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Saga Stroking (Clone Wars - Anakin, Obi-Wan) HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by pronker, Jul 4, 2013.

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    pronker Force Ghost star 4

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    Jan 28, 2007
    Title: Stroking

    Author: pronker

    Disclaimer: I am not George nor am I Walt, and make no profit from this Star Wars fanfiction, using its settings and characters.

    Rating: PG

    Era: Anakin is 20

    Summary: Obi-Wan accepts a helping hand.

    Warning: An all-convo fic.

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    "Anakin, you said you would show me how to do this. You know I am not any good with, I mean, I never learned how to do it, Master Qui-Gon neglected to instruct me in something so basic - "

    "Relax, my Master. I'll show you. It's nothing to be embarrassed about, my friends and I do this together all the time. Relax, now."

    "All right. I put one hand here and cup the other one under here - "

    "Yes, perfect, you're learning. Now draw up your fingers gently."

    "Like this?"

    "No, that's too hard. You've lost your momentum. Allow me to demonstrate. Listen: put two fingers together and slowly draw them apart. Now swipe them right to left."

    "Does it have to be right to left? I like the sensation of up and down. It feels more natural that way."

    "No, it must be right to left."

    "You've lost me. I'm no good at this, I told you I would not be."

    "I'm putting my hands over yours to guide you."

    "Your fingers are cold."

    "Sorry, I'll blow on - "

    " - let me blow, I'm closer - "

    "That's better. Here, let's start again. Softly at first, then more firm, yes, that's it - "

    "When did this get so hard?"

    "There, you're doing it!"

    "It's ... good .. I, I like doing this ... "

    "I knew you could learn, my Master. Easy now, top to bottom, oh, oh yes - "

    "Yes."

    "Yes!"

    "Yesyesyes - oh! It's gone! And I was almost there!"

    "I'll make it come back, it'll come back ... see? I told you."

    "You had faith in me. Why?"

    "Because you have done so much for me, Master, and I will always appre- "

    "No, I mean why did it go away."

    "You lost concentration and it's just like a kata. Now see what my fingers are doing - "

    "Oh. Oh, yesssss."

    "You've got the hang of it now, your hand under mine, it's moving perfectly - "

    "It's coming, I can feel it! Nownownow ... now!"

    "You did it!"

    "I d-did it. I can relax."

    "Whew."

    "I opened a file in Windows 8. I am so proud!"

    "And I am proud of you, my Master. Tomorrow we'll rearrange tiles."

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    The End.

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    Written to blow off steam while learning to swipe and tap on new laptop touch system. It ain't easy.