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Red Flight - NJO - Author comment 5/4/03

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by RebelMom, Feb 14, 2002.

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  1. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Excellent ending, Mommy! Love the mush... and the last line is perfect. :)
     
  2. Jade_Skywalker

    Jade_Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    OOOOOOOHHHHHHH!!!!! It's sad that this one is ending, but I LOVED the ending line about Helaine being home. Very nice. I enjoyed the conversation between all the people. I especially laughed at the comment about Wedge spiking the punch(or whatever ;) ) Awesome! :D
     
  3. Jedi_jainafel

    Jedi_jainafel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yay!!!There's going to be a sequeal right?

    *waves hand*

    'must make sequeal'

    I loved the ending!!It was perfect.

    ~JJF
     
  4. jacen200015

    jacen200015 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jan 11, 2002
    Nice ending.
     
  5. MariahJade2

    MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 5 VIP

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    Mar 18, 2001
    Very nice ending RM. Congrats! :)
     
  6. Cheveyo

    Cheveyo Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Oct 29, 2001
    That was an awesome story, RebelMom!! I'm impressed!
     
  7. Rima

    Rima Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 26, 2002
    Perfect ending...

    I love Mara's description of the propsal (It's ok I use it in my sig, right?)

    I'm curious... what was Mara upset about when Jania described Jag's proposal?
     
  8. womp_rat208

    womp_rat208 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Nov 8, 1999
    WOW! Nicely done, RM! You've got Mara's character down perfect. I think Tim Zahn himself would be impressed. :)

    I like the idea of a Jedi museum in the New Republic. Something someone should've done long ago. :)
     
  9. Sebulba2179

    Sebulba2179 Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 5, 2002
    Awww, no more??? :_|

    But for what it was...

    YAHOO!!!! :D

    Absolutely superb. :) It made me smile to see that good use had been made of Mara's discovery, that it wasn't just going to wind up sitting in the temple basement collecting dust. Need I add, the give-and-take between Luke and Wedge was priceless. ;)

    This was truly a terrific story. Excellent action, spellbinding highs, hairraising lows, creamy middles... ;) But you know what saddens me? Between this, Sache's Beru fic, and "Shadows...", all the good stories are being finished. :(

    Ah, well. All good things must come to an end.

    PS - If you ever want to take Taren's murder into another storyline, feel free to use Ray as the primary investigator. ;)
     
  10. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    padawan Lunetta: Thanks sweetie. You can pack up the thumbscrews.
    Jade Skywalker: It took me a long time to get the conversation written. I'm not much of a conversationalist so it was hard. ;)
    JediJaina Fel: There is a sequel but not written by me. Melyanna and Padawan Lunetta are writing one. **coming soon**
    Jacen200015: Thank you.
    Mariah: Thanks.
    Cheveyo: *blushes* Thank you.
    Rima: Sure, go ahead. Mara was thinking about Baron Fel and his plans during the hand of Thrawn. She didn't like his idea to shoot them and make them go into healing trances. So she doesn't like Fel much.
    wompy: Thanks. I figured it would be good to share the artifacts. palpy's museum was a bit morbid.
    Seb: Thanks. I like Ray too. Unfortunately, I'm not going to solve Taren's murder. Her Luneyness is working on that. :)

    Thanks to everyone for sticking with me during the long delays. One of these days, I'll actually write a story completely before posting. And if you believe that I've got a bridge for sale. ;)

     
  11. EmilieDarklighter

    EmilieDarklighter Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jan 19, 2002
    Lovely, RM!

    "After I said yes, I got to blow something up!"

    LOL
     
  12. Admiral_Lelila

    Admiral_Lelila Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sep 29, 2001
    RM This was a phenomenal story.

    I would love to read more of The Adventures of Ben Skywalker
    [face_mischief] ;) :)

    ~Lelila~
     
  13. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Thanks Emily and Lelila. Ben is fun to write. Working with children gives me lots of fodder. My sunday school class were in our christmas play at church today. They were sufficiently cute. :)
     
  14. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Thanks to all who nominated Ben for Male Child in the Fanfic awards. Please let me know your favorite Ben scene so I can submit it.

     
  15. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    I guess asking a question when no one is around is kind of silly. I chose a scene myself. Actually, I got to pick 2 scenes. This story was nominated for 2 categories:
    ?Red Flight? for ?Readers? Choice Beyond the Saga Completed Story ? ROTJ/NJO?
    ?Ben? in ?Red Flight? for ?Readers? Choice Male Child?

    Again, I thank all my readers - known and unknown. I appreciate your support.
     
  16. jade51999

    jade51999 Jedi Knight star 5

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    Nov 5, 1999
    I just read this so i understood more about stuff in Lunetta and Mely's sequal to shadows of the past..

    as usual RM great job!
    :)
     
  17. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Thanks Jade51999. I hope this was helpful in understanding the references in the girls' story.
     
  18. joy_noel

    joy_noel Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Just finished this and I loved it. Great job RM. Ben was so adorable. I loved every scene with him. My favorite part is without a doubt when Luke snuck up on Troy. I always love it when Luke is allowed to kick butt. And of course I loved the mush in all it's mushy glory. :)
     
  19. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Thanks Joy Noel. Sorry for taking so long to acknowledge you. My notification ran out.

    I wanted to thank those who voted for this story in the fanfic awards. I was runner-up to myself (how weird is that?) in :
    Readers? Choice Beyond the Saga Completed Story ? Post-ROTJ/NJO
    Winner -- ?Mirror Manifest? by RebelMom
    Runner-Up -- ?You Don?t Bring Me Flowers Anymore? by Amidala_Skywalker and ?Red Flight? by RebelMom
    Third Place -- ?You Did What?!? by Jade_Max, ?Maelstrom? by rogue11lovesjag, and ?Getting Over It? by val solo

    and I tied for first in:
    Readers? Choice Male Child
    Winner -- ?Luke Naberrie/Skywalker? in ?Coming Home? by JediGaladriel and ?Ben? in ?Red Flight? by RebelMom
    Runner-Up -- ?Ben Kenobi Lenor? in ?Stars in the Darkness? by Arwyn_Whitesun
    Third Place -- ?Luke Organa? in ?And the Children Shall Lead? by Mcily_Nochi


    Mirror Manifest is in the archives.

    Thanks again.
     
  20. womp_rat208

    womp_rat208 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Congrats RM! :)
     
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