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Red Flight - NJO - Author comment 5/4/03

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by RebelMom, Feb 14, 2002.

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  1. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    So everythings going to turn out well... that's good! I love the Anakin, Ben scene :D Can't wait for the mush!
     
  2. MariahJade2

    MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 5 VIP

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    LOL. Anakin gets blamed. Ben was so cute.
    Nice post, and mush next. Yea! :)
     
  3. womp_rat208

    womp_rat208 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Nice post! I liked the Anakin/Ben scene, as well as Lainey's interuption of said incident. ;)
     
  4. JadedofMara

    JadedofMara Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Mush good!


    Would it be....Luke and Mara mush, by any chance....????


    That was a good post, too. :D
     
  5. Admiral_Lelila

    Admiral_Lelila Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It sounds like another sensational post. :)
     
  6. Marie_Jadewalker

    Marie_Jadewalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Poor Anakin. (Or should I say Ankin? Ben's name for his cousin is really cute.) He doesn't seem to be able to catch a break. I wonder how the durasteel X-wing ended up there in the first place, however.

    I'm looking forward to seeing Lainey, Nadia, and Ben on a trip with Mara, although I'm still not sure why Mara's taking Ben along. Oh well, it should definitely be interesting. And naturally, I'm looking forward to the upcoming mush. :)

    ~Marie
     
  7. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Luney dearest: Of course it all turns out okay. :)
    Mariah: Thanks.
    Wompy: that was one of the first scenes I envisioned when I thought of this story.
    Jaded of Mara: Me? Write Luke and Mara mush? Whatever gave you that idea? ;)
    Admiral Lelila: Thanks.
    Marie Jadewalker: It's amazing how many toys get moved from room to room by children. quite simply, somebody took the toy in and left it there. Happened all the time when I was working in daycare. As to why she's taking him: Ben's an important part of my plot.
     
  8. JadeSaber

    JadeSaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Nice post Mom. :)

    I really liked Ben and Anakin's interaction. Ben is so cute! I also thought it was pretty funny, when Lainey scolded Anakin, and he couldn't get a word in edgewise. The poor guy just can't win. ;)

    Eagerly awaiting the next (mushy [face_love] ) post! :)



     
  9. Jade_Skywalker

    Jade_Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    I just finished reading this. So many times I was laughing my head off. Luke and Mara's kids are so cute!!! :D That is really cool that one of the artifacts was Lainy's Master's lightsaber. That should be interesting. :) I liked how Ben took the X-wing fighter, and threw it at Anakin saying, "Jaya save Ben" or something to that affect. ;) That was also cute. I liked the scene between Jacen and Nadia, and how Mara knew that he was there. That was just funny. :D Well, I'd say this story has gotten off to a very good start! Can hardly wait to read more. :D
     
  10. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    JadeSaber: Thanks.
    Jade Skywalker: Glad you like it.
    As promised - Mush.
    **************************
    Chapter 3: Goodbyes

    Ben and Ariella were both tucked into bed for the night. Exhausted from their busy day, both fell asleep as soon as they were put to bed. Mara was sitting on the couch, her feet propped up on the table. A datapad was in her hand, but she stopped looking at it, resting her eyes instead. All the planning was complete. It had taken a little extra time since Ben would be going, but she felt confident about the trip. She had been wanting to spend some time with her son, get him away from the duracrete jungle and let him see more than one tree. Both girls were competent and well-trained. Though technically not a clandestine mission, Mara was treating it that way, giving both young ladies a chance at some reconnaissance experience. Her thoughts were interrupted by her husband's presence and the smell of chocolate.

    Handing a mug of cocoa to his wife, Luke sat down on the couch next to her. He took a sip of the warm rich liquid. "Finished planning?"

    Mara was taking a sip from her mug. Cocking an eyebrow, she looked at him.

    He took another sip of his cocoa. "I wanted to make sure." He took the datapad from her hand, placing it on the table. Entwining his fingers with hers, he leaned back, his shoulder pressed close to Mara.

    "Thanks for the cocoa, Luke. It's just right," she said, taking another drink.

    Luke took another drink of his, then set it down on the table. "You're welcome." He released her fingers, then wrapped his arm around her shoulder, pulling her close to his chest.

    Taking another sip of her cocoa, Mara also put her cup down and relaxed into his embrace. "This is my favorite part of the day. The children are snug in their beds. The corridors are silent. There are no demands on us. It's so peaceful and quiet."

