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  1. DarkJade

    DarkJade Jedi Youngling

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    Nov 5, 2001
    Jacinta I'm not really sure I understand your question but if you're character is original (as in you created him or her or other all on your own) then please feel free to go ahead and post the profile! In fact, I'm askin' you too! :)

     
  2. ArnaKyle

    ArnaKyle Jedi Master star 4

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    Nov 12, 2000
    Name: Syana Kyle
    Hair: Dark Brown
    Eyes: Brown
    Height: 5?5"

    Rank: Lt. Col. in the NRM (New Republic Military)

    Weapon of choice: I'm not very creative with weapons...so if they had such a thing, the M-16.

    Person she trusts most: Jacen Solo
    Person she distrusts most: Probably Viqi Shesh, or her family.
    Other friends: Jaina, I guess, but not really. Frances Demtter, Garis Taledor (2 more OCs).

    Greatest Strength: Determination, and a strong resistance to the Vong.
    Greatest Weakness: Her past.
    Greatest Ambition: To live the way she wants to live.

    Accomplishments: Commander in the NRM, escaped death by the Vong. And love interest of/to Jacen Solo.
    Related quote: "Just because you played hero doesn't mean you get to take my shirt off so fast." Haha, don't ask. If you read the story it makes a LOT more sense...and doesn't sound perverted.

    Appearances: War Within (main character) Link is in the sig. Cameo in Blue Orchids.


    Great idea, I'm gonna have to check some of these stories out.
     
  3. Jedi Girl of Corellia

    Jedi Girl of Corellia Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jun 23, 2000
    Seen in By the Sea Shore, and Twilight of Innocence.

    Name: Hendrix Empyrean
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Gray

    Rank: Jedi Padawan and eventually a knight

    Lightsaber color: blue
    Padawan: Enoch Melci then Dustin T'Kaal
    Master: Edana Panacean

    Person he trusts most: Edana
    Person he distrusts most: Obi-wan
    Other friends: Obi-wan, most of the 'guys' at the temple.

    Greatest Strength: His athletiscism
    Greatest Weakness: Singing
    Greatest Ambition: To get the girl

    Accomplishments: He wrote several books and managed to have a padawan reach the age of 14 and beyond.
    Most related quote: 'You've lost that luvin' feeling...'

    ~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~

    Appears in Twilight of Innocence (see if you can guess who she is.) And soon to be in her very own fic, Lady of Lusankya.

    Name: Lady Lusankya
    Hair: Red-blond
    Eyes: blue

    Rank: Lady of the Sith, or Imperial Colonel

    Lightsaber color: Red
    Padawan: None
    Master: Was trained very unothadoxly

    Person she trusts most: Her father
    Person she distrusts most: the Emperor and Vader
    Other friends: Enoch Melchi

    Greatest Strength: Her mind control powers
    Greatest Weakness: Lightsaber skills
    Greatest Ambition: To 'show up' those who doubted her.

    Accomplishments: Convinced some very important Rebels that she is always right; convinced her father to follow all her orders.
    Most related quote: "I've never liked you Anakin, ever since we met I've felt you were rotten."
     
  4. JediGaladriel

    JediGaladriel Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Sep 3, 1999
    These three were created casually to fill space in "I'm Your What?" (as charges in Sanctuary, the orphanage that the adult Kitster operates), but they sort of took over on me, and they've taken on lives of their own. They all operate in the JG version of post-RotJ, which has pretty much nothing to do with the professional EU. (Amidala has returned to Theed and retaken the throne; Anakin has claimed a clone, stood trial, and been sentenced to be a wandering knight; Luke took awhile to find a padawan, and decided to stick with a shortened version of the traditional way rather than starting an academy).

    (For those who have read and noticed the change in Kit's name, I found on the official site that Kitster does have a last name -- Binai -- which was cool to me, since it actually rhymes with the name I gave him -- Jarai -- so I decided to make the switch.)

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    Name: Dritali Neral
    Hair: Black (waist length, thick and coarse)
    Eyes: dark brown

    Distinguishing Mark: A bowl-shaped scar that crosses the bridge of her nose and hooks under her right eye.

    Rank:First Scion of Zompesha and Lady of Lake Zhinahumi (later, padawan->knight->master)

    Lightsaber color: blue
    Padawan: Zemai Laryhi II (called "Little Zem")
    Master: Luke Skywalker

    Person he/she trusts most: Kit Binai (Kitster)
    Person he/she distrusts most: her deceased father, Lord Ynob Neral
    Other friends:
    Kerea Morlana, a surviver of Alderaan
    Vertash G'lahter, the orphaned son of an Imperial officer killed aboard the first Death Star (Kerea's boyfriend)

    Greatest Strength: Able to see the truth of people and situations, even when it's not apparent to other people
    Greatest Weakness: Extremely unsure of herself, frightened of her power
    Greatest Ambition: To sit on the Jedi Council and oversee the choosing and training of padawans

    Accomplishments: At eight, manages to mentally contact Lord Vader, who comes to her rescue ("Uprising"); at fifteen, becomes Luke's first padawan ("The Penitent"; at eighteen, is knighted after she resolves a political dispute on her home planet of Zompesha ("The Lady of the Lake")
    Most related quote: "You can't forget what's written on your face." (From "The Penitent" -- this ends up bearing on Anakin's sentence)

    Basic backstory: Dritali and her abusive father fled to Coruscant after an uprising ousted him from power on Zompesha (Mother was mysteriously absent -- she later learned that her father had killed her mother). When she feared for her life, she instinctively used the Force, which called Vader to her. He killed her father and sent her to Sanctuary to be raised by Kit. She later has to testify against him in the murder of her father, but in the process, she meets Luke, who senses her power and takes her as a padawan.

