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Saga Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary 19-12 completed for this year

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2009.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Title: Second Diary of Marhin Adin
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: intertrillogy -ROTJ
    Characters: Marhin Adin
    Genre: diary
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    Summary: Marhin Adin writes in his diary
    Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to George Lucas.


    Entry 1

    I have a new diary. Dad saw my face when I ended the first one on the last page and put down my ?diary of a young healer? and after reading it he gave me this new book.
    And also important; a device to write in it.

    My first diary was written by me with a pencil, an ordinary wooden pencil but now that I have entered the next classes to become a healer he has given me something special, very special.

    It is a fountain-pen and coming with it a bottle of ink. And when I was writing my fist words in this new book with it I recognised the colour and stroke of the pen.
    And dad told me.

    It was the pen used by Master Yoda to write the first entries in my dad?s diary and dad got it from master Yoda as a gift when he could write the first words in his diary. And dad told me it was his gift to me like it was given to him by Master Yoda.

    And I will uphold this tradition when I am ready.
     
  2. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    It was the pen used by Master Yoda to write the first entries in my dad?s diary

    Somehow I'm not surprised Yoda would keep the pen to pass along.

    I always suspected he was an old softie :p

    Please PM me when you update

    Looking forward to more

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  3. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    It was the pen used by Master Yoda to write the first entries in my dad?s diary and dad got it from master Yoda as a gift when he could write the first words in his diary. And dad told me it was his gift to me like it was given to him by Master Yoda.

    And I will uphold this tradition when I am ready.


    Hurrah, a prequel!
     
  4. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Yoda is with Kaagi;)Thanks again.

    AzureAngel2 thanks for reading

    Now for the mini challenge Resolutions entry 2

    Entry 2

    How do I put this to paper?

    Yes something has happened today. A new family has come to settle in the valley and I have seen a lovely girl.

    A girl and she seems nice and of my age.
    But I don?t know for sure.

    Can I ask mom or dad?

    Nah, dad will tell me that I am too young to get interested in a girl. He wasn?t interested in girls when he was 13. But maybe his Jedi upbringing was responsible for that.

    Hey, I see the new family entering the large house of healing.

    Second entry of this day.

    An ink blob is on the page and that?s because I went to the large house of healing.
    For your eyes only; Ink and bird and you know what to do.

    And next part is quite a secret and as you are reading it you know how to make the letters visible. I have done it with another kind of ink and the feather of a bird to write it down.

    And yes I know the new girl?s name and age.
    She is Erenya Aerendil and she is 17 years old. WOW.

    I saw that when they left in the great book where Master Eled-Hir enters all the new people coming into the valley. Her parents are Eren and Nenya and are older than my parents.

    WOW


     
  5. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Hee!!!! This looks to be as fun as Marhin's first diary was

    :D
    :D

    Could I be on your PM list? :D

     
  6. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    An ink blob is on the page and that?s because I went to the large house of healing.
    For your eyes only; Ink and bird and you know what to do.


    Well, I always know that I am up to a beautiful story when I enter one of your threads, dear bird. @};-
     
  7. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    dad will tell me that I am too young to get interested in a girl

    Yes, but it's not like you can stop it or anything :p

    Great update

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  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Sure and this will be again a lot of fun.

    Yes, humor and some serious business too.

    and he has to get her interested in him;)

    Entry 3

    All that secret ink wasn?t necessary after all. Erenya came to school today with her parents and she was introduced to the whole class by our teacher Master Eled-Hir.

    And he took me apart and said that he had seen me peeking in that book and he gave me a knowing gaze. I don?t know what to make of that but time will sure reveal that.

    We had more lessons today and the second was from Master Elenion.

    And Erenya, she was the best.
    And when I told her that after that lesson during the break she just shrugged and went away.

    Why diary?
    Is she not interested in me?
    Yes there are more attractive young men in my school but they are in the classes for older students.

    Coming back after the break Erenya gazed only at Sidnik and another older boy Jerak and paid me no attention.
     
  9. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    [face_laugh]
    Erenna's playing the hard to get game
    [face_mischief]
    ;)
    :D
     
  10. AzureAngel2

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    All that secret ink wasn?t necessary after all. Erenya came to school today with her parents and she was introduced to the whole class by our teacher Master Eled-Hir.

    And he took me apart and said that he had seen me peeking in that book and he gave me a knowing gaze. I don?t know what to make of that but time will sure reveal that.


    That is sweet. Secret ink in such modern times. Nostalic and romantic idea.
     
  11. KELIA

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    when I told her that after that lesson during the break she just shrugged and went away.


    Uh oh!

    Poor Marhin - there's not much worse than having a crush one someone who doesn't return your interest.

    I hope he'll be able to catch her eye in the future.

    Great update

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  12. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    he is getting more ideas

    He is planning;)and with february's mini challenge heart it's easy

    Entry 4

    Erenya is clearly only impressed by men who can do something extra.
    Jerak scored 10 out of 10 today and I only 9 and sure Jerak got Erenya?s attention. She asked him to help her.
    With what?