    Luke began to stroke Mara's hair, occasionally twirling a strand around his finger. "I could sit here for hours, alone, with you." He pulled her closer and kissed the top of her head.

    Twisting in his embrace, Mara tilted her head up, looking into his eyes. "I'm going to miss you, Farmboy."

    Luke's reply was to crush his lips to hers. One hand caressed her cheek, the other her back. He pulled away from the kiss, moved a strand of hair from her face, and smiled lovingly at her. "I'm going to miss you, too."

    She took his hands into hers. "It is only one week."

    "That's a long time." His thumbs swirled lightly on her hands, causing a tingly sensation.

    She kissed him softly on the lips. "You'll survive. Think of the fun we'll have when I get back."

    "I don't want to wait," Luke whispered huskily.

    Luke cupped her face, gazed into her eyes and kissed her passionately. His hands roamed her body.

    Breathless and flushed, Mara pulled back. "We better go to the bedroom. Ben might wake up and wander out."

    Taking a few deep breaths, Luke considered her words. "Right."

    He stood up, taking her hand and pulling her with him. The bedroom door slid open, allowing them to enter. Luke's mouth covered Mara's, tasting her sweetness. His lips left hers, and trailed a hot line of kisses down her throat and to her collarbone.

    "The door, Luke," she gasped.

    Not stopping his ministrations, Luke's hand slapped the door controls.

    "Don't forget to lock it," she reminded him.

    Luke entered the locking codes on the door, then resumed his goodbye to his wife.

    **
    Next scene will be a different kind of mush.
    :)
     
  11. JadedofMara

    JadedofMara Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Woohooo!!!!

    AWWWWWWWWWW!!!


    Woohooo!!!

    :D :D :D

    I liked that, in case you couldnt tell. :D
     
  12. JadeSaber

    JadeSaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Awwwww.... [face_love] Mush! :)

    Well done Mom. well done. :)

    *melts*
     
  13. Marie_Jadewalker

    Marie_Jadewalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awww....

    Very sweet married mush from The master. :) I think I may be getting to the point where I almost prefer this variety to the first kiss/first whatever/everything is so important stage of relationships. Not to say things aren't important and even urgent in married relationships (often more passionate, actually) but they are more comfortable and more... themselves together than couples just starting out. Okay, I don't know if that made any sense or not. ;)

    ~Marie
     
  14. Tych_sel

    Tych_sel Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Just found this and caught up. Excellent job, I'll definitely have to keep my eye on this.
     
  15. womp_rat208

    womp_rat208 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    No, I don't got no mush. I don't need no mush. Mush is for Luney and Mely. ;)

    But that mush was good mush, RM. Can't wait for some action, though. ;)
     
  16. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Three Awwwws in a row. Is that some kind of record? ;)
    Jaded of Mara: glad you liked it. Mush seems to make you happy.
    JadeSaber: Thanks.
    MarieJadewalker: I think I understood what you meant. Married couples are a different dynamic than singles.
    Tych Sel: Thanks for stopping by.
    Womprat: Action comes later. Don't worry.
     
  17. MariahJade2

    MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 5 VIP

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    My mush fix has been satisfied for the evening. :D
     
  18. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Another goodbye. Not mush in the traditional sense.

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    Lainey tossed the last item in her duffel. Even though the war was over, Mara wasn't taking any chances with their safety and wanted them travel incognito. Plus, she had mentioned something about undercover training. The idea of not formally representing the Jedi was foreign to Lainey. The Knights had been revered by most of the galaxy, until the dark times. She repressed a shudder as she thought of the horrors perpetrated by the Empire, the Emperor - and Anakin. During her torturous years in carbon freeze, the Jedi had returned, then, according to her Master, were almost destroyed again by the Yuzzhan Vong. The others had told her about them, she herself never having seen one in the flesh and just the thought of such a creature churned her stomach. Lainey shook her head at her dark thoughts and returned to her preparations. Instead of Jedi robes and tunics, Lainey packed a couple of jumpsuits, a workout suit, and a simple dress. Hooking her saber to her belt, Lainey hefted the duffel and carried it to the door. Just before she reached it, a familiar presence arrived at her door. Opening the door, Lainey came face to face with her Master Corran Horn.

    "Master," she said, bowing slightly in greeting.

    Corran smiled. "Padawan. I've come to escort you to the Shadow." He took her bag. "Ready?"

