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Story [Necroscope, RPF] Mary Formal and E-Branch

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by Sith-I-5, Apr 15, 2015.

  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    I love Mary's POV
     
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  2. Sith-I-5

    Sith-I-5 Force Ghost star 6

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    One vote for Mary. Thank you. :)

    So that I can get a majority vote, I will also ask @Emperor Ferus :

    When we get to the final raid, with Mary and Liz on two different teams and locations, should I follow

    a) Continue to follow Mary's POV, and perhaps reveal what happened to Liz' team through Mary learning about it, as I did with the dreams?

    b) Follow both Liz' and Mary's sides of things; either shifting between them at intervals; or big pieces on both of them?

    c) Doing an equal opportunities round robin of all the femmes' POVs? The E-Branch pair, Commander Bailey, perhaps one of the ratings.
     
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  3. Emperor Ferus

    Emperor Ferus Chosen One star 7

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    B seems best to me.

    From what I can tell, both points of view have good merit, but more than that might risk overloading with different POVs.


    After going back through the latest story post, I think B still
     
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  4. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    B is alright with me
     
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  5. Sith-I-5

    Sith-I-5 Force Ghost star 6

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  6. pronker

    pronker Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    *is late* Yes, that sounds fine. Just enough POVs, IMHO.
     
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  7. Sith-I-5

    Sith-I-5 Force Ghost star 6

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    That felt really good, involving you all in my decision. I enjoyed your levels of engagement. =D=
     
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  8. Sith-I-5

    Sith-I-5 Force Ghost star 6

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  9. pronker

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  10. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    Love it and still everyone well here. But now the lock-down is extended to april 28
     
  11. pronker

    pronker Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Now this is food for thought - the troglodyte mightn't be able to converse but give impressions non-verbally, probably not much to be actually, you know, helpful yet it's still a fascinating concept.

    Oooh, excellent suspense as to what the 'fungus' was and then to make the connection - bats, vampires ... :eek:
     
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