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Saga "Stars"-- A Luke Skywalker Poem... [freeform]

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Quigonjecca, Oct 20, 2007.

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  1. Quigonjecca

    Quigonjecca Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Stars,
    They bring,
    New hope?
    My life is shattered,
    The last remnants,
    Scattered like the stars,
    They are irretrievable.

    Sand,
    Once my playground,
    Gone?
    Will I ever see it again?
    It is everywhere,
    Swirling,
    Scattered,
    Shattered.

    Suns,
    Twin Mothers of the Desert,
    Will I ever feel
    Your rays?
    Or behind me,
    Do you lie?

    Family,
    What does it mean?
    They are gone,
    I couldn?t save them.
    Now,
    Is it my fault?

    Guilt,
    It will forever plague me.
    Was it my error,
    Or those stupid droids?
    Could I have prevented it?
    Or saved them?

    Destiny,
    I will embrace it,
    I have to.
    What other choices do I have?

    Dreams,
    Do I dare to dream them?
    Or forever will I be haunted,
    By the last dream I dared to dream?
    Imperial Academy?
    Was I so blind?
    Am I that naïve?

    Joy,
    Happiness?
    What are these things?
    They are memories,
    Of a long forgotten life,
    That only ended,
    Minutes ago?

    Sorrow,
    And your companion loss,
    I thought I knew you.
    But I knew nothing.
    Now, I am nothing,
    Or am I starting anew?

    Cold,
    Is like death,
    Is like space.
    It is too far reaching,
    And difficult to fathom.
    Will I ever,
    Understand?

    Alone,
    Yet not alone.
    Hope,
    Yet hopeless.
    Where am I going?

    Skywalker,
    What does that name mean?
    Am I someone,
    Or no one?
    Jedi,
    Or Farmer?

    Hope,
    It is all that I have,
    To hold on to.
    I must embrace it,
    I must hold onto it,
    What else can I do?

    Stars,
    They bring,
    New hope?
    My life is shattered,
    The last remnants,
    Scattered like the stars,
    But I will try to hold on.
    I will try to embrace my destiny.
    I will try?
     
  2. dancing_star

    dancing_star Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 24, 2007
    I love this, Quigonjecca!! [face_love] It's so sad:_| , but beautifully written.@};-
    Absolutely gorgeous!
    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  3. amidalachick

    amidalachick Jedi Master star 5

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    Aug 3, 2003
    Oh my gosh. That was so beautiful. Really poignant look at Luke's thoughts and feelings.

    =D= =D=
     
  4. Meredith_Kenobi

    Meredith_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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