to the floor. Turning over on his back with a groan, he glanced with pain at the dent in the wall. ?I apologize, master.?


    Perhaps I shouldn't have, but I chuckled at this. lol

    The anger drained out of Lyn?das in a heartbeat, and his skin blushed. ?I?m sorry. I--I didn?t think.?

    Apparently lessons are being learned though.

    Superb post.

     
    Healer_Leona , Jun 1, 2007
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  16. Raptor517

    Raptor517 Jedi Knight star 4

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    Mistake. [face_blush]
     
    Raptor517, Jun 3, 2007
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  17. Raptor517

    Raptor517 Jedi Knight star 4

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    Yes, and Cavisek will remain a somewhat major player in the story, though we won't see too much of her.

    Thanks for reading!

    Martial arts are sweet. Must have. :D

    Thanks for reading!

    I hope it was, because it means people will continue to come back.

    It was meant to be chuckled at.




    Thanks to everyone for reading, but now you all have a choice (somewhat) in what is posted next. Would you like to go more into 14A20E, as he gets to the biggest action scene in this fic; or would you like to delve a little more in Lyn'das' training and an eventual martial arts competition? 14A20E will remain a primary character, but Lyn'das will not be focused on so much in the future. (Not that he isn't important, but Jef and 14A20E are my primary characters.) So, the choice is up to you what happens next.

    Your time starts now...

    Raptor517
     
    Raptor517, Jun 3, 2007
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  18. Raptor517

    Raptor517 Jedi Knight star 4

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    Raptor517, Jun 18, 2007
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  19. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

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    Great job!

    As for your question: Which ever you prefer!
     
    G__Anakin, Jun 19, 2007
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  20. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Great chapter and is that a death star he is seeing?

    Seeing action is great for me.
     
    earlybird-obi-wan, Jun 19, 2007
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  21. Ewok-Kenobi

    Ewok-Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    im not bothered.
    nice chap!
     
    Ewok-Kenobi, Jun 19, 2007
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  22. Darth_Marrs

    Darth_Marrs Jedi Knight star 4

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    Good chapter. I'm easy on your direction. I say write whatever interests you more.
     
    Darth_Marrs, Jun 19, 2007
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  23. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    ?Me?? Garen laughed as he began to weave his way through the crowd. ?I?ve been working here for twenty-four years. I?m one of the craft designers?-have been since my twentieth.?


    That's an impressive amount of time working his way to that position.

    As to your question, I can't hlep but ask, why not both eventually? :D :D
     
    Healer_Leona , Jun 21, 2007
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  24. GeithJiseo2

    GeithJiseo2 Jedi Master star 5

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    Since you've read my stories, I've decided to return the favor and read one of yours. And wowsers! Raptor, this is REALLY GOOD! Can you add me to your PM list, please? [face_praying]

    I can't wait to see more.
     
    GeithJiseo2, Jun 23, 2007
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  25. GeithJiseo2

    GeithJiseo2 Jedi Master star 5

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    This had dropped quite a ways, so I'm just bringing it back on up. Hope that sometime soon, I see more to the story.

    --GeithJiseo2, diehard fan
     
    GeithJiseo2, Jun 29, 2007
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