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Saga Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary 19-12 completed for this year

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2009.

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  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Yeah, maybe he should "ignore" Erenya for a while LOL That sounds like a plan using the Force at the dentist [face_laugh] Better than Novacaine any day though laughing gas is fun [face_laugh]
     
  2. KELIA

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    Awwwww...what a beautiful picture!

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    Obi-Wan and Luke?

    I'm glad Marhin will be learning to use the Force. I sure wish I had that ability when I went to the dentist!

    Great update

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  3. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    No Force for us when visiting the dentist and who is in the picture will be revealed.

    He will use the Force and gain respect

    We all do;) And who is in the picture will be revealed.
    Master Aaqu has painted some more.

    Entry 8

    I went with dread in my heart to Eren Aerendil today. My molar was meeting screamy again.
    But it earned me something.

    Respect from Eren because I didn?t squirm or yell and even better; respect from Erenya.

    She told me that I had a really bad molar and that she had been crying when she had one with the same damage. Her dad had to sedate her.
    She even is interested in me now.

    Have to thank dad for his teachings of some Force techniques. That way I felt no pain.

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/kaagibaby3.jpg]

    I saw the painting again and asked Master Maerhin who those two were.
    He told me that the man was my dad and the baby was me.

    A crying baby? Hmm.
    I will ask dad why I was crying.
     
  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    What a wonderful painting!! :D Erenya respects him now, huh? :D :D ;)
     
  5. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Respect is a great thing. It is nice to see that younglings and padawans learn so precious values.

    :D
     
  6. KELIA

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    Yay, Erenya is finally interested!

    [face_dancing] [face_dancing] [face_dancing]

    And crying babies aren't that unusual...unfortunately :p

    Great update

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  7. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Thank you and with Erenya you will see.

    For all that is.

    No but you will see why he was crying.

    Entry 9


    Aaqu has finished the painting and it is lovely.
    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/kaagi10b.jpg]

    He has shown it to dad and mom.

    Dad was moved by the serenity of the scene.

    Dad told me why I was crying. I had seen a ghost. He had taken me and mom and Master Aaqu on a trip and we camped near a waterfall. And there was a ghost but to dad and mom he wasn?t scary.
    Just for me, poor me.

    Who was the ghost?

    Jedimaster Qui-Gon Jinn and he is teaching dad and telling him about Obi-Wan Kenobi.

    That Master is now a ghost too. Is he teaching too? Yes he is. Luke Skywalker is the boy.

    Uh have to go. Master Elenion is asking me to help him.
    With surgery?

    Yes.
     
  8. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Great "cameo" mentions of Qui-Gon, obi-Wan and Luke :* Assisting with a surgery. =D= Marhin's really coming along. :D
     
  9. AzureAngel2

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    Dad was moved by the serenity of the scene.

    Dear bird, I was also moved by seeing the real painting in your ´nest´ yesterday. Great up-date and thanks for revealing the identity of the boy. @};-
     
  10. KELIA

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    I had seen a ghost

    Awwww, poor Adin!

    Hopefully he came to see Qui-Gon wasn't a menacing ghost but was actually there to help.

    Great update

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  11. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He is and you will see;)

    Thank you again.

    Qui-Gon will help you will see it in the next update.

    Entry 10

    Surgery was simply assisting Master Henrani Elenion and giving him the scalpel and other instruments for a simple procedure.
    And the other students were watching the removal of some warts.

    And who was there?
    Jerak and standing beside him was Erenya.

    Needless to write that I did everything to impress her.

    Master Henrani was impressed and he praised me.
    Erenya didn?t hear that because she was fussing around with Jerak.

    Later that day I saw Jerak alone and he told me that I was just showing that I could become a good nurse.

    A nurse!

    I want to become a surgeon like my dad.

    One positive note: Qui-Gon Jinn visited us and he told me not to worry. He had taken Obi-Wan Kenobi as his padawan when said boy was sent to Bandomeer. He was impressed by Obi-Wan?s skills and was very pleased that he could guide him to become a very capable Jedi.
    And with a grin he told me that Obi-Wan was now with his great love Siri Tachi.
    He had seen them after a swim ? yes in the eternity of the Force you can do anything you like ? and they were looking happy.
    And I pictured them in my mind like this.

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/siriobisleep1bit.jpg]

    ps Master Aaqu painted them for me.

     
  12. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Stellar update. Erenya's still stuck on Jerak it seems LOL Or maybe not, and that's why jerak was ribbing Marhin? [face_laugh]
     
  13. AzureAngel2

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    [face_love]What can I say: sweet, peaceful and full of light.O:)
     
  14. KELIA

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    A nurse!

    I want to become a surgeon like my dad.


    Don't let anybody discourage you, Adin. You can do anything you set out to do.