    First full story: Uprising

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    Name: Kerea Morlana
    Hair: Blond (ear-length, fine)
    Eyes: blue

    Rank: None; civilian (survivor of Alderaan)

    Jedi questions: N/A


    Person he/she trusts most: Vertash G'lahter, Kit Binai (Kitster)
    Person he/she distrusts most: Falor Seranal, an Alderaanian cult leader who preaches that all remnants of the Empire (including Vertash) ought to be destroyed to "purify" the New Republic
    Other friends:
    Dritali Neral
    Leia Organa
    Ivva Japui, another Alderaan survivor, between Leia's age and Kerea's


    Greatest Strength: Talented clothing designer/seamstress and sometime artist
    Greatest Weakness: A tendency to boss people around without waiting for consent, a bit spoiled
    Greatest Ambition: To make things beautiful again

    Accomplishments: Creates a royal wardrobe for Lando Calrissian, Prince of Theed; creates Amidala's wedding dress for her vow renewal (both in "The Penitent")

    Most related quote: "This is really turvy-curvy. Let's shake." (To Vertash, i
     
  5. PeterTutham27

    PeterTutham27 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aug 23, 2001
    Name: Piotr Tutius ("Pete")
    Species: Human
    Gender: Male
    Age: 16
    Home world: None, born in hyperspace
    Build: Tall and thin, he has rough hands and a strong body from working
    with ships and machines, but he's not what I'd call 'rippling'...
    Hair Color: Ruffled black
    Eye Color: Ice Blue
    Rank in Storm Squardron: Lt.
    Rank in Jedi order: Freshly appointed Jedi Knight
    Weapons: Light Blue Lightsaber, Huntsman-250 Handblaster (Impervious
    to cold)
    Power other than the Force: Incredible tolerance to all weather, can
    work with machines, ships, computers, and droids instantly, and fix most
    any problems, although he couldn't really explain to you what he did...
    Best defense: Cool-headedness and improvisation
    Personalty: The only two places he's actually comfortable are in the
    pilot's seat of a ship.. or fixing one... He's not used to being around
    people, and it sets him off, and he's not used to expressing almost any
    emotion. He is usually calm though and knows that hard work, ingenuity,
    and the Force will get him through anything. He is best when alone, but
    does not reject others. Piotr talks rarely, and usually only in a ship, or
    when he is working on his newest mechanical problem.
    History: After his family was attacked by space pirates, they barely
    escaped into hyperspace, where Piotr's mother went into forced labor
    and she died giving birth to him. Incidently, the mother had been on the
    way to Coruscant to give birth to him there at the Jedi Temple, she
    herself being an ex-Jedi Healer. His father had hated Jedi and left his
    mother after he had found out, so Piotr was raised by his older brother,
    'Tech', who also taught him machines and rudementary skills in the
    Force, although he himself had almost no talent in it. When Piotr was 8,
    he was brought to the temple, who, knowing his mother, and the fact
    that he had been trained, accepted him warily. They were impressed by
    his hard working attitude and how well he excelled in his studies. After
    being Padawan to Jedi Master Vor Kass-han, he passed the trials, and
    was then approached by Yoda to enter Storm Squdron, based on his
    flying efforts which saved a space colony (Mostly made of Yoda's
    species...)
     
  6. PeterTutham27

    PeterTutham27 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aug 23, 2001
    Name: Jean-A Rouss (Pronounced SheenAy Roos)
    Species: Golnian
    Gender: male/female (usually referred to as 'he')
    Age: 27
    Build: 6'5'', Thin, with long arms and legs but fully shaped with tight
    muscles, he has an oblong head and long graceful fingers. Everything about
    him seems streched.
    Homeworld: Agolnia
    Eye color: (Oblong Large) Gold
    Hair color: Blonde
    Gray Power: Mind Meld, Mind Control, Image Projection
    Rank in order of gray: Newbie (TBD)
    Rank in Jedi order: Jedi Knight
    Hobbies: meditating, arts (performing and creative)
    Weapons: green bladed lightsaber
    Defenses: Fighting skills, Gray Powers, The Real 'Evil Eye' (a form of lasers
    from eyes)
    Personality: Quiet, calm and reflective, Jean-A has instant sympathy with
    all creatures, and is a very likeable being because of it... He is always
    ready to give advice, but it is cool logic with a firm morality that helps out
    Jean-A in any conflicts
    History: On Agolnia, when a male and a female mate for life, they become a
    strange meld of both in one form... Jedi Knights Janac and Rousseau were
    both powerful Jedi Knights who married and mated to become Jean-A
    Rouss... They share both's memories, but are now one soul, without a
    conflicted mind... It is looked on by 'him' as just the next life stage he had
    to go through... He is usually peaceful, but when threatened, Jean-A
    reacts instantly and completely, and is not prone to leave loose ends
    hanging... Jean-A is very creative and hopes that joining the Order of the
    Phoenix will further his development after only melding 6 months ago...

    Jean-A can be found using the Gray side at:
    http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=4971126&replies=8
     
  7. Lonewolf89

    Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master star 5

    Registered:
    Sep 26, 2001
    From: Dead or Alive

    Name: Cavin Setrin
    Hair: Blond
    Eyes: Emerald Green

    Rank: None

    Lightsaber color: None
    Padawan: None
    Master: None

    Person he/she trusts most: Himself
    Person he/she distrusts most: Every one else in the galaxy
    Other associates: Darius Raday

    Greatest Strength: His blaster accuracy
    Greatest Weakness: Social Skills
    Greatest Ambition: To find his father's killer

    Most related quote: "I don't like this."


     
  8. Cheveyo

    Cheveyo Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Oct 29, 2001
    [image=http://www.theforce.net/museum/images/Miscellaneous/bn-prryogurryncol.jpg]
    Born 520 years before the Battle of Yavin, Master Prryo Gurryn was a prominent member of the Jedi Order in the last peaceful era of the Old Republic. His race, a characteristically feline species called the Rriandi, aged at a very slow rate; Master Prryo himself lived 121 years.

