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The Beginning and the End (Anakin/Padme) AOTC/Post AOTC - Completed - 8/6/03

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by jedi-ES, Oct 10, 2002.

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  1. jedi-ES

    jedi-ES Jedi Padawan star 4

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  2. PadmeLeiaJaina

    PadmeLeiaJaina Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Woohoo! I get the first postie! Ahh thanks for acknowledging me- my favorite Protector!

    Wonderful beginning! :D Can't wait for more!
     
  3. JediWarriorYoda

    JediWarriorYoda Jedi Master star 4

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    When I saw that you posted the story that you have talked about over at PLJ's thread, I had to come check it out...

    This is a very good story so far... I can't wait to see where you take the love story. Can't wait for more.
     
  4. Arriss

    Arriss Jedi Master star 4

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    <stifling the tears> I told you I wouldn't be disappointed! <clap clap> Bravo! [face_love]

    Post when you feel ready, I'll wait... :)



    And thank you for the acknowledgement.
    [face_blush]
     
  5. anidanami124

    anidanami124 Jedi Master star 6

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    Looks good so far. Hope to see more soon
     
  6. Dally

    Dally Jedi Master star 4

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    Great start. I like your writing very much. And I completely agree with your insights regarding the romance in AOTC.

    I have the feeling this is going to become a very sad story.
     
  7. The_Abstract

    The_Abstract Jedi Master star 4

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    Ok, you already got me hooked. You're off to a great start. Look foward to reading much more of this.


    :cool:


    EDIT: Those are some awesome quotes too. They really set the mood of the story.

     
  8. jedi scholar

    jedi scholar Jedi Youngling star 3

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  9. jedi-ES

    jedi-ES Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great to see the responses.

    My Nubian Queen

    Fitting that you get the first post. :)

    JWY and Dally

    Thanks for your posts. It gets much more interesting in the subsequent chapters. This is a just a setup chapter to explain what happens next. And as to how sad this becomes, we'll see...

    Anidan

    Thanks for coming over and taking a look.

    Arriss

    Hope my mom feels better soon. :)

    I'm glad to see your response. Now feel better and enjoy your birthday!


    I'm even thinking of posting Chapter 1 tonight around 8pm Eastern. Maybe. :D

    Abstract

    Thanks for coming over. I really appreciate it. And I was debating about the quotes, but I decided that they said a lot about what this story will tell.

    Jedi Scholar

    Just wait. The rest of this Part gets very interested, with plenty of psychological insight and mush to go around. :D
     
  10. Mr_Boba_Jango

    Mr_Boba_Jango Jedi Master star 3

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    ES

    Great Job! I have been really looking forward to your story. And its only fitting that it should be about our favorite couple. And knowing how much you love the Love Story, we have no doubts that it will be a joy to read. :)

    Keep em coming buddy!

    And thank you for the acknowledgment. :D

     
  11. jacen200015

    jacen200015 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    :) well, well, well, your story just got off to good start with some readers. :) i knew it was going to be a hit from the beginning. :) :) :) :) :)
     
  12. PadmeLeiaJaina

    PadmeLeiaJaina Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Poor ES, and he was worrying nobody would bother to read his story. :p

    "I find your lack of faith disturbing."
     
  13. anidanami124

    anidanami124 Jedi Master star 6

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    What are sidekicks for. I would not be a very good knight for PLJ if I did not read her Jedi's storys.

    Also sense it is any A/P story why would a pass it up.

    [face_love] A/P
     
  14. anakin-player

    anakin-player Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I will up this story for you so more people will be aware of it. After reading a few of the chapters that ES sent me, I must say that the rest of you will be in for a treat.
     
  15. jedi-ES

    jedi-ES Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Boba

    Thanks for the support. I know how much you have helped me.

    And I cannot deny that I do love the love story and I am a hopeless romantic, so...

    I'll keep them coming as best as I can.

    Jacen200015

    Thanks for your help. Great to see you posting and hope the "traffic" continues.

    Nubian Queen

    I thought being humble was a good thing for a guy. I didn't want to come in here saying I had the next great SW epic here! :D

    But its because of people like you who had faith and kept on encouraging me that I got it going.

    Anidan

    Thanks sidekick! ;)

    And for those who like the love story, I think they will like this. But don't be fooled, this ain't going to be all good, but have faith... :D

    A-P

    Thanks A-P. You're already creating interest for more! :)
     
  16. PadmeLeiaJaina

    PadmeLeiaJaina Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I thought being humble was a good thing for a guy. I didn't want to come in here saying I had the next great SW epic here!

    :p You silly goose! Course you never know.... this might just be that great epic... guess we'll have to sit here and wait to find out! :D
     
  17. Scruffy-looking

    Scruffy-looking Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Great start, looking forward to more!

     
  18. Arriss

    Arriss Jedi Master star 4

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    Here's an UP darlin' as I wait for Chapter 1 :) [face_love]
     
  19. MissPadme

    MissPadme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I love it! What else could we expect from A/P shipperdom's resident romantic? Can't wait for more.

    --MissPadme
     
  20. jedi-ES

    jedi-ES Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nubian Queen

    Silly goose?

    Anyway, that determination is not for me to decide. I am simply here to create and hope that what comes through the heart is expressed in the words.

    Scruffy

    Thanks for stopping by. :)

    And more is coming.

    MOM

    Thanks for the up. Chapter 1 is coming imminently. Unfortunately, my initial Chapter 1 became 21 pages, so this is only the first 6 1/2 pages.

    MissPadme

    Thanks for posting. If you liked that, you're going to love the rest of this first section! ;)



     
  21. anidanami124

    anidanami124 Jedi Master star 6

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    I liked it. It was a ever good chapter you sure can write.
     
  22. JediWarriorYoda

    JediWarriorYoda Jedi Master star 4

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    Boy that was long... did you take lessons from the Queen? This chapter was so delicious... so much mush I was overwhelmed... keep it coming.
     
  23. Arriss

    Arriss Jedi Master star 4

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    Fantastic changes!!

    The gauzy shirt - Irresistable! I love it!

    <proud mom boasting here> Exceptional chapter! [face_love] Looking forward to the next! :D :D
     
  24. Taffy01

    Taffy01 Jedi Youngling

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    Great story!!! Keep it UP!!

    Taffy
     
  25. SlowLearner

    SlowLearner Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Bravo, ES! Absolutely outstanding. :) The words I've just read in your prologue and first chapter could only be the words that came straight from the heart and soul of a hopeless romantic. Your A/P mush simply made me melt. [face_love]

    I'm also glad to see that the gauzy shirt made an appearance in your story. Yay! [face_love] To thank you for that, I pledge to remain a loyal reader of this story from now to the very end. :)
     
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