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Beyond - Legends The Best Way to Get Cookies (Ben Skywalker and Malisia Fel, humor)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by NYCitygurl, Oct 10, 2004.

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  1. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Title: The Best Way to Get Cookies
    Author: NYCitygurl
    Timeframe: NJO AU
    Summery: Ben Skywalker and Malisia Fel (the OC adopted daughter of Jaina Solo and Jag Fel) are trying to sneak around Luke and Mara Skywalker to get cookies, but the adults keep catching them. This is a viggie spinoff of my story [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/15138279/?0]Family Ties[/link] so if you're confused, go there.

    This story is the winner of the Winter 2005 RCA for Best Vignette and Best Male Child (Ben Skywalker). Thank you all so much!! :D

    The Best Way to Get Cookies

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    Malisia Fel pulled on her mother?s hand excitedly. ?When are we gonna be there, Mommy??

    Jaina Solo sighed happily as they arrived at a door. ?We?re here,? she said, relieved.

    She raised her hand to knock on the door. ?No, Mommy, I wanna do it.?

    ?Okay, baby.? Malisia knocked on the door with all her three-year-old strength. She started hopping from foot to foot, waiting for the door to open.

    After what seemed like forever, Luke Skywalker opened the door. ?Hey, Jaina.? Malisia tugged on his pants. ?And hello to you, Miss Malisia.?

    ?Thank you so much for babysitting, Uncle Luke. I have to do yet another Goddess performance, and then I?m working all day, and I?ve got Valin . . .?

    Her uncle smiled. ?You?re welcome. Ben really loves playing with her.?

    ?BEN SKYWALKER, PUT DOWN DADDY?S LIGHTSABER! I?M NOT GOING TO SAY IT AGAIN!?

    Luke winced as his wife?s voice thundered through their apartment. ?Three-year-olds. Nothing like them.?

    ?Thank goodness.?

    Malisia tugged on her uncle?s pants again. ?I wanna play with Ben.?

    Luke picked her up. ?You can play with him.?

    Jaina hugged her daughter. ?Be good for Uncle Luke.?

    ?I will, Mommy.?

    As soon as Jaina left, Malisia turned her attention to the kitchen. Luke walked in and set her down. ?Ben, Daddy?s lightsaber is not a toy.?

    Ben had already forgotten about the lightsaber. ?Lissie!?

    ?Ben!? Ben ran over and hugged his cousin. He took Malisia?s hand a tugged her out of the kitchen.?

    ?Where are we going??

    ?My room. I?ve got a plan.?

    As they raced down the hall, Malisia asked, ?What plan??

    ?A cookie plan.?

    Malisia stopped and grinned. ?I love cookies.?

    ?Me, too.?

    ?Now, we gotta figir out the best way to get cookies.?

    ?Ask?? Malisia suggested.

    Ben shook his head. ?Mommy says no cookies.?

    ?What ?bout Unc Luke??

    Ben shrugged. ?We can ask,? he said dubiously.

    He let