    Master Gurryn was a scholar and philosopher first. His duty as a knight and warrior supervened his passion for non-violent resolutions. During Chancellor Macnimeril?s administration (c. 492-480 BSW4), he formed and then chaired the Senate?s Treaties and Annexations Committee (TAC). This organization was responsible for the inclusion of seven new worlds into the Galactic Republic, and the peaceful resolution of twelve civil disputes.

    In 486 BSW4, the Jedi Master flew to Nar Shadda with a team of peace-keepers, intent on preventing an escalation to the civil revolt gripping the spaceport moon. Master Gurryn had learned that the dissident faction was willing to begin peace talks, but radical militant groups loyal to the Hutt-controled government had thwarted any such process. A number of rebels had already been killed by the time Prryo?s team arrived.

    With the Jedi?s security force in place, the peace negotiations opened promptly under a cease-fire agreement. Within the week, a treaty was drafted and signed by the Nar Shaddan prefect and the rebel leaders. Arrangements were made for the dissidents to relocate to a nearby world where they could set forth their own state.

    On the eve of their departure, however, four of the six transport freighters?already loaded with dissident refugees?exploded in high orbit over the ?smuggler?s moon?. All aboard were killed. On the surface, the two remaining freighters were sabotaged and declared unfit for space travel. Shortly after the discovery of sabotage, Nar Shaddan loyalists attacked the spaceport.

    Holed up in a warehouse adjacent to the spaceport, Master Gurryn and his team protected the remaining fifty-three rebels until Republic escort cruisers arrived. Stories later emerged from the refugees telling of Master Gurryn?s bravery and composure. One such tale claims that during one of the sieges on the warehouse, the Jedi Master fought off the loyalists without ever igniting his lightsabre.

    With the resignation of Chancellor Macnimeril came the end of the TAC and Prryo Gurryn?s direct involvement with the Senate. The master spent the next fifty years serving the Jedi Order as an ambassador and at times, special investigator. Rumors abound that he was often considered for a chair on the Jedi Council during this time; however, no official mention of his name was ever given, and he adamantly denied the claim whenever asked.

    Then, in 423 BSW4 (at the age of 97), Master Gurryn was given the opportunity to take on a Padawan learner. He watched over the young Jedi hopefuls, attending the Padawan competitions each year, waiting for the one individual whose destiny he shared.

    That individual turned out to be a young Chandrillan named Kaatje Tolwyn. The master accepted the 12-year-old girl as his student, and continued her training in the ways of the Force.

    The aged Jedi reached the end of his fruitful life in 399 BSW4. In this relatively peaceful era, Jedi Master Prryo Gurryn died as he had lived. Knowing that his time to join the Living Force was near, he said his farewells to his former student, Kaatje?now herself a knight of the Order. Master Gurryn passed away in the company of his friends and loved ones. His state of calm reassured and even astonished those present not trained in the Force. His parting words to them were said with a reassuring smile. ?Trust in the Force. We will meet in another place.?

    Prryo Gurryn?s lightsabre hangs reverently beside the icons of other respected masters in the Jedi Temple.
     
  9. Gandalf the Grey

    Gandalf the Grey Jedi Knight star 6

    Registered:
    May 14, 2000
    Name: Corwin
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: Green

    Profession: Assassin

    Person he/she trusts most: Himself
    Person he/she distrusts most: The universe in general
    Other friends: None.

    Greatest Strength: He?s smart.
    Greatest Weakness: He?s arrogant.
    Greatest Ambition: None.

    Accomplishments: Has killed everything from Republic Senators to Black Sun Crime Lords.
     
  10. JediGaladriel

    JediGaladriel Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Sep 3, 1999
    Name: Ivva Japui
    Hair: Dirty blonde, longish
    Eyes: blue

    Rank: Council member to Queen Amidala

    Profession: Lawyer

    Person he/she trusts most: Garlien (an older man who raised her after the destruction of Alderaan)
    Person he/she distrusts most: Vali Umbuimi, an opposing lawyer
    Other friends:
    Kit Binai

    Greatest Strength: Loyalty and honesty
    Greatest Weakness: Ivva's fairly aimless; she doesn't know what she wants
    Greatest Ambition: None

    Accomplishments: Served (unsuccessfully) as the defense attorney for Anakin Skywalker in "The Penitent"; as a teenager, helped Rebels escape the Empire
    Most related quote: "I am your defense lawyer. I am not coming up with an excuse for you. I'm trying to give the court an explanation. And in case you haven't noticed the shape of the new order, Lord Vader, the point of a trial is that they decide what the evidence means, and come up with a verdict. You do not do so by yourself." (From "The Penitent" -- she is finally sick of Anakin's having already convicted himself)

    Basic backstory: Ivva won a scholarship to boarding school on Chandrilla as a child, becoming the first member of her family to attend school off of Alderaan. She was taking a math exam when Tarkin came onto the holoproj to announce the destruction of her homeworld. It took time, but she adjusted. She was visiting friends on Bespin on holiday when the Empire took it over, which was the last straw -- now in her mid-teens, she sought out the Rebellion and served it by helping rebels escape the Empire. She was helped by an older man named Garlien, and when Naboo was resurrected and Queen Amidala invited the Alderaanian refugees, both came, and were elected to serve on her council of advisors ("First Encounteres"). She was chosen as a defense attorney for two trials because both defendants knew that she would not use unethical means to win acquittal.

    First full story: Extreme Action


    ++++++++++++

    Name: Vali Umbuimi
    Hair: Black (worn in long, sculpted curls, Roman style)
    Eyes: dark brown

    Profession: Lawyer (formerly sheriff)

    Connections: Vali is less likely to trust/mistrust or like/dislike people than ideas. She prides herself on being fair minded and tough, and not letting personal attachments cloud her judgment. She is fiercely devoted to the concept of justice, and saves her highest dislike for people who confuse it with vengeance.

