Saga Rain - An Obi-Wan and Anakin vignette - AU - cover art added

That was incredible!

I loved how Obi-Wan still loved Anakin, even after all he had done, and yet for Palpatine, Anakin was just another tool to get what he wanted. To Obi-Wan, the most important thing was to be there for Anakin, but in Palpatine's mind, Anakin was there for him. Does that make sense?

Beautiful work.

 

He wanted to see his Master?s beloved face just one more time, look into those kind blue eyes that shone with wisdom and understanding. That comfort was denied him, however, part of the penalty he must pay for his sins.

This was a truly beautiful piece. I really felt the emotion here -- the regret, the longing.

Wonderful!

 

Lovely. It was just wonderful.

I didn't get that in the first time so I had to read it again, and I must say you got me teary.
I'm such a crybaby, but I can't help it!

That atmosphere was also splendid, I've always loved rain. I wish it would be summer now, rain is so beautiful, especially in summer. But we still have snow here! Arrghh!

Good work.

 

Aww This was really good!

 

Wonderful!

At first I didn?t get it but then once the AU aspect sunk in I got it

This was really emotional! It even got me teary.

I absolutely loved the whole thing w/ Obi-Wan. And just how much they loved each other really showed here.

Loved it! Absolutely beautiful!

 

Truly moving.

 

That was so freakin' awesome I think I drooled on my keyboard because my mouth was hanging open! I love it!

C S

 

Oh my gosh!!


Then there was a blinding light and Anakin felt himself falling up, spinning round and round like an out-of-control fighter, rotating at a dizzying speed. His hand remained firmly clasped with Obi-Wanâ??s however, an anchor in a stormy sea.

â??Iâ??m not afraid,â?? Anakin murmured, his voice reflecting his wonder at the gift.

That was... outstanding, breathtaking, heart wrenching...

 

OMG! Very very good... so moving, yet so tragic, but Padme forgives Anakin and he can go to her in peace. I loved it!

Rachel Rose

 

utterly beautiful...I loved the connection between Obi and Ani...and Padme's voice - forgiving him...there was something very 'wuthering heights' about it all and I loved it.

Fantastic.

 

Upping this to show off the gorgeous cover art that Gina so generously did for me!

 

Just wonderful. I loved the tenderness in your viggie!

Bravo!

 

Just realized I've never done replies on this!

Gina You did so much for me on this! You did the cover art and even beta read it when I submitted it. Thank you!

Luna_Nightshade I hope you found some comfort. Losing someone close to you is never easy.

Valairy_Scot This would have been a kinder fate for Anakin, if not the galaxy.

anakin_luver It seemed important to bring in the Jedi philosophy.

obi_ew Thank you!

dianethx I'm sneaky.

Gina Yeah, yeah.

Layren Thank you!

Magenta_Moonshadow I'm so glad you liked it.

Daenarrah That will do just fine!

amidalachick Thank you!

HandmaidenVeme That's Obi!

JediJainaSoloFel I thought Obi-Wan would too!

Jazz_Skywalker It's weird where inspiration comes from.

DarthMousche Thank you!

Miana Kenobi I'm so glad you liked it.

KELIA It seemed fitting.

leia_naberrie Glad you liked it!

Jedikma Of course the galaxy is in trouble now.

CrazyAni I'm glad too!

VA_Parky Thank you!

pat_skywalker39 Thanks so much!

Souderwan The dynamic between those two has always fascinated me.

Siaynoqsbride I'm perfectly happy with what you said!

Japor_Angel Yes.

divapilot Thank you!

Darth_Father-in-law I love the rain.

bmwgurl17 Thank you!

Alley_Skywalker I'm a sucker for AUs.

JediMaster_Jen Thank you!

Courtney_Solo I'm honored!

aden Thank you so much for reading!

AnakinLuver She's waiting for him.

Kestrel_Kenobi Thank you!

Jade_Pilot I'm so glad you liked it.

 

Wow, just lovely. Love the imagery and characterizations!

 

Awww...I just found this! Beautiful, at first I thought Anakin was Vader, and then that he was on a mission before it became clear that he was waiting to pass his final test and merge into the afterlife. This is sad, uplifting, beautiful

You never seem to run out of ideas

 

This was fantastic! I did not expect to arrive where you ended it. Masterfully done!