    Sure the next lesson and that?s about the workings of the heart.
    She should come to me. My dad knows everything about the heart.
    (Even the more intimate things a Jedi shouldn?t think about at all. But that?s the past. The Jedicode had rules about attachment and not all Jedi were following those rules. Corellian Jedi didn?t and I have met those a few months ago.)
    And yes dad didn?t follow the Jedi code anymore when he saw my mother.

    Dad has explained me all about the heart.

    Grr she should have come to me.

    But no she went to Jerak and that was it.

    Have to impress her with something different.

    And that something is coming next week.
    Luciano is bringing jellybeans. Yes again and I hope nothing serious happens.

     
  13. KELIA

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    Have to impress her with something different.

    Yes, we females love creativity!

    I hope Marhin is able to come up with something good.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  14. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Jelly beans??? That should work. LOL
     
  15. AzureAngel2

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    I like clever lads like him as well.

    [face_love]
     
  16. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He will:D

     
  17. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Glad she liked the box... but how can se resist sweets? It'd be like swearing off chocolate. :eek: Not gonna happen here LOL
     
  18. AzureAngel2

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    What a sweet up-date, even though it has a dentist in it.
     
  19. KELIA

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    A dentist father!

    Aaaggghh - it figures :(

    Well, at least she liked the box and now Marhin has her attention.

    Great update

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  20. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Her dad is a dentist.;)

    And the dentist will be in more posts.

    Sure Marhin has her attention, you will see

    Entry 6

    I visited Eren Aerendil yesterday with my dad.
    Eren was very nice to me and also to dad.
    Dad was first in the chair and guess what?

    Yeah dad had a bad tooth and that needed some repairs.
    And repairing Eren was; using a screaming tool that grated on my sensitive ears.
    And dad?s of course. He was complaining about that.
    Only that?

    Yes, the tool didn?t hurt or dad used the Force to keep the pain at bay.

    I was next and same problem.
    Repairs to the second to last molar in my left lower jaw and a root canal at that; grrr.
    And that had me under the mercy of screamy and me making grimaces when he went deep.
    I was yelling and that got the attention from Erenya, studying in the room next to his treatment room.

    Bad move Marhin!

    Now she is interested in me but in the wrong way. In her eyes I am now a fussy little boy.

    Little boy, hmph! I am 13 years old and growing.

    And I have to come back for a second treatment of that molar. He has put something temporary in it.

    Today I saw her again with Jerak.[face_worried]
     
  21. KELIA

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    In her eyes I am now a fussy little boy.

    Now she's be a little hard on him. Nobody enjoys a root canal!

    And poor Marhin had to go back for a second treatment - the poor kid...oh...ah...young man.

    I hope this thing with Jerak isn't serious....

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  22. AzureAngel2

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    Now she is interested in me but in the wrong way. In her eyes I am now a fussy little boy.

    Little boy, hmph! I am 13 years old and growing.


    Don´t worry, I know a story about a 14 year old queen and a 9 year old slave boy. Wait that story has no happy ending really...
     
  23. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    OOh, I feel Marhin's pain LOL Erenya needs to have some compassion and get over this Jerak dude [face_laugh] You just don't know how much this reminds me of "Little Manhattan" [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Hugs!!!
     
  24. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He will suffer more in the next entry.

    This one will?[face_thinking]

    First Erenya has a birthday and there is more suffering for Marhin.

    Thanks again all for your support and here is the next entry with the first draft of a piece of fanart. And the storms mini challenge

    Entry 7

    Erenya had her 18th birthday yesterday and I was invited to come and celebrate it with her.
    But.
    Yes but.

    Jerak was there too and more boys, older and younger and she was sitting with all of them.
    And Jerak with those stormy grey eyes was giving me a haughty look and telling me that I was the little kid of the party.

    Yes he had heard from Erenya that I had been squirming at the dentist. And he gave Erenya looks. WOW.

    Huh, maybe I am not meant to be friends with Erenya or; does she need more time to see who everyone really is?

    Jerak making fun of me grrr.

    Hey an idea! I will ask dad if he can teach me how to use the Force or meditation to feel no pain at the dentist.

    And going to my house I passed Master Aaqu Maerhin?s house and he was sitting there outside and painting.

    Who will that be?

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/kaagibaby1.jpg]


    I will ask him tomorrow.

     
  25. AzureAngel2

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    Meep! [face_worried]

    Hey an idea! I will ask dad if he can teach me how to use the Force or meditation to feel no pain at the dentist.

    [face_laugh] I would love that, too!

    And going to my house I passed Master Aaqu Maerhin?s house and he was sitting there outside and painting.

    Who will that be?


    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/kaagibaby1.jpg]

    I got the hint. :D

    Great up-date and I adore this painting. So serene once more.

     
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