    Greatest Strength: Very intelligent, sure of herself
    Greatest Weakness: Miscalculates the way more emotional people think
    Greatest Ambition: To get every sentient being in the galaxy to behave rationally

    Accomplishments: Successfully prosecuted a case against a crime lord under Palpatine's protection. As a "reward" she was sent to the crime-ridden Outer Rim world of Yhanubi as a law enforcement officer. She became sheriff of the capitol and actually managed to get the world under control and behaving itself. When she heard of the trial of Anakin Skywalker/Lord Vader, she offered to prosecute and did so successfully.
    Most related quote:"That makes it all easy, doesn't it? Bad things happened, so he did bad things. He did bad things to other people, now they want to do bad things in return. Where does it stop? I'll tell you where it stops. Right here. With me. With Ivva and Leia. We decide, and it is over. Finally and for good." (From "The Penitent," when Kit tries to explain away Anakin's behavior as having been caused by negative social factors.)
     
  11. jedi-thespian

    jedi-thespian Jedi Youngling star 3

    Registered:
    Mar 9, 2001
    Here's my favorite:

    Appears in Obi and Sabe (my version) and The Natrals :

    Name: Branon Windu
    Hair: Bald (He's African-American)
    Race: African-American
    Height: 6'5"
    Weight: 220
    Eyes: Brown, mixing with Green sometimes because of his maternal orgins.

    Rank: Glasconian leader at first, then accends to other things.

    Lightsaber color: Green
    Master: none, he was never formally trained.
    Padawan: see above

    Person he trusts most: Obi-Wan Kenobi or Mace Windu
    Person he trusts least: a person he senses is leaning towards the Dark Side
    Other friends: Adi Gallia, Sabé Jinn, Terzé (a handmaiden), several connections throughout the galaxy.

    Greatest Strength: Extreme Force-sensititivy, Very clever.
    Greatest Weakness: Has never had formal Jedi training, gets cold when he is around a concentrated source of the Dark Side.
    Greatest Ambition: To keep his friends and family from harm

    Accomplishments: Has saved several people's lives. Obi-Wan's main informant during the dark times.
    Most related quote: "I have already told you. It's classified. Ever hear of 'plausible deniability'?"

    Okay, I have to add a scenes of dialogue, one that involves Branon and Obi-Wan:

    Dialogue #1 Obi-Wan and Branon:

    Early the next morning, Ben's communicator, which was on the nightstand, beeping and woke him up,

    He blinked his eyes, looked over to his wife to see if she were still asleep, and then reached for the the communicator,

    "Yes?" he quietly spoke into the communicator.

    "Kenobi?" the voice was Branon's.

    "What do you want, Branon?"

    "You don't need to come now, but later on today I need to speak with you on a very urgent matter concerning a certain politician."

    Ben, for all his tiredness, didn't realize for a moment about whom his friend was speaking of. When it hit him, he sat straight up in bed and once again looked at his wife to make sure that she was sound asleep. He then whispered into the communicator,

    "Do you mean...?"

    "Don't say it, this channel might not be safe. I'll come to you later on."

    Ben whispered even more quietly,

    "What do you want to talk about the person for?"

    "...Why are you whispering?"

    Ben rolled his eyes. Still whispering, he continued,

    "The high alcohol content in that Deruvian punch that you were consuming last night seems to have affected your memory, Branon! I'm married, for Pete's sake!"

    "...Oh yeah. That remains me..." There was a slight trace of amusement in Branon's voice, "did you sleep well last night, Kenobi?"

    "Branon, one more 'wedding night' joke from you and I'll..."

    "Tsk, tsk, tsk, Kenobi. Jedi supposed to make threats."

    "That wasn't a threat, Branon. That was a promise."

    "I get the picture, Kenobi. See you later."

    "Goodbye."

     
  12. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

    Registered:
    Sep 21, 2000
    Name: Georaje Claner The Courtship
    Hair: Dark brown
    Eyes: Dark brown
    Race: Human male
    Age: Thirty
    Rank: Captain
    Place of last known origin: Naboo

    Lightsaber Color: None
    Padawan: None
    Master: None

    Person he trusts the most: Himself
    Person he distrusts the most: Han Solo

    Other Friends: Lando Calrissian

    Greatest strength: His loyalty to those he loves
    Greatest weakness: His family
    Greatest Ambition: To have the life Han has with the Rebellion.

    Accomplishments: Raised himself from boyhood upon the death of his grandmother.

    Most related quote: Vader: Don't test my patience Mr. Caner
    Georaje: I suggest you don't test mine!

    ...From The Courtship



     
  13. Veng_Commando

    Veng_Commando Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Oct 26, 2001
    Name: Lu Lorzen
    Aliases: Kile Curran, Veng_Commando, and "Get out of my way!"
    Age: 19
    Hair: Black, shaped with a split down the middle like Chinese men wear.
    Eyes: Black, all black, a holowat trait.
    Nationality: looks Spanish with Chinese eyes, even though it doesn't exist in SW

    Rank: NRAF (New Republic Armed Forces, which is a branch of the NRM)Leuitenant
    Weapon of choice:Costom made LI-Karosean Pusle Cannon, mouth, Rule Number One

    Person he trusts most: YVK (Yuuzhan Vong Killer) droid, sister Rooney Lorzen
    Person he distrusts most: YVK (Yuuzhan Vong Killer) droid, sister Rooney Lorzen
    Other friends: Bodsan Dand, Shawn Ban[almost] Julian [pronounced who-lee-an] Morgeh, Lauren Luvshoy (say that fast)

    Greatest Strength: Speed and ability to cling to walls[tree hobbit trait] sheer luck
    Greatest Weakness: Pretty Women (walking down the street, pretty women...)
    Greatest Ambition: Dating Jaina Solo

    Accomplishments: He is was supposed to die a long time ago, the Grim Reaper of the SW[the Grim Jedi, with lightsaber scythe and all] told him so. Also one of the only Hobbits [pronounced hoe-bets] ot leave Gengle in thousands of years.
    Most related quote: "he's the kind of guy who'd go to the top of a hill, in a thunder storm, wearing a new copper suit of armor yelling 'gods are stupid!'" -Terry Pratchett

    Anything else: He's a hobbit[pronounced hoe-bet] from Gengle. There's two types, ground dwellers, who have no pupil even, and can see in the dark, and tree dwellers, who can cling to most surfaces and are really fast. Rooney is his twin sister, yet they look nothing alike [their skin, for instance, is not the same color. must be all that intersteller traveling Lu has done.]

