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Beyond - Legends Shine On You Crazy Diamond (K/J songfic) [Complete] 2004 WFFA Best Songfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Smuggler_Shidakis, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. VadersMistress

    VadersMistress Jedi Knight star 6

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    AGH! BAD GINA! VERY BAD GINA! Did you just kill him? You'd better not have. That was my first K/J fic. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
     
  2. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    You're going to the darkside? [:D]
     
  3. VadersMistress

    VadersMistress Jedi Knight star 6

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    Yes, Gina. Join us... Join us... Join us... :p
     
  4. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    AvenKiel: More is coming!

    Meg and Sarah: Kyp's not dead. Technically. *points to sig* I've already started down the dark path.
     
  5. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *gasp* Another post, so soon? It is! And it's also...
    THE LAST BIT.

    Thanks to all who read and reviewed, all who nommed and are (hopefully!) voting, and VadersMistress for betaing!

    EPILOGUE

    Han took a deep breath, letting his eyes flutter shut. His wife rested a hand on his shoulder in a simple, comforting gesture. "You alright?" she asked softly.

    "Yeah. Yeah, I'm fine." He was lying and they both knew it.

    Leia wondered if it would have been kinder for Jaina and Kyp to have died. There was something about the finality of death, the closure. She knew how it ripped Han apart from the inside every time they visited their daughter and son-in-law. Somehow, it was even harder for him than for her. Jaina had always been a daddy's girl; they related to each other in a way Leia could not. They had shared the same loves and interests; they had been most alike in personality. In earlier times, Leia had often wished she had the same bond with her daughter that Han had.


    And Kyp? She had come to care about him, when he began dating Jaina, because of Han that Kyp escaped from Kessel. It had been Han that had gone after Kyp when he had fallen. Han had always been Kyp's staunch defender and ally. Kyp had, in effect, been another son to Han.

    These bonds made it all the worse for Han to see his only daughter as a raving lunatic. When Kyp, too, had lost his mind, it had been Han that was struck the hardest.

    It wasn't fair, she thought angrily. They'd already lost their youngest son. It wasn't fair for them to have to lose their daughter and Kyp as well.

    She knew that Han still hoped. He still clung to the thin shred of hope that someday, Jaina and Kyp would recover. That the empty shells would become, once again, the daughter and son he had loved. It was, perhaps, not unlike her own denial of Jacen's supposed death.

    Only then, she had believed in her child's eventual return, and others had doubted. Fate, she decided, had a sense of irony.

    Her daughter was gone, and so was Kyp. Their bodies were still here, still walking, still living, but their souls were gone. Jaina would never again be who she once was. Neither would Kyp. Part of her was annoyed with Han for continuing to insist that they would get better. The other felt guilty for her lack of faith.

    "Sweetheart?" Han asked cautiously, easing her out of her reverie. His hand was on the switch to open the door.

    "Yeah." She shook her head slowly, steeling herself before opening the door. "Yeah, I'm fine."
    "No, you're not. Neither of us are." He took a deep breath and squeezed his wife's hand. With the other, he triggered the opening mechanism and the door slid open.

    Jaina stood at the wall dumbly, tracing paint splatters with idle fingers. Sitting on the bed was Kyp, grey-streaked hair hanging limply into his face. He turned blank, black-hole eyes to them. "Hello," he greeted dully, without inflection. "Who are you?"

    ---
    Fin.
     
  6. PunkRockRebelTKDjo

    PunkRockRebelTKDjo Jedi Youngling star 3

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    First post!

    Wow, that was great! It was weird that Kyp went insane, too. Now neither of them will know who the other is.
     
  7. djcati

    djcati Jedi Master star 4

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    I am sad and almost crying, and yet was distracted by PunkRockRebelTKDjo's sig. *stabs it for being too funny* *stabs Monty Python and the Holy Grail, also*


    . . . ;_;

    I do not like that Jaina and Kyp are now both in this state, and yet I feel strangely reassured that they're together now as well.

    A fabulous ending for a brilliant story.

    <3

     
  8. Deneveon

    Deneveon Jedi Master star 4

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    YAY! Now they can be insane together :D [/morbidness]

    No, but seriously. It's kind of fitting, in a strange way, that they're both in that state now. Maybe they can be happy now :confused:

    Wonderful, wonderful story, Smuggler. I'm looking forward seeing some more of your brilliance soon. ;)

    Happy Holidays!

    Den

    EDIT: Stupid smileys...
     
  9. jaya_tharen

    jaya_tharen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Wow. (I seem to be saying that a lot on this thread)

    I almost started crying when I read that last bit.

    *sniffle, sniffle* Awesome, heartwrenching end.

    Can't believe it's over, but you ended it well.

     
  10. Jaina_Solo_59

    Jaina_Solo_59 Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 30, 2004
    wow wo wow
    Happy Holidays!
    "God Bless US Everyone!"
    ~~Kat
     
  11. VadersMistress

    VadersMistress Jedi Knight star 6

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    Happy holidays indeed. How am I supposed to have a merry Christmas if Kyppie is insane? Huh, huh, huh?

    :p I loved it though. Wonderfully written. :D Superb job.
     
  12. Solo_and_Fel

    Solo_and_Fel Jedi Master star 3

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    Hmm. I don't know whether to be relieved that Kyp isn't depressing himself over Jaina anymore or to be upset that they are both lost to everyone else.
    I think I'm currently going with both.
    This was a really intriguing story. Great job.
    :)
     
  13. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    :_| You evil bean. Now you've made me cry!
     
