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Problem Child - ObiWan/Qui-Gon AU (Second Teaser )

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Just_Jill, Nov 15, 2002.

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  1. Jovieve

    Jovieve Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Flash

    :p

    Gotta catch me first...and you know Jill will snatch you baldheaded if you keep me hogtied too long...I'm slow enough beta-ing.

    Ciao bellas :cool:
     
  2. Just_Jill

    Just_Jill Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Velvet_Elfin - Welcome!

    can't wait until the sequel is posted.
    After Christmas. Probably the morning of the second.

    Flashbacca - As much as I enjoy your friendship, Jovieve is right. I don't mind that Darth Real Life gets in the way, but when a reader does, it gives me something to really get my hands on. :D

    Just Jill
     
  3. forever_jedi

    forever_jedi Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Hi Just_Jill It seems awfully far till the 2nd. How about giving us a small teaser till then; it could help tide us over!

    Also, will Anakin make an appearance in any of your sequels? Say, the third?
     
  4. Just_Jill

    Just_Jill Jedi Youngling star 3

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    forever_jedi - How about giving us a small teaser till then

    I thought about it, and couldn't come up with anything. So I'll check again.

    Hope this suffices.


    Then there was a shout in the room behind him and he knew he was out of time. Before he could even think of getting away, the door burst open, shoving him into the men that encircled him. He lost the staff in the following scuffle. Before long, they had him pinned down on his knees, arms twisted behind him.

    "Where is the girl?" one asked.

    Obi-Wan took a deep breath. From body guard to slave in three months. Had to be a record. He started to answer, then changed his mind. Give them time, he thought, and glared up at the man before him.

    "We can make you talk," the man said, and smiled. "Open that staff again. And get some rope."

    [hr]

    As for Anakin, yes, he will make an appearance. In the third book.

    Just Jill>
     
  5. no1-important

    no1-important Jedi Youngling

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    That was a very naughty teaser. It's almost as bad the "Breathe" teaser for Episode II. I'm bouncing with anticipation. And am anxiously awaiting the 2nd. :D
     
  6. Padawan_Travina

    Padawan_Travina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ok Jill....

    That was an evil post if I ever saw one...:)

    So when will the next book be up?

    PT
     
  7. Cicci

    Cicci Jedi Youngling star 2

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    No! You're more evil than I thought...after Christmas, you said? No chance of a Christmas present post?
     
  8. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    Darn, you had to throw us that bone to wet our appetites, didn't you, Jill?

    :_| It seems too long a wait.
     
  9. forever_jedi

    forever_jedi Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Just_Jill Thanks for the teaser. All good news so far: bodyguard Obi, slave Obi! I do hope, in the midst of this, Padawan Obi too!

    I am eagerly awaiting your sequel, as well as the third one too: I presume the last is going to be grown-up Obi and apprentice Anakin. Ah, the many faces of Obi!
     
  10. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Master star 5

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    You give us tantalizing little tidbits and not much else. I guess that's why it's called a teaser :)
     
  11. Just_Jill

    Just_Jill Jedi Youngling star 3

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    no1-important - I'm bouncing with anticipation.
    Oh, good! Morning of the Second.

    Padawan_Travina - That was an evil post if I ever saw one
    Is there another kind, when a teaser is involved? [face_mischief]

    Cicci - No chance of a Christmas present post?
    Sorry, I'm going to be out of town with no chance to do more than check email.

    Jedi_Suzuran - you had to throw us that bone to wet our appetites, didn't you,
    Blame forever_jedi. She asked. :p

    forever_jedi - All good news so far
    Glad to make you happy! ;)

    PadawanKitara - Exactly.


    Hope you all have a great holiday season.

    Just Jill
     
  12. Jedi_Knight150

    Jedi_Knight150 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    You have got to be kidding me! You gave us a cliffie and the story hasn't even been posted yet! That's a new level of evilness!!
     
  13. Tahiri

    Tahiri Jedi Master star 4

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    I absolutely cannot wait!!! [face_insanely_happy]
     
  14. Just_Jill

    Just_Jill Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jedi_Knight150 - You gave us a cliffie and the story hasn't even been posted yet!
    Yep. [face_mischief]

    Tahiri - Only two more weeks!

    Here's the last teaser before I leave for my in-laws for Christmas. I hope you all enjoy the holiday season!

    He snorted softly, remembering working with Obi-Wan on his fear just after the boy had become his Padawan two years ago. They'd been in their common room, facing each other in meditation, working on releasing the feelings into the Force. "They won't go, Master," Obi-Wan had said in some frustration.

    "Then wait until they do," he'd responded with a calm that often seemed to frustrate Obi-Wan, although it hadn't that time.

    Obi-Wan had given him a look he still didn't know how to read. "Perhaps you'd better start dinner, Master," he'd said, and there had been a resigned tone in his voice. "This may take a while."
    [hr]


    Just Jill>
     
  15. no1-important

    no1-important Jedi Youngling

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    You are most evil!!! :mad: It's so hard to wait until the 2nd. I'm pulling hair out! AAARRGGGHHH!!!! :_|
     
  16. Cicci

    Cicci Jedi Youngling star 2

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    That was good, but evil.

    Hope you have a wonderful Christmas! :)
     
  17. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Master star 5

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    Jill must love us to give us a second teaser :)

    I can't wait for January!
     
  18. forever_jedi

    forever_jedi Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Obi-Wan had given him a look he still didn't know how to read. "Perhaps you'd better start dinner, Master," he'd said, and there had been a resigned tone in his voice. "This may take a while."

    Ah! Obi had his dry, wry sense of humor back then too!

    Enjoy your vacation,Just_Jill and come back with lots of little posties!
     
  19. Padawan_Travina

    Padawan_Travina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    **runs away crying about how evil authors are**

    PT
     
  20. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    *stomps foot*

    Quit throwing us postie bones and give us the story already! :mad:

    :p Just playing. Can't wait for the whole thing. ;)
     
  21. Flashbacca

    Flashbacca Jedi Padawan star 4

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    **grabs bone and gnaws thoroughly** [face_devil]

    Thank you J_J for the teasers..... as for snatching me bald..... well, I do have an awful lot of hair :p

    Truthfully though, I would never harm Jovieve.... or even a little ol' fly.... I'm just a harmless furball :D [face_eyes pointed skyward, lips pursed, whistling innocently]

    Waiting (im)patiently for the 2nd :D because I [face_love] your stories :)

    Have a MERRY CHRISTMAS

    :cool: The Wookiee
     
  22. Sabe126

    Sabe126 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Just started reading this. Congratulations on your award. Once I finish this I will start on the sequel.
     
  23. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Master star 4

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    Just_Jill - these are two wonderful stories you have here (Problem Child and its sequel). I read them a month or so ago, and I've been meaning to leave a worthy reply, but I keep forgetting, so I'll up this for now and when I get my thoughts together I'll come back. :)

    But I happened to notice that you are indeed a new mommy now? Congratulations to you, then! :D
     
  24. HHP

    HHP Jedi Master

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    Up. :p This is too good of a story to let sink into oblivion. :D
     
  25. LumiKuningatar

    LumiKuningatar Jedi Youngling star 3

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    me would like to have some more.. please..
     
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