    Biggets Surprise:
    HE ISN'T A JEDI, AND ONLY IS INVOLVED WITH THE JEDI BY THE GRIM JEDI, WHO'ME HE'S MET MILLIONS OF TIME. SHAVIT, THE CAPSLOCK IS STUCK.
     
  14. Veng_Commando

    Veng_Commando Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Oct 26, 2001
  15. Cheveyo

    Cheveyo Jedi Grand Master star 5

    Registered:
    Oct 29, 2001
    [image=http://www.theforce.net/museum/images/Miscellaneous/bn-kaatjetolwyncol.jpg]
    Kaatje Tolwyn?s adventures began at the early age of three. In 432 BSW4 she left behind her family and homeworld of Chandrilla to be raised in the ways of the Force.

    Her flight from home to school was not uneventful, however. The transport that carried her and her escort?a young Jedi Knight named Gill Twen Pall?to Coruscant was hijacked by pirates working for the Hutts. Twen Pall assisted in the retaking of the transport, but was killed in the melee. Kaatje had watched in horror as a trio of malcontents overran the knight. He had been shot and knocked unconscious, then knifed and bludgeoned to death. One of them noticed the child huddled in the corner, watching them as they desecrated the knight?s dead form.

    A number of passengers came to Kaatje?s rescue when they heard her scream. They killed two of the hijackers and incapacitated the third. One of her rescuers, an older man calling himself Lector, took care of Kaatje until they arrived at Coruscant.

    Witnessing such a horrendous event at such an early and influential age set in motion her future role as a Jedi. Her teachers at the Temple often chided her for voraciously seeking action to resolve situations. ?Action and aggression,? one master had told her, ?should not replace diplomacy and compassion.?

    Kaatje?s schooling was completed by her twelfth birthday. As was custom, she participated in the annual student trials attended by those masters who sought an apprentice. During her presentation, she noticed a small, blue form in a brown fur cape watching her every move. She recognized the visage of Master Prryo Gurryn in an instant, and fought to quell her excitement. The hero of Nar Shadda was watching her!

    Master Gurryn did chose Kaatje as his Padawan learner. He later confided to her that he had seen greatness in her that day, but her tempestuous resolve had unnerved him. He hoped that with his training, she would be able to temper her unbridled vigor with peaceful resolve.

    In time, Master Gurryn?s hopes came to fruition. Unwilling to squelch his Padawan?s spirit, he taught her to be mindful of her strengths and weaknesses and find the balance within her. Over the years, Kaatje metamorphosed from the hastened, reactionary youth to a calculating, even inexcitable Jedi Knight.

    Kaatje Tolwyn become renown for her stunning mindset, and was often assigned by the Council to criminal investigations.

    One such case led her on a manhunt for the bounty hunter, Natt Ramsu. Kaatje was tasked with solving the mass-murder of three Republic senators and their aides. Upon analysis of the crime scene, she learned of Ramsu?s involvement and set to detain him.

    Over the course of several months the Knight followed several leads to a seedy cantina in the downtown sector of Gibrali, the capital city of Terros, along the Outer Rim territories. Two days of surveillance paid off when the armor-clad bounty hunter at last sauntered into his haunt of choice.

    Ramsu left the dive after several hours of consorting with the other dregs. Kaatje shadowed him as he made his way to a nearby hostel. She prepared to confront him as he entered his suite, but was, herself, ambushed. The murderer had caught sight of her as he left the cantina and slipped behind the knight as she entered the hostel. The ensuing battle destroyed much of the inn?s second floor.

    Kaatje chased Ramsu out into the street, dodging and deflecting blaster bolts as she went. The bounty hunter fled to the nearby air-tram station, where he again instigated a destructive melee with the Jedi.

    Ramsu?s flight from prosecution met a gruesome end when he fell in front of a landing tram. The tram?s operator swerved to miss the bounty hunter and collided with the station?s maintenance shed. The tram exploded with a hail of fiery debris, killing Natt Ramsu and several others in the front compartments of the long vehicle.

    In an attempt to rescue one of the tram?s passengers, Kaatje sustained massive injuries to her
     
  16. Jairen

    Jairen Manager Emeritus star 4 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Sep 1, 2000
    Appears in: Echoes Of The Future

    Name: Kieran Dreen
    Age: 34
    Height: 6'4"
    Weight: 203 lbs.
    Hair: Brown
    Eyes: Blue

    Rank: Jedi Master

    Lightsaber: Blue
    Master: Thanus
    Padawan: N/A

    Person he trusts most: Syrenna Dreen
    Person he distrusts most: Emperor Palpatine
    Other friends: Thanus

    Greatest strength: His love for his family
    Greatest weakness: Too easily distracted from his focus
    Greatest ambition: To serve the Jedi well

    Accomplishments: Kieran Dreen completed his tests for the rank of Jedi Knight at the young age of 22, one of the youngest in Jedi history. He was often referred to as a model of Jedi virtue by his Master, Thanus, and Master Yoda. Despite breaking tradition on his 25th birthday and marrying, the Jedi did not order him removed from their ranks. After completing a secret mission for the council, he was awarded the rank of Jedi Master on his 30th birthday. Rumour within the Jedi suggested that he would be the youngest leader of the council ever when Master Yoda disappeared at around the time Anakin Skywalker was lost. He did not accept the position, instead choosing to remain a valuable roving asset for the Jedi Council.