  14. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Tara: Huh, that's right, they won't, will they? Or maybe they will. Huh. Thank you!

    Djcati: I thought it fitting that they be together in insanity. And yes, her sig is way too funny. Thanks!

    Denevon: Yes, they're happily crazy. :D Thank you!

    jaya_tharen: [face_blush] Thanks.

    Kat: MERRY HOLIDAYS! :p

    Meg: Because now they're BOTH insane! See, he's not dead! Thanks!

    Solo_and_Fel: Thank you!

    Sarah: Evil... bean? That's a new one. *offers tissue* Thankees.

    Once again, reviewers, thanks so much. Have a happy holidays, guys.

    You rock.
     
  15. Rowan_Jade

    Rowan_Jade Jedi Master star 3

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    :_| :_| :_| :_| :_|

    Waaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!

    :_| :_| :_| :_| :_|

    Well *sniff* so much for a happy ending huh? I do believe that it's now safe to say that you have been escorted off to the dark side Shidakis! You evil evil evil rotten woman you! Okay, I know, you're not all THAT bad but still! You made em BOTH nutso! At least you put them is the same cell (padding, finger paint and all). Not even a hint as to the outcome? Did he find her again?? *sniff* Maybe???? Okay, I know you're not gonna tell (at least not here) but I can dream right? I know you are a J/K shipper so in our perfect pretty world, they are always together and happy (and serving up blue milk & cookies- hee!).

    Okay, I'll just say, ya done good! I'm darn proud of ya kiddo!

    Ro
     
  16. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Oct 2, 2004
    a very sad ending

    very good written :D

    Mag
     
  17. Kazzy

    Kazzy Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Whoa that was dark! :eek: Nicely written, but very depressing, with both of them gone like that. :(

    That way leads to madness...
     
  18. Master_Kiona

    Master_Kiona Jedi Youngling star 1

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    ~sniffle~ That was tragic! I read the blue milk/cookies story and for some reason exspected this to be amusing as well... lol it wasnt! but it is very very good... Keep writing 'torys!
     
  19. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oh my gosh that was so sad!!! Who were those shadow-things? Is there going to be a sequel or is this going to be explained at all? *falls to hands and knees to beg* PLEASE!!!
     
  20. C3SoloP0

    C3SoloP0 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    but..but but...

    He was supposed to help her...no?

    I mean...wha--??? Why did he go and lose his mind too??

    It was awesome, really awesome..but...*cries!*
     
  21. Amithyst_Blade

    Amithyst_Blade Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *cries*

    that was such a beautifully sad story


    j'aime
     
  22. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ro: cry cry cry cry cry
    Waaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!
    cry cry cry cry cry

    *hands tissues* Sorry!

    Well *sniff* so much for a happy ending huh? I do believe that it's now safe to say that you have been escorted off to the dark side Shidakis! You evil evil evil rotten woman you!
    That's me! :D

    You made em BOTH nutso!
    Yup, I did.

    Not even a hint as to the outcome? Did he find her again?? *sniff* Maybe???? Okay, I know you're not gonna tell (at least not here) but I can dream right?
    Of course you can dream. :) Well... maybe he found her. Maybe he didn't. I like to think he did. :)

    I know you are a J/K shipper so in our perfect pretty world, they are always together and happy (and serving up blue milk & cookies- hee!).
    Isn't that why we're all K/J shippers?

    Okay, I'll just say, ya done good! I'm darn proud of ya kiddo!
    Thanks! [face_blush[/i]

    Mag: a very sad ending
    That's the general sentiment. :p

    very good written grin
    Thanks very much!

    Kazzy: Whoa that was dark! shock Nicely written, but very depressing, with both of them gone like that. sad
    Thanks! I laid the dark+depressing on heavy, and I'm glad people liked it. I certainly did. :)

    That way leads to madness...
    I like that line... 'That way leads to madness...' Cool.

    Master_Kiona: ~sniffle~ That was tragic! I read the blue milk/cookies story and for some reason exspected this to be amusing as well... lol it wasnt! but it is very very good... Keep writing 'torys!
    Thanks very much! Yeah, this is worlds different from Cookies + Blue Milk. :D

    Nat: Oh my gosh that was so sad!!!
    I've been hearing that a lot lately... :p

    Who were those shadow-things? Is there going to be a sequel or is this going to be explained at all? *falls to hands and knees to beg* PLEASE!!!
    Sorry... I'm not planning on any sequels. This already turned out longer than I intended. But who knows? Maybe someday...

    I'm glad you liked it. :)

    C3SoloPO: but..but but...
    He was supposed to help her...no?

    *sigh* Even beloved Kyppie couldn't save her this time. :(

    I mean...wha--??? Why did he go and lose his mind too??
    He saw too much... *is purposely vague*

    It was awesome, really awesome..but...*cries!*
    *hands tissues* Thanks bunches!

    Amithyst: *cries*

    that was such a beautifully sad story

    Thanks! *hands tissues and mops up the tears all over the thread*

    Also an extremely belated thanks to everyone who voted for this in the 2004 WFFA!

    Chocolate Kyppies for everyone. You guys rock. :)
     
  23. MariahJSkywalker

    MariahJSkywalker Poopoo Head star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This story was so sad, Jaina is insane, and Kyp is possibly dead or insane too. Great story.
     
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