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Saga Second Diary of Marhin Adin , 2009 diary 19-12 completed for this year

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2009.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Maybe;) but she will see Marhin again

    Yes,[:D]

    He is showing off but you will see;)

    Thanks again all for reading and here is the next entry

    Entry 14

    Dewali is nice of course. I went to his stable and he was interested in me when I approached him with no bridle or saddle. He let me enter and I could stroke his back without any problem and getting him to the meadow proved to be quite easy. I talked to him constantly and he followed me interested in me and my gentle behaviour. In the meadow we played and I could hop on his back without problems.
    And guess what.

    I heard a soft giggle and there she was.
    Erenya.

    And I could get her on the back of Dewali too.

    But she liked the female Esha better and when master Eled-Hir saw us busy he said that I could get Dewali as my mount.
     
  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Oh that's nice!!! :) I think Marhin's winning the day!! LOL
     
  3. AzureAngel2

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    I hope the four of them will have lots of fun and you will write about it, dear bird.

    [:D]
     
  4. KELIA

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    Awww...Glad Dewali was so receptive to Adin

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    Glad he ran into Erenya.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=

     
  5. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Is he?

    They will but that's not in the next entry.

    Thank you and he will run into Erenya in the next update.

    Thanks all for reading and here is the next entry with the two June challenges

    Entry 15


    WHEW our language teacher Marou had words today like extemporaneous and balmy. And he was explaining those in a funny way, especially the last one dessicate.

    You see, he got a tangy nice tasting briku fruit from the tree and he placed it in a pan with the heat on. The fruit started to shrivel and he said it was dessicated, meaning all the juices were gone.

    Yuck.

    Only thing that happened?

    No he forgot the pan and heat and that had Alwin and his helpers rushing to the classroom and tackling the kitchen ?fire? with lots and lots of water.

    Result?

    All wetted and a balmy atmosphere in the classroom. Alwin was seeing the fun in all that explaining from Marou.

    And that had me wet and well going to the lunchroom where I met Erenya.

    Mistake Marhin.

    She started to giggle when she saw me and turned her attention to Jerak.

     
  6. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Oops, I guess I'd have to call that a romantic setback ;) ;)

     
  7. KELIA

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    She started to giggle when she saw me and turned her attention to Jerak.

    Awww - it wasn't his fault!

    Poor Adin - I hope he gets a break with Erenya soon.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    It is and he will have more.

    On and off, on and off his relation with Erenya is.

    Thanks again for reading and here is the next entry

    Entry 16

    My clothes were dry when I was walking to my home. Erenya and Jerak were following and headed to her place but some one interfered.

    Luciano to the rescue.[face_dancing]

    He had landed in his airspeeder during our classes and was now meeting mom and dad and he saw me coming. And he had some exiting stories to tell.
    So exiting that the stories caught the attention of Jerak. Erenya followed him of course.

    Luciano began his story about a train accident and that had me remembering an entry in my dad?s diary and telling about that.

    Result?

    Erenya asked me to tell more about my dad and his diary.

    And that had Jerak stomping away.
     
  9. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    LOL!!! On and off is right. ;) Marhin never has a dull moment with Erenya :p [face_laugh]
     
  10. KELIA

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    Erenya asked me to tell more about my dad and his diary.

    Whoo-hoo!

    Nice to see her finally interested in spending some time with Adin.

    I just hope he makes the most of it :D

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  11. AzureAngel2

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    More bonds are forged and relationships become deeper.

    [:D]
     
  12. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Never and you will see it in the next entry

    And Erenya is having fun with him again.

    and that will take some more years and teasing by Erenya.

    Entry 17

    Months passed with lots and lots of study and I didn?t have enough time to write in my diary. But now something happened.
    We were invited for a party in the fire fighter school in Monir ? the capital of Moniron ? by Tomy Itsi and Aiden O-Lenge.
    What kind of party?

    Luciano Robi was having his lifeday seven days after I had my lifeday party.
    My lifeday party was nice with Erenya and Jerak and all the others from my class present and Erenya was just teasing me a bit.

    Yes, I had fallen asleep during one of the language lessons but that was after an unscheduled visit to the house of healing to help my other teacher Henrani Elenion with a procedure.

    Doubled over with laughter Erenya told me what I missed during that lesson. A poem titled ?Midsummer Night?s Dream? and I was dreaming about being a famous surgeon.

    A few times I fell asleep after dad fainted because something horrible was happening in the galaxy and each time Master Eled-Hir or Master Elenion helped us.
    Erenya never teases me after those sleep periods but she does when I fall asleep during normal lessons. She tells me I am cute when I am sleeping in the class room.

    Cute, she should have seen me after that party in the fire fighter school.
    Tomy and Spanners had planned a barbecue of course and a water fight and the end result was.
    All were muddy and wet.

    Maariah Tavar said that I was cute with all that mud sticking in my hair, clinging to my skin and saturating my clothes.

    Even dad told me I was cute.

    Hmm, he was cute when sleeping after that surgery. Master Aaqu showed me a picture of my sleeping dad ? 12 years old ? after that surgery. Have to go diary.
     