    Loved the painting

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]\

    Great update

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  15. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    You will see in a future entry

    and the next entry is too

    He will.

    All again thank you for the kind words and support.

    Entry 11

    Enga Mariss visited all classes today with buttered toast and sprinkles on them. She told us that Alarik and Shonalla Wanqin had sent a message that their second child was born on 22 velona.

    I will introduce you to Shonalla and Alarik.

    Shonalla is a Jedi initiate who fled the temple with Enga. She was after an accident at the senate staying in the Coruscant university and Med centre and Enga was getting her back when order 66 happened. John Vanrood saved both and they could escape from Coruscant in his private yacht. They landed in an escapepod on Moniron and were taken to the house of Eled-Hir.

    Alarik Wanqin is a Moniron citizen and he was also taken to the house of Eled-Hir when imperials torched his village. With him were two husans ? Manal and Saldara ? and a newborn young named Aquila. He trained Aquila and gave him away to master Elenion after he had raised and trained him.

    Alarik was taught by Master Eled-Hir and the other teachers when he said that he wanted to become a doctor. He wanted to study more and become a teacher like his wife Shonalla.
    Both were offered new jobs when a professor visited the estate and are now doctors at the Monir university hospital.

    Aquila is still here ? snow white like his mother ? and used by Henrani Elenion as his ride.

     
  16. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Super tie in with DNA ID ;) :D
     
  17. KELIA

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    She told us that Alarik and Shonalla Wanqin had sent a message that their second child was born on 22 velona.

    How nice to celebrate the event with all the classes

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    Great update

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  18. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Thank you. It is and you will see more connections

    Enga was the one who saved Shonalla;)

    Thanks again for your great support.

    Entry 12

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/AUT_0021.jpg]

    Enga showed me an old picture of Manal and Saldara and that had brought me an idea.
    What?

    To impress Erenya of course.

    You see those two husans cantering together and maybe a ride with Erenya will do the trick.
    I will ask her tomorrow and ride with her to the whispering pond.

    Tarmenel Eled-Hir has shown me that pond during a ride and it is beautiful, even more so when the wind creates ripples on the surface.
    The pebbles murmur a song and Tarmenel sang that when he was with me sitting on the edge of that pond.

    If we watch carefully
    We see their faces
    Pure, innocent and white
    Pure eternal love
    Pure like their souls

    If we listen carefully
    We hear their voices
    Gentle like the waves
    We hear their voices
    In hushed whispers
    On the wind

    You and I will meet again
    And all will turn to silver light
    A light that will ignite the stars
    All souls pass into the light
    That is
    The eternity?

     
  19. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Erenya's gotta love that!!!! A more lovely spot there isn't!!!! :D And a gorgeous song. :)
     
  20. AzureAngel2

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    The pebbles murmur a song and Tarmenel sang that when he was with me sitting on the edge of that pond.

    If we watch carefully
    We see their faces
    Pure, innocent and white
    Pure eternal love
    Pure like their souls

    If we listen carefully
    We hear their voices
    Gentle like the waves
    We hear their voices
    In hushed whispers
    On the wind

    You and I will meet again
    And all will turn to silver light
    A light that will ignite the stars
    All souls pass into the light
    That is
    The eternity?


    I love that song, bird. It is so beautiful and refreshing! [face_love]
     
  21. KELIA

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    Beautiful update to go with a beautiful picture

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    maybe a ride with Erenya will do the trick

    It would certainly work on me! I can't imagine it wouldn't work on Erenya as well.

    Great update

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  22. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    It is and that song was for my father.

    And for me it is a great lovely memory

    You will see;)

    Thanks all again for the kind words.

    Entry 13


    Dad has seen my entry and he was quite emotional and told me that the song was also a part of the meditation of the white light. And Master Maerhin told me that he had done that meditation before he left the Jeditemple forever.

    And yes I went for a ride with Erenya to the whispering pond and she liked it and the husans. She was riding a young female and I was on old Manal.

    But.
    Yes but.

    On our way back we met Jerak riding one of the wildest male husans there could be found in the stables. Husans are normally nice but the one Jerak was riding wasn?t. Dewali is his name and he is new. And Jerak he was riding him like a wild one. Erenya followed him of course leaving me behind on the gentle Manal.

    Hmm, have to go to Dewali and see if I can make him a gentle husan like the others. That will be nice for Erenya to see.

     
  23. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Erenya probably thinks Jerak is "cool" and Marhin's too "tame" [face_frustrated] Or maybe she went after Jerak to make sure he didn't have an accident? o_O
     
  24. AzureAngel2

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    Dad has seen my entry and he was quite emotional and told me that the song was also a part of the meditation of the white light.

    That also makes me very emotional, too, each time that I read it.
     
  25. KELIA

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    Jerak he was riding him like a wild one

    Show off!

    It's too bad Erenya fell for it :(

    Great udpate

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