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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Revanfan1, Jun 23, 2014.

  1. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2005
    Great little ficlets! [face_laugh] at Mara trying to bury the evidence.
     
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  2. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jul 26, 2005
    Aww that was so sweet [face_love][face_love]

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  3. Revanfan1

    Revanfan1 Force Ghost star 6

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    Jun 3, 2013
    Round 2 Feathers
    A pointy object
    Yellow liquid
    A full moon or moons

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    Mara stretched out in her seat in the diner and picked up her glass of lemonade. She sipped it slowly and glanced around. Her contact hadn't approached her yet; she was getting impatient. Luke had asked her to come here to meet a guy who was supposed to tell them about some guys smuggling Sith artifacts. Mara had accepted the mission because she was eager to get out of the Temple.

    But she was bored.

    If her contact didn't show up in five minutes, she decided, she'd leave. They could find the artifact smugglers another way. She finished off her lemonade and put the glass back on the table. Finally, disgusted, she stood and headed for the exit. Outside, she glanced up at the full moon. Bothawui's moon was beautiful this time of year.

    She was so distracted by the sight that she was startled when a large, black bird flew down right in her face. She shrieked in surprise and shoved the bird away, her hands coming back full of feathers. The bird squawked and flew back to wherever it had come from. Mara dusted the feathers from her hand.

    "Don't move, lady," a soft voice said.

    Mara hissed. A man stood behind her, a vibroblade suddenly pressed against her kidney. Slowly, she dropped her eyes down, trying to catch sight of the blade. She saw it out of the corner of her right eye, and prepared to move...

    She jerked to the right and grabbed the man's wrist, twisting his arm violently. He dropped the blade and growled, kicking at her. Mara caught his blow on her right thigh and grunted, jumping back. She reached for her own vibroblade and jerked it from its sheath. She slashed at the man, who dodged and threw himself to the ground to grab his dropped weapon. Mara flipped her blade around and slashed it backhanded. It caught him in the bicep, tearing a large gash in his skin. Underneath the sleeve, Mara could see a Sith cult tattoo. The man gripped his vibroblade and started to stand.

    "That's enough," Mara said.

    She lifted him with the Force and shoved him against the wall, causing him to again drop his vibroblade. She slammed him into the wall twice more for emphasis, and then grabbed his collar.

    "You're coming with me," she said. "There are some people who'd be very interested in questioning you."
     
  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Game Host star 7 VIP - Game Host

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    Aug 31, 2004
    That is vintage Mara [face_love] No one does it better. =D= =D=
     
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  5. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    Dec 25, 2013
    Very good. I would never want to be on the receiving end of her fight or her weapons. This guy surely didn't know her reputation.
     
  6. K'Tai qel Letta-Tanku

    K'Tai qel Letta-Tanku Jedi Grand Master star 3

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    Apr 18, 2000
    Go Mara! Very nicely done.
     
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  7. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

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    Jun 14, 2005
    That's enough," Mara said.

    She lifted him with the Force and shoved him against the wall, causing him to again drop his vibroblade. She slammed him into the wall twice more for emphasis, and then grabbed his collar.

    "You're coming with me," she said. "There are some people who'd be very interested in questioning you."

    Mara always rocks. I had hoped Disney would see that as well...
     
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  8. Findswoman

    Findswoman Force Ghost star 5

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    Feb 27, 2014
    Oh my, goosebumps! :eek: Wonderful job with the action and combat here—that poor silly Sith cultist doesn't stand a chance. The mystery lover in me would be thrilled to see this continued. :cool:
     
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  9. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2005
    Great action and great Mara!
     
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  10. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Whoa, approaching Mara like that took a lot of guts....or stupidity :p

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  11. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Whoa, approaching Mara like that took a lot of guts....or stupidity :p

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