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Saga "On the wings of angels", a graphic novel about Shmi as an angel *THE END: update 31/07/09*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by AzureAngel2, Mar 27, 2009.

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  1. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    Dear Black-Dog, thanks for saying so. On Sunday evening I try to finish with story with Dark Nest.

    [:D]

    Sneak preview with the last two paintings:

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P6060147.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P6060157.jpg]

    Now I have only need to come up with a good text!

     
  2. Jedi_QueenBee

    Jedi_QueenBee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    i certianly hope you do find good text to go with the pictures
     
  3. Cem_Fel

    Cem_Fel Jedi Master star 4

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    The boy needed blankets to warm himself and a hot drink instead of a mysterious sounding travel description to Dagobah. Luke could have turned into a frozen icicle long before his destiny was fulfilled. What good would that have done?

    [face_laugh] Now I have the mental image of Padmé and Shmi being mad at Obi and discussing his actions there, while being very annoyed, while Obi just sits there and let them talk thinking "Mothers...".

    And she should stop kissing Luke on the mouth. Of course they are not fully aware that they share the same blood yet. Still...

    Yes, she should stop that :p

    It's an awesome story,=D= I finally found the time to read it and it's very beautifully done. I love the way you told the story and Page 26 is one of my favorite pictures, along with 34.

    It's so beautiful and I have to admit I love the text and the pictures are very fitting to illustrate the situation further. YOu always picked the main-scenes, the most important ones.
    Btw. did Anakin actually join them?[face_idea] I'm not sure, since with Obi they were already three. But somehow I doubt Anakin would let them alone, no way.

    A beautiful story!![:D]
     
  4. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    No, Cem, Anakin is in ´this´ with his two beloved women... ;)

    And I will tell about this next weekend for Darth RL kept me a bit too busy recently.

    [:D]



    Yes, dear QueenBee. I will do so nect weekend.

    @};-
     
  5. iamobiwan1970

    iamobiwan1970 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    So I decided to stay on. Not only on behalf of the kind jedi-master though. I felt guilty about Anakin´s dark deeds, too. He was my own flesh and blood. I had born him into this very galaxy. My responsibility for him did not end with my death. I would be his silent guardian angel, watch every step of his. In good times as well as in bad times. He needed me more than he realised. For the dark already grew in him like a dreadful cancer. His fear to lose a beloved person ever again made him vulnerable.

    Loved the whole premise that Shmi was watching over her son (quite sorrowfully, but still there). Beautiful!
     
  6. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    Thanks, dear Obi!

    [:D]

    And hurrah, this story did win for [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/30291993/p4]best underrated[/link] at the saga awards.

    [face_dancing]

    My husband DarthUncle and I want to thank every reader, voter and the wonderful saga awards team.

    :*

    2009 Saga Fanfiction Awards - Winner's List

    Best Underrated - Commencement by Thumper09 and On Wings of Angels by AzureAngel2
     
  7. TheBride

    TheBride Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Okay, holiday time, up-date time soon. Therefore it is necessary to check my up-date list:

    *VAPa
    DarthUncle
    ratna
    earlybird-Obi-Wan
    Darth_Gangrenous
    Tyrannus230
    Kiyuuchan
    Patty
    Cem_Fel
    Ben_Stormrider
    MsLanna
    MrsVos
    FalconFan
    CPL_Macja
    Black_Dog
    Jaden1138
    Lady_Skywalker87
    Lady_Misty
    Jedi_QueenBee
    celera*


    Please contact me if there is anything wrong with my list! Thanks.
     
  8. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    Page 37:
    One day Luke´s fate crossed with that of a devoted fighter. A former Emperor´s Hand who craved for challenges. But Mara Jade´s mission to kill the son of Anakin never really worked out. Love is stronger than the dark. And so another smuggler did marry into the Skywalker line. This one even brought special jedi skills into the marriage. Skills and devotion that the New Jedi Order needed. Especially in the war against the merciless Yuuzhan Vong and in the Dark Nest crisis.