  13. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Enjoyed that very very much. Midsummer Night's Dream is my favorite Shakespeare play. I'm fond of all his comedies. :D :)

    Marhin is cute when he sleeps huh? [face_laugh]
     
  14. AzureAngel2

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    :eek:

    Students falling asleep in the classroom... I hope not during my language lessons... ;)

    Sweet up-date, with a sort of time capsule...

    [:D]
     
  15. KELIA

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    She tells me I am cute when I am sleeping in the class room.

    awww...I think she's starting to like him!

    At least I hope so.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  16. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He is;) and you will see him in the next entry

    She is but what will Marhin write after this;)

    A funny update with fanart is next


    Entry 18

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/marhinsleep.jpg]

    Grr,
    Never leave your diary in your satchel at school when you are going for a break.

    Erenya found mine and she has drawn that picture.
    I have to admit she is a good artist but this.

    She has seen me sleeping in the classroom, made a doodle on a piece of paper and pasted that in my diary.
    And she was smiling when I entered the classroom and Jerak!

    Grr
    He was hollering with laughter and pointed at my satchel.

    ?Cute Marhin, you are cute sleeping like a toddler on your book,? he said.

    And that had Erenya ? and the rest of the class ? smiling and singing a lullaby for me.

    ?Hush little Marhin
    Go to sleep
    Sleeping in the classroom
    Cute when he sleeps.?
     
  17. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    [face_laugh]
    [face_laugh]
    [face_laugh]

    Oh my!!

    Poor Marhin! What's a guy to do? [face_frustrated]

     
  18. KELIA

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    Aw, poor Mahrin!

    Now he knows why its never a good idea to fall asleep in class.

    Lovely drawing!

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  19. AzureAngel2

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    Och, in general I do not mind when other people do a painting for me. But I was seldom painted myself though.

    Another funny up-date. Thanks! [:D]
     
  20. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Just waiting and Erenya will turn

    He does but he cannot help it sometimes. And thank you

    And a serious one in the next entry and thanks again

    Entry 19

    Something awful happened.

    I fell asleep but this time it was because many beings became one with the Force.

    Dad was visiting Eren Aerendil and he fainted in the dentists chair and I saw him in a bed when I regained consciousness.
    Master Eled-Hir was there caring for us and Master Maerhin Alwin, Jiri, Jake and Enga were in the other two beds. All the Jedi had felt it and when Master Eled-Hir showed us the Galactic Empire News with Darth Vader stating that the rebel base on Hoth was destroyed we were all crying.

    Master Eled-Hir said that we fainted because we had all some healing powers and that we had no training to shield us and cope with those events.

    The next day we held a ceremony for the lost lives at the whispering pond.
    The pebbles sang a mournful song when we put the paper candles on the surface of the pond.

    Master Eled-Hir voiced it in the language of old.

    Ma-dhu-rah sweh-pna, go rah-do-mah sweh-pna.
    Ma-dhu-rah sweh-pna, go rah-do-mah sweh-pna,
    moor-it-tioo, ma-dhu-rah sweh-pna.

    Sweetly dream. Find sleep.
    Sweetly dream. Find sleep.
    Overcome death. Sweetly dream



     
  21. AzureAngel2

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    :_|

    Master Eled-Hir voiced it in the language of old.

    Ma-dhu-rah sweh-pna, go rah-do-mah sweh-pna.
    Ma-dhu-rah sweh-pna, go rah-do-mah sweh-pna,
    moor-it-tioo, ma-dhu-rah sweh-pna.

    Sweetly dream. Find sleep.
    Sweetly dream. Find sleep.
    Overcome death. Sweetly dream


    This is one of those up-dates of your´s when I need a handkerchief. Sniff!

    @};-
     
  22. KELIA

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    many beings became one with the Force.

    :_| :_| :_|

    That's got to be one of the worst things about being a Jedi.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  23. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    He is a healer and he feels all the bad things. The next one is again funny.

    And he is a Dunai elder and a healer.

    Thanks again for reading and here is the next update

    Entry 20

    Because of that fainting dad had to visit Eren again and he came home with a scowl on his face and telling me this.

    ?Marhin Adin, next time you are helping your mother with baking a fruit pie, forget about the sugar. Eating sweets Kaagi was what dentist Aerendil asked and I could only say yes. Eren told me that I have a bad molar and now he has to remove it in the next visit. And he wants to see the entire Adin family.?

    And that had mom muttering, me muttering and only Arianna grinning.
    Figures, she has yet to get her permanent teeth.

    And that awful battle got me some more.

    X-wings!

    Alwin was telling his father Henrani about the X-wings he had seen on Alderaan and that got Lenwe and me ? going from the classroom to the lunchroom and getting our lunches ? listening with awe on our faces. Fighters that can split their wings when they go fighting and they have hyperdrives.

    Lenwe was hopping on his chair and I must have done the same because Erenya was telling us when we came back that we did have little-boy-awed-by-technics-and-big-boy-toys smiles on our faces.

    Big-boy-toys

    Huh. I have to ask if Alwin has a picture from an X-wing. I will show Erenya the big-boy-toy.
     
  24. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Enjoyed the last two updates. Erenya and Marhin are getting pretty tight [face_laugh] :)

     
  25. AzureAngel2

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    Big-boy-toys

    Indeed!
     
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