    Most related quote: "I promise that I will always come back to you, no matter what."

    ++++++++++

    Appears in: Echoes Of The Future

    Name: Syrenna Dreen
    Age: 28
    Height: 5'7"
    Weight: 140
    Hair: Red/Blonde
    Eyes: Blue

    Rank: Captain

    Person she trusts most: Kieran
    Person she distrusts most: Thanus
    Other friends: Callista,

    Greatest strength: Her love for her family
    Greatest weakness: Her belief in Kieran
    Greatest ambition: To raise her daughter away from the Jedi

    Accomplishments: Syrenna was already a well established smuggler, working with her father until the age of 16. Her 16th birthday present from him had been her own ship, the Angelfire, a Corellian freighter, model YT-1100. She was smuggling spice during a fire-fight when she was 17 when her ship was damaged. She was saved by Kieran Dreen, a newly raised Jedi Knight. Their courtship lasted 2 years, fraught with disapproval from both sides, hers and Kieran's. They married against everyone's wishes, but found happiness with each other. Six years later, they had their first child, Mara Jade Dreen.

    Most related quote: "They want to play rough! I'll give them rough."
     
  17. Veng_Commando

    Veng_Commando Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Oct 26, 2001
    Name: Death
    Aliases: Grim Jedi, Dark Lord of the Dead
    Age: He's been here, and will be here
    Hair: hair? he's a skeleton!
    Eyes: supernovas, an eternal blackness with supernovas for pupils

    Job: Carrying the dead to what they believe will happen after death, Riding out with the other four, sometimes five if Chaos wants to join Death, War, Famine, and Pestilence in ther ride that preceeds the end of the universe. Getting pretty damn close with the Vong and all.

    Lightscythe color: Microscopic, can't really see. more blackish

    Person he trusts most: Death of Reptiles, even Death has to have a little bit of him that can do what it wants withoput much obligation.

    Person he distrusts most: He doesn't socialize much, he meets everyone but they leave soon after.

    Other friends: erm... yeah... other friends... rriiight

    Greatest Strength: Being Death
    Greatest Weakness: Being a diety, if people stop believing in him, he will disappear

    Accomplishments: Serpindile was hard, Death rides a very strong horse, but all those religious beliefs!

    Most related quote: He's real. -- Anyone

    Anything else:
    Nothing yet... I'll expand on his Character later...

    Most surprising thing:
    its a wooden scythe, with a lightsabre type blade sticking out... no mechanics at all. Hmm
     
  18. Jacinta_Kenobi

    Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Sep 23, 2001
    These are from my ALL original character story in the old republic called Jedi Bounty.

    Jedi Bounty

    I NEED READERS! :_|

    Anyway, here's the profiles of the two main characters.


    Name: Kyll Reatu
    Hair: Black
    Eyes: blue

    Rank: None, not a jedi

    Lightsaber color: N/A
    Padawan: N/A
    Master: N/A

    Person he/she trusts most: Adrea Fialya
    Person he/she distrusts most: Everyone else
    Other friends: None

    Greatest Strength: He can control his feelings completely
    Greatest Weakness: Adrea
    Greatest Ambition: To become the richest and best bounty hunter ever

    Accomplishments: Became a bounty hunter at 15, is now one of the best, and is only 23
    Most related quote: "I don't like anyone, no one likes me. Works out well, doesn't it?"

    Name: Adrea Fialya
    Hair: Brown
    Eyes: Brown

    Rank: Knight

    Lightsaber color: Lavender
    Padawan: N/A
    Master: Zayi Leker

    Person he/she trusts most: Kyll, eventually
    Person he/she distrusts most: anyone she doesn't know yet.
    Other friends: Her master, a few other people
    never took the time to make friends

    Greatest Strength: The force
    Greatest Weakness: Her unpredictability
    Greatest Ambition: Become the greatest Jedi she can be

    Accomplishments: Becoming a Jedi at 17
    Most related quote: "You can?t treat people like animals and hunt them down!?


    Finally! It's taken me so long to get around to this!
     
  19. Cheveyo

    Cheveyo Jedi Grand Master star 5

    Registered:
    Oct 29, 2001
    [image=http://www.theforce.net/museum/images/Miscellaneous/bn-ithorianherocol.jpg]
    Tin Rael was the first?and subsequently the last?of his clan to become a Jedi Knight. Though a skilled warrior, Rael was best known as a healer. His knowledge of medicines and herbal remedies complimented his gifts in the Force to make him a truly wise and revered Jedi.

    Rael was instrumental in eradicating the Tolriosin Plague, a disease that killed some twelve thousand Coruscant immigrants and hospitalized thousands more in 403 BSW4.
    Rael was able to track the virus? origin back to the tramp freighter that had transported the original forty carriers of the illness. He learned that the freighter had been on a world called Tolriosi prior to taking on the migrants.

    The un-populated world, along the Outer Rim, held not only the source of this highly contagious and deadly disease, but also the antibody. Using herbs from his home herdship on Ithor to increase the potency of the antibodies, Tin Rael concocted a serum that destroyed the virus and cured thousands of infected citizens.

    Rael worked closely with the Jedi Council, offering his expertise wherever it may be needed. In 370 BSW4, the Council teamed him with a 65-year-old Jedi Master named Kaatje Tolwyn. They were dispatched to investigate the mysterious death of a fellow Jedi Knight. The Council suspected foul play, although there was no physical evidence supporting their supposition.