    Page 38:
    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P6060147.jpg]


    Page 39:
    The Swarm War that followed shortly afterwards was nothing compared to the vehemence of the Second Galactic Civil war. So much won and lost within just one generation. Beloved ones dying before their time had come. Padmé and I, we are still here to prevent that all the lights go out. There will always be a new hope in the galaxy and in the hearts of its people. There will always be another Skywalker. It is the Legacy of the force itself. The force that made my Ani grow inside my womb in the first place.

    Page 40:
    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P6060157.jpg]


    The end




    *gives her husband DU an amused look who was to check her text and edit it and NOT to cry on her laptop keyboard*

    So I asume the text is good.

    *runs to get DU a handkerchief and post that bit here before she is attacked by tickeling fingers*
     
  9. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    yes, great moving texts with great pictures. I love them.=D==D==D=
     
  10. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    And how much more you will like this story, dear bird, when you hold it in your hands.

    :D

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page1and2-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page3and4-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page5and6-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page7and8-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page9and10-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page11and12-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page13and14-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page15and16-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page17and18-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page19and20-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page21and22.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page23and24.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page25and26.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page27and28.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page29and30-1.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page31and32.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page33and34.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/Page35and36.jpg]

    Now only the last two pages and the cover need to be done and then the graphic novel is finished.

    [face_dancing]
     
  11. Jaden1138

    Jaden1138 Jedi Knight star 4

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    Awesome...I was amused with the page about Shmi talking about the twins kissing on the mouth. I want more. I think this is your best work so far!!!!
     
  12. CPL_Macja

    CPL_Macja Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    No, there has to be more... I want more... I need more! :_|

    Excellent work as always.
     
  13. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Very beautiful
     
  14. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    It is - stunning, beautiful, awsome, prachtig.

    Bravo AzureAngel2=D=@};-=D=[face_love]:*
     
  15. Jaden1138

    Jaden1138 Jedi Knight star 4

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    It is funny, a while back, my fanfic master and I talked about my idea of writing a fanfic sort of like that, but post ROTJ. :)
     
  16. ratna

    ratna Jedi Knight star 4

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    so inspired and so moving. my keyboard is wet, too! and you do tickle us with little bits of humor along the way. beautiful gift, Azure!
     
  17. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    Thanks, dear Misty. I hope my cover for the book version will also be as beautiful as the rest.


    Dear bird, the chances are very high that you will get your present in autuum this year.


    Dear Jaden, if you got the time you should definetly work on it.


    *sends out a lot of handkerchiefs to ratna... and all her love*


    Plus I have the last two bookversion pages:

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P8090718.jpg]

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P8090719.jpg]
     
  18. TheBride

    TheBride Jedi Youngling star 1

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    (Azure is disguise)

    Yesterday earlybird-Obi-Wan held her almost finished present in her hand. Now I need to make copies for her and a decent cover.
     
  19. LittleMissNightsaber

    LittleMissNightsaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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  20. KellyLCrutcher

    KellyLCrutcher Jedi Knight star 2

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    "Beautiful" is a mere understatement to describe this story. The writing, the images . . . I read this story today and I love it! :)

    Would you ever any plans for another graphic SW novel like this one? If you ever write another, I'd love to read it, too. :)

    Please, keep up the great work!

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  21. Jaden1138

    Jaden1138 Jedi Knight star 4

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    It IS incredible. I have started a story outside of my assignment. It is called Reunion, and it was my first Fanfic idea back in Feb. I decided to start writing it partly after reading this one. Very nice work here. Maybe i will have one published eventually. :)
     
  22. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    Well, I have this husband who inspires me to do a lot of
    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25754494/p1]fanart thread[/link]

    So I have a number of finished graphic novels already, dear KellyLCrutcher:

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28705255/p1/?2]"While you are sleeping"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28710360/p1/?0]"Fragments of a childhood"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=29545821&brd=10476]"Silent lucidity"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29142204/p1/?0]"Just a twist in my sobriety"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=29142541&brd=10476]"When darkness fell"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29757501/p1/]"Memoirs of a handmaiden"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29826765/p1/?0]"Shattered dreams" [/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29567639/p1/]"No comment!"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29554657/p1/?0]"Once upon the time..."[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29574582/p1/]"Grandfather" [/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=29496662&brd=10476&replies=0]"Waiting for tomorrow"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29909689/p1/]"On the wings of angels"[/link]

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=29496759&brd=10476]"Infinite dreams"[/link]

    There is also [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30088824/p1/?6]a common project with CloneCaptainRex[/link]




    Can´t wait for this one. Please send me a link, dear Jaden.
     
