Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by Sith-I-5, Apr 15, 2015.
I love Mary's POV
One vote for Mary. Thank you.
So that I can get a majority vote, I will also ask @Emperor Ferus :
When we get to the final raid, with Mary and Liz on two different teams and locations, should I follow
a) Continue to follow Mary's POV, and perhaps reveal what happened to Liz' team through Mary learning about it, as I did with the dreams?
b) Follow both Liz' and Mary's sides of things; either shifting between them at intervals; or big pieces on both of them?
c) Doing an equal opportunities round robin of all the femmes' POVs? The E-Branch pair, Commander Bailey, perhaps one of the ratings.
B seems best to me.
From what I can tell, both points of view have good merit, but more than that might risk overloading with different POVs.
After going back through the latest story post, I think B still
B is alright with me
@Emperor Ferus @earlybird-obi-wan
Thank you both. The final raid will be written with the B approach.
*is late* Yes, that sounds fine. Just enough POVs, IMHO.
That felt really good, involving you all in my decision. I enjoyed your levels of engagement.
Hi all, hope everyone is well and managing okay.
The WIP chapter on the previous page, is now complete: https://boards.theforce.net/threads...al-and-e-branch.50029243/page-4#post-56441223
Thanks for the nod, the updated chappie and yes, "Just keep swimming!!" as Dory says is my motto. Hope you are well, too.
Love it and still everyone well here. But now the lock-down is extended to april 28
Now this is food for thought - the troglodyte mightn't be able to converse but give impressions non-verbally, probably not much to be actually, you know, helpful yet it's still a fascinating concept.
Oooh, excellent suspense as to what the 'fungus' was and then to make the connection - bats, vampires ...