    The two Jedi began their investigation by returning to Sernpidal and the scene of the mysterious death. With the Force as his guide, Rael discovered the presence of deadly spores on the ground where the Jedi had fallen. The way they were dispersed suggested they had been emitted?possibly sprayed?to infect the Jedi. The spores were not indigenous.

    Some lengthy research unearthed not only the origin of the spores, but also the name of a suspect. Juni Mellos was wanted for murder, robbery, and countless assault charges, the suspect was known for utilizing a spray stick to overpower his victims. The man was from the same world known to be the origin of the spores. To add credence to their suspicions, Tolwyn and Rael learned that Mellos had been seen on Sernpidal around the time of the Jedi?s death.

    After weeks of surveillance, the investigators set a trap for Juni Mellos. They intercepted him as he boarded a transport bound for the Corporate Sector.

    They had taken steps to insure safety before their arrest attempt. In fact, the transport was merely a ruse. Neither crew nor passenger compliment was aboard the ship when the two Jedi confronted Mellos. That proved to be a wise precaution, as Mellos resisted arrest in the deadliest of fashions.

    In the melee, Mellos let loose a mist of spores from a narrow tube weapon resembling a walking cane. Master Tolwyn was in the line of fire and could not prevent the deadly cloud from overtaking her.

    In the seconds following the use of his cane, Mellos?distracted by the victory over his second Jedi target?was un-handed by a lightsabre-wielding Tin Rael. The hand gripping the cane weapon landed on the deck plating an instant before the wailing Juni Mellos. With the suspect incapacitated, Rael set to work on his dying companion. Drawing on the powers of the Force, Tin Rael was able to heal the Jedi Master and dissolve the remaining spores.

    Soon after the mission, Tin Rael was given he title of Jedi Master by the Council on Coruscant. Throughout the years, he worked often with Master Tolwyn, assisting her on countless investigations, and many times accompanying her out in the field.

    At the twilight of his life, Tin Rael spent his time recording his knowledge for future generations. His completed holocron was placed in the Jedi Library upon his death.
     
  20. The Rover

    The Rover Jedi Youngling star 1

    Registered:
    Dec 28, 1999
    It has been a very long time since I logged on to the site. I was brousing and saw this wonderul thread. I read through them all and the characters that everyone has is really good. I didnt realize how much I miss being creative. ( cant wait to get back to that )

    Cheveyo, I especially like the artistic rendering of your characters. I will be drawing a whole bunch of original characters soon ( if I can ever help finish the current story I'm working on..JediGaladriel knows exactly what I mean by that :) )

    in the meantime, let me leave you with my main original character on this great thread.


    NAME: Jai'ana-Din Ronin
    HAIR: Mixture of Grey and Black shoulder length hair
    EYES: Soft Grey
    SEX: Female
    RACE: Alien Feline
    HEIGHT: 5'7"
    AGE: 33yrs( at the time of Dark Uprising ), 43yrs ( at the time of Aspects of The Force ), 910yrs( at the time of death )

    DISTINGUISHING MARK: Very soft white covered fur with small grey spots on the side of her face and palm of her hands. she also has a prehensive tail.

    RANK: Jedi Master
    LIGHTSABER COLOR: Bright Orange

    PADAWAN: Jastiss Otonna, Sengi Tysu,
    Bira-El Dunn, Xander Killian, Isileen Corra, Ginree Pai-Mai, Dalina Usi,
    Zu'isi Dea-Huna, Adi'la Gollu-Ra

    MASTER: Jedi Master Odar Velisa

    PERSON HE/SHE TRUST THE MOST: Jedi Master Coris Hakim
    PERSON HE/SHE DISTRUST THE MOST: General Rikkan

    OTHER FRIENDS: Jedi Knight Ular-Grimm Errar, Jedi Master Jaden Rylok, Jedi Knight Kai Raesell, Jedi Master Olan Tennaris

    GREATEST STRENGTH: Indomidable strength to resist evil, Unwavering loyalty to the Jedi Order

    GREATEST WEAKNESS: Her love for her children and their safety,

    GREATEST AMBITION: To serve the Jedi faithfully and live up to the teachings of her master

    ACCOMPLISHMENTS: Involved in helping to destroy The Sith Order ( 2000 years before TPM ) which still unfortunately led to the rise of Darth Bane, serve on the Jedi Council for a brief period. special liason for the council to the galactic senate

    MOST RELATED QUOTE: "To seek enlightenment should be your most ardent desire. For me, my desires shall never be fulfilled."

    APPEARED IN: The Sith Order: Dark Uprising, The Sith Order: Aspects of the Force, Strange Angels, Necromancer,
    Eternal Damnation

    HISTORY: From her poverish beginnings, the alien feline who be known as Jai'ana-Din Ronin has grown to become one of the greatest of Jedi Masters. She was born on Zeris, the second moon of the planet, Hoth. She was found at two weeks old among the rubble of her village, which was destroyed by unknown means. The one who discovered her was the legendary Jedi Master, Odar Velisa, who was traveling with three of his former Padawans ( Du'arin Syera, Hanza Es-Salaar and Lywin Xar-Vel ). Odar Velisa was nearing the end of his life and was about to go into seclusion when he found the infant. He felt the Force within her was too strong for him to not take notice as his former students also agreed. Odar Velisa bestowed on her the name Jai'ana-Din Ronin and brought the baby to Coruscant to become his ninth and final Padawan.