  23. Jaden1138

    Jaden1138 Jedi Knight star 4

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    I will PM it to you when I am comfortable with a stopping point. I have gotten a lot written. I like it so far.
     
  24. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    :D

    That is good to know, dear Jaden.


    If anybody would like to read more:

    Before

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8060044.jpg]

    Title: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=27964375&brd=10475&replies=45]Serpent-Spawn[/link]

    Co-Author & main editor: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/UserPages/Profile.aspx?user=DarthUncle]DarthUncle[/link]

    Time frame: long before even the Old Republic did exist

    Characters: own inventions, Anakin & A'Sharad

    Genre: Drama/ adventure

    Summary: On Aargonar Anakin Skywalker touches an amulet that is in possession of General A'Sharad Hett. Overwhelmed by emphatic powers his mind travels back into the early historical roots of the Tusken raiders. He comes to know more of their fierce nature and their dark secrets.

    Disclaimer: SW is owned by George Lucas and Lucas Ltd.!!!

    Status: completed


    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8060037.jpg]

    Title: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/31414474/p1/?3]Wolf whelp[/link]

    Co-Author & main editor: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/UserPages/Profile.aspx?user=DarthUncle]DarthUncle[/link]

    Co-editor: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/UserPages/Profile.aspx?user=SWpants666]swpants666[/link]

    Time frame: long before even the Old Republic did exist

    Characters: own inventions, Luke & Tionne

    Genre: Drama/ adventure

    Summary:While the Jedi Temple on Coruscant is rebuilt, Tionne Solusar gets in contact with Luke Skywalker. The jedi historian wants to show him a curious artefact she found while transferring data from the ruins of the Great Jedi library on Ossus. It is a picture drawn by a child and having the name Skywalker on it.

    Disclaimer: SW is owned by George Lucas and Lucas Ltd.!!!

    Status: completed


    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8070053.jpg]

    Title: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/31886873/p1/?0]"Cat litter"[/link], an attempt to redeem Dark Siders

    Author: AzureAngel2, still loving to teach her mother language in a country far, far away. Even though this is not that easy most of the time.

    Co-Author and editor: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/UserPages/Profile.aspx?user=DarthUncle]DarthUncle[/link]

    Chief Editor: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/UserPages/Profile.aspx?user=SWpants666]swpants666[/link]!

    Time frame: The story itself takes place during the fall of Jacen Solo to the Dark Side of the Force, but is played out long before even the Old Republic did exist.

    Summary: Jacen Skywalker, alias Darth Caedus, has fastened his cousin Ben Skywalker to the Embrace of Pain, an evil device of the Yuuzhan Vong for prisoner restraint. While screaming himself hoarse with agony, an unknown Force ghost visits Ben. The beautiful woman shrouds herself not only in mystery, but in wise words and honest pleas that do not help him to cope with the situation that he is in. She even tells him her entire life story.

    Disclaimer: SW is owned by George Lucas and Lucas Lt. !!!

    Status: in progress



    The Saga

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/P2220490.jpg]

    Titel: Memoires of a handmaiden

    Co-Author and editor: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/UserPages/Profile.aspx?user=DarthUncle]DarthUncle[/link]

    Timeframe: Shortly after Padme's death on Polis Massa.

    Place: Naboo

    Characters: Sabé

    Summery: One of the handmaidens remembers her mistress after the funeral service on Naboo.

    Inspiration: What went before was [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Boards/Message.aspx?topic=29142541&brd=10476]a Padmé story[/link] that reflected her marriage with Anakin. But I asked myself constantly what other people might say on that subject, especially after the circumstances of Padm
     
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