    "Yes."

    Lainey fell into step a few paces behind her Master. Keeping her hands folded, she began to think about the man in front of her. Even before her memory returned, she felt comfortable with him. As they bonded and grew closer, Lainey realized that it was meant to be. He had been just the person to help her adjust to her new life and help her deal with the shadows of her past. He treated her not only as a Padawan, but also as a daughter. His family accepted her as a part of them and she was grateful for that. She belonged and it felt good. So intent on her thoughts, Lainey failed to notice that Corran had stopped short of the docking bay. She bumped into his back. Grabbing her nose, she exclaimed, "Ow!"

    Corran turned around, his anxious eyes looking over her face. "You okay? Let me see."

    "I'm fine, Master. Just a bruised ego. I wasn't paying attention. How embarrassing," she said, touched by his concern.

    "Don't worry about it. I won't tell anybody," Corran teased.

    Glancing around the corridor, Lainey noticed their location. "Why did you stop out here, Master?"

    "I wanted to talk with you privately," Corran replied seriously. He dropped her duffel and took hold of her hands. "I wanted to tell you that I'm glad you wanted to be a part of this mission. When you told me about Master Caine's lightsaber, I knew that you should have it. As much as I would like to be with you, I think that you will gain valuable experience from Mara." He detected a bit of apprehension coming from Lainey. "Think of it as training from a different point of view."

    "I know that Master Skywalker does things differently than I am used to, but I'm willing to learn." Lainey cocked an eyebrow at Corran. "You've got more to say."

    Grinning, Corran said, "You know me too well." He looked her in the eye. "You have trained well, Padawan. I sense that this mission will bring you one step closer to the completion of your training."

    Lainey was surprised by his proclamation. Before she could say anything, Corran continued. " The force is strong in you, Helaine Trillium. Listen to it and soon you shall be a Knight."

    "Thank you, Master."

    Corran let go of Lainey's hands. "I'll miss you, Lainey. Though you are not of my flesh, you will always be a daughter to me."

    Throwing her arms around him, Lainey exclaimed, "I love you, Master."

    "I love you, too," he replied, squeezing her warmly.

    **

    Sorry about the short posts. They will be longer soon. If I get lots of replies, I'll post the Jacen/Nadia mush tomorrow.
     
  19. MariahJade2

    MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 5 VIP

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    Reply, Reply, Reply, Reply, Reply, Reply, Reply, Reply, Reply......is that enough RM?

    That was a very sweet scene with Corran. :)
     
  20. womp_rat208

    womp_rat208 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Awww, sugary. ;) But that was a nice scene with Corran and Lainey.

    Can't wait for that Jacen/Nadia scene.. *snicker*
     
  21. Admiral_Lelila

    Admiral_Lelila Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm a scene behind.
    L&M wouldn't want to be disturbed. A little bit of trivial, in BFC, Ackbar and Han recalled how Jaina walking into H&L's bedroom and Han was startled out of a sound sleep and pulled out his blaster and scared both of them.
     
  22. JadedofMara

    JadedofMara Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yes, Rebelmom...mush makes me happy. Espescially the Luke and Mara kind.


    BUt that last scene was really, really, cute too...are we seeing some action soon? That makes me almost a happy as mush!!!
     
  23. JadeSaber

    JadeSaber Jedi Youngling star 3

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    *sniff* Oh Mom! That was so sweet! Underneath that tough CorSec shell, Corran's just a big softie. What an appropriate farewell. *sniff*

    May we please have some mush now, Master? ;)
     
  24. Marie_Jadewalker

    Marie_Jadewalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awww. The father/daughter like bond between Corran and Lainey/Helaine is really sweet. I like the way you write it; it's what I usually envision a master/apprentice relationship being like.

    (That's not to say Ganner and Cianna aren't interesting in their own right, Mel and Luney. ;) )

    ~Marie
     
  25. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Mariah Jade: Not the kind of replies I had in mind. ;)
    Wompy: Drat! I forgot to put the cavity warning up.
    Admiral Lelila: Got to have some privacy.:)
    Jaded of Mara: You like action too? I hope I can satisfy your desire for action. Got some transitional stuff to get through first though.
    JadeSaber: Thanks. Couldn't let Lainey go without some type of farewell.
    Marie Jadewalker: Yeah, I see the relationship the same way.

    Thanks for all who have posted. I appreciate it.

    Is anybody else reading?
     
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