    Jai'ana-Din entire training in the ways of the Force was with her master in seclusion. Her early childhood was spent mastering the many forms of the Jedi arts that her master created and her later years was spent on spiritual development. She became very learned in the many protocols and manners that is associated with being a Jedi knight. ( a trait which followed Jai'ana-Din throughout her entire life that she was very fussy about to her chosen students ). She has grown into a deeply spiritual, kind hearted and compassionate woman who mastered everything that was taught to her in a short time. Odar Velisa understood the race of felines that she belonged to. They were passionate and warrior like in their genetic makeup. Jai'ana-Din was no different as she spent many years in her training to suppress
     
  21. Lonewolf89

    Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master star 5

    Registered:
    Sep 26, 2001
    From: Even Outcasts Can Be Heroes

    Name: Shaneir Sanar
    Hair: black
    Eyes: emerald green

    Rank: Leader of the Shadows

    Lightsaber color: gray
    Padawan: none
    Master: It was Brakiss

    Person he/she trusts most: Varis
    Person he/she distrusts most: pretty much everyone else


    Greatest Strength: lightsaber skill
    Greatest Weakness: manners
    Greatest Ambition: to honor Master Brakiss

    Accomplishments: Becoming Leader of the Shadows, and being Brakiss's most powerful student.
    Most related quote: 'You can fight with us, or you can stay here....'
     
  22. Veng_Commando

    Veng_Commando Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Oct 26, 2001
    Name: Lauren Luvshoy
    Aliases: Tina Meediat
    Hair: Brown, black when she dies it.
    Eyes: green and blue

    Rank: Thief

    weapon of choice: Dagger, whip

    Person she trusts most: Katye Hirra, Matrin Krop, Lu Lorzen
    Person she distrusts most: Rooney Lorzen, Anyone who's name you can't pronounce without spitting

    Other friends: Dunno, after she changes her name she lives a strange life

    Greatest Strength: her will
    Greatest Weakness: her past life
    Greatest Ambition: to start anew from how she bagan

    Accomplishments: Became human after a herasy project of the... Vong unfortunatly.

    Most related quote: "Do you want me to be jelouse?" -- The real Tina

    Most interesting thing:
    She was a ... Vong and became human. lets not talk about this ok? somthing else please... erm... yeah how about cheese?

    Most Surprising tihng:
    Cheese, something about it makes her like it. must've happened in the Vong/human transer. How many unheard of herasy things have happened?
     
  23. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Registered:
    May 15, 1999
    Appears in: Shadows of a Past Long Forgotten

    Name: Helaine "Lainey" Trillium
    Age: Physically: 16 Technically: 63
    Height: 5'4
    Weight: 115 lbs
    Hair: Brown
    Eyes: Blue

    Rank: Padawan

    Lightsaber color: Purple

    Master: Former:[/b] Lanelle Caine Latter Corran Horn

    Person she trusts most: Corran Horn
    Person he distrusts most: Tossup between Kyp Durron and Valdemar
    Other friends: Miranda Sierr, Armand Naberrie

    Greatest strength: Trust in the Force
    Greatest weakness: Too Shy
    Greatest ambition: To be a Jedi Knight

    Accomplishments: Sole survivor of the Purges, thanks inpart to a Sociopathic Jedi Hunter and Carbonite

    ***
    Name: Armand Naberrie
    Age: 19 almost 20
    Height: 6'1
    Weight: 175 lbs
    Hair: Dark Brown
    Eyes: Brown

    Rank: Prince

    Person he trusts most: Richard Naberrie, his Father
    Person he distrusts most: Henrick Lichtenstien. Baron of New Naboo
    Other friends: Helaine Trillium, Jariath Lunceford, Spaceport Co-Workers
    Greatest strength: Confidence
    Greatest weakness: Slight Recklessness
    Greatest ambition: To travel the Galaxy in complete anonymity

    Accomplishments: Appeased many ansty Nobles, Sucessfullly investigated the New Republic in the guise of a Spaceport Worker (Or so he thinks... ;))
     
  24. Skar Kjoil

    Skar Kjoil Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Jan 16, 2000
    Appears in: Sons Of Destiny: Jentarana, Sons Of Destiny: Equilibrium

    Name: Skar Kjoil

    Hair: brown, long.

    Eyes: Blue

    Rank: Kjoil Knight

    Lightsaber color: Fire, later green.

    Padawan: Rishi Kjoil

    Master: Bo-Hi Dzog

    Person he/she trusts most: Himself

    Person he/she distrusts most: The world

    Other friends: Shinran, Telisha, 2L, Kayupa, Rishi, Luke.

    Greatest Strength: His belief in doing the right thing always.

    Greatest Weakness: His compassion for others, espicially his friends.

    Greatest Ambition: To find out what the purpose of his life is.

    Accomplishments: Graduating to a Kjoil Knight, taking an Apprentice, going to Coruscant.

    Most related quote: Fighting is nothing to be ashamed of, if you fight for what you believe in.
     
  25. Mar17swgirl

    Mar17swgirl Chosen One star 7

    Registered:
    Dec 26, 2000
    OK, this is an OC created by Amidala_Skywalker in "If the Mask Fits: Chosen One", but she has been based on *cough*me*cough* :D and Am agreed that I did her profile (since I know her the best... ;) ). So here it is:

    Name: Maya Tasco

    Hair: brown, waist-length, usually worn in a braid.

    Eyes: brown

    Rank: special under-cover Republic agent

    Lightsaber color: none

    Padawan: none

    Master: none

    Person he/she trusts most: Kaki Prime, Obi-Wan Kenobi

    Person he/she distrusts most: Senator Padme Naberrie, people from the Inner Circle

    Other friends: Anakin Skywalker

    Greatest Strength: loyalty, skill with the weapons

    Greatest Weakness: stubbornness

    Greatest Ambition: to make a successful career as a Republic agent and then retire to live a quiet life on some Mid Rim planet

    Accomplishments: many successful missions as a special agent

    Most related quote:
    "I'm Maya Tasco, under-cover agent for the Republic, weapons specialist, crime resistance fighter and a special representative of Chancellor Palpatine."
    We could been in love in a past life, shared one soul, one thought, one love and one beautiful friendship...
    "You know what...you talk... too...much..." (Obi-Wan)

    EDIT: One more special thing about Maya - she's the winner of the Best Non-Force-Sensitive Award of 2001! :D
     
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