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Story [Narnia] The Lost Prince of Telmar

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by Halle Dray, Apr 12, 2016.

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  1. Halle Dray

    Halle Dray Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I'm so happy I'm able to really begin bringing him in now!
    Thanks!
     
    Halle Dray, May 3, 2016
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  2. Lady_Belligerent

    Lady_Belligerent Queen of the RPF, SWC, C&P, and Pancakes & Waffles star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    He's an awesome character, the possibilities are great. :)
     
    Lady_Belligerent , May 3, 2016
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  3. Darth_wanderguard

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    So is Nina dreaming again? That's the way it seems to me All these cliffhangers.
     
    Darth_wanderguard, May 5, 2016
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  4. Halle Dray

    Halle Dray Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    ERM, no. She woke up in the beginning of the chapter. I don't think she ever went back to sleep... :p
     
    Halle Dray, May 5, 2016
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  5. Darth_wanderguard

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    Ah, ok. The whole last sequence just seemed dreamlike. Good though. Can't wait for the next update.
     
    Darth_wanderguard, May 5, 2016
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    Halle Dray, May 24, 2016
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  7. Lady_Belligerent

    Lady_Belligerent Queen of the RPF, SWC, C&P, and Pancakes & Waffles star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Sweet, getting the Kings and Queens into the action. You're making me want to read and watch the movies again.
     
    Lady_Belligerent , May 24, 2016
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  8. Halle Dray

    Halle Dray Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I'm glad!
     
    Halle Dray, May 24, 2016
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  9. Darth_wanderguard

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    Very nice. I want to know more about what happens to Ali, though.
     
    Darth_wanderguard, May 25, 2016
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  10. Halle Dray

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    You will, you will... keep in mind the raid of Miraz's castle...
     
    Halle Dray, May 25, 2016
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  11. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Hi there! Awesome Narnia-ish feel. [face_dancing] =D= Fast paced and captivating characters. Very well done.
     
    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, May 31, 2016
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  12. Halle Dray

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    Halle Dray, Jul 9, 2016
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  14. Lady_Belligerent

    Lady_Belligerent Queen of the RPF, SWC, C&P, and Pancakes & Waffles star 10 Staff Member Manager

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    Don't trust him, Ali!
     
    Lady_Belligerent , Jul 9, 2016
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  15. Mira Grau

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    I just recently found this fic. It's great :)
    Prince Caspian was always my favourite book of the seven.
     
    Mira Grau, Jul 9, 2016
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  16. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Super talk between Edmund and Nina. Very understandable she would be curious and wonder about "going" to where he and his siblings came from. ;)
     
    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Jul 9, 2016
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  17. Halle Dray

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    Halle Dray, Aug 2, 2016
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  19. Mira Grau

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    Nice chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
     
    Mira Grau, Aug 2, 2016
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  20. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Superb setting up for the coming confrontation. Nice seeing each side. =D=
     
    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Aug 2, 2016
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  21. Halle Dray

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  22. Lady_Belligerent

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    Excellent chapter! =D=
     
    Lady_Belligerent , Aug 2, 2016
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  23. Halle Dray

    Halle Dray Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thank you!
     
    Halle Dray, Aug 2, 2016
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    Halle Dray, Aug 9, 2016
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  25. Mira Grau

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    Great chapter. :)
    I liked that scene where they go to the castle. It was added in the movie I think or was it in the book too?
     
    Mira Grau, Aug 9, 2016
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