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Star Wars Episode IV.V: A Crippled Rebellion-A SW AU-Possible ST Spoilers

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by study888, Aug 19, 2024.

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  1. study888

    study888 Force Ghost star 4

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    As this is Monday, and thus a new week, I can start a new fanfic.

    WARNING: THIS THREAD MAY CONTAIN SEQUEL TRILOGY SPOILERS, AND POSSIBLY MANDOVERSE, KENOBI and AHSOKA AND EVEN MAYBE ACOLYTE SPOILERS

    Title: Star Wars IV.V: A Crippled Rebellion-A Star Wars AU
    Authors: study888,
    Plot: All of canon SW history, including all legends that does not contradict canon, has happened as usual up to this point except for one vital divergent path, represented at the beginning of this fanfic.
    Note: This is Round Robin, and anyone may help write.
    Note 2: This is not intended to be a parody, satire or farce, but we are going for serious here.
    Note 3: Any SW fanfic subsequently written in this continuity can be termed 'Crippleverse'

    A long time ago in a Galaxy Far Far Away....




    STAR WARS
    EPISODE IV.V
    A CRIPPLED REBELLION
    A SW AU

    Prologue:

    As Luke attempted the Death Star Trench Run, he heard a voice.

    Ghost of Obi-Wan Kenobi: Use the Force Luke.....let go Luke

    Luke: Can't be, he's dead.

    Meanwhile, Vader fired at his X-wing, but because the Force protected Luke, he hit Artoo.

    Luke: I lost Artoo.

    Kenobi: Use the Force.

    Luke: Can't be. He's dead.

    Vader targets Luke again.

    Vader: I have you now.

    Then the TIE next to Vader gets taken out by the Millennium Falcon and Vader's ship is also hit, and he goes spinning, spinning out of control, away from the Death Star.

    Vader: What?

    Han: You're all clear, kid, now let's blow this thing and go home!

    Kenobi: Luke, use the Force.

    Luke: He's dead. This can't be.

    Luke's targeting computer lines up his shot and he releases his payload.

    But it just impacts on the surface.

    Kenobi: Now, matters are worse.

    Han: Luke, get out of there!

    TIE's swarm around the Millennium Falcon, and the other X-Wings and Y-Wings engage in some general dogfighting as the Death Star clears the planet Yavin.

    Tarkin: You may fire when ready.

    Commence Primary Ignition.

    Down on the planet Yavin-4 the PA blares. Evacuate! Evacuate! Mission failure.

    Leia, Jan Dodonna and General Rikkan and several others manage to flee the planet with C-3PO and a few other transports as the Death Star obliterates the moon Yavin-4.

    Admiral Akbar: On my mark, all craft jump to these hyperspace coordinates.

    Soon all the remaining Rebellion ships and craft around Yavin jump far away from the Death Star, Tarkin and Vader.



     
    Last edited: Feb 7, 2025 at 5:14 PM
  2. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    I’ll read, but not write. I like the realism of Luke’s doubts and their consequences.
     
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