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Saga - Legends "Retreat"- Luke Skywalker/Mara Jade | One-Shot | Answer to 2020 FanFiction Summer Olympics Challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jâd Sphera, Aug 25, 2020.

  1. Jâd Sphera

    Jâd Sphera Jedi Knight star 1

    Registered:
    Dec 10, 2018
    A Luke/Mara One-Shot.
    Takes place in the Legends Universe.

    This is the answer to:
    Fanfiction Summer Olympics Challenge
    I chose to participate with a Triathlon.

    Rules:
    Star Wars and Non-Star Wars Triathlon (parts of event may be completed in any order):
    1st event: 400 Word Cross Country: 400 words about your character, couple, family, or friendship with any theme.
    2nd Event: 110 Word Hurdle: 110 words in which the name or names of your character, couple, family, or friendship aren’t mentioned.
    3rd Event: Prime Time Coverage: 500+ words of action, adventure, or excitement with your chosen character, couple, family, or friendship as the star.

    Thank you to @WarmNyota_SweetAyesha for proofreading this story.
    Ny you're the best! [face_love]

    This is Event No. 2


    "Retreat"
    by Jâd Sphera (JadeSphera).


    Sometimes being a Jedi really sucked, particularly when he was failing to act like one so miserably.

    Losing his calm hurt more than her words.

    “What you have to say about that?” her husky voice challenged.

    After her sarcastic remark, she was keenly expecting his answer. She was indeed a fighter, and was the one person in the Galaxy who could push his buttons, all at once!

    He kept his mouth shut before saying something he’d regret later. Turning on his heal, he opted to retreat. He knew defeat when he saw it.

    This woman of green stare could disarm and beat him even when no lightsabers had been drawn.




    The end.
     
  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

    Registered:
    Aug 31, 2004
    Wonderful snark and discombobulation [face_laugh]
     
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  3. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Oct 11, 2005
    I love this wording. Excellent look into the early relationship between Luke and Mara. She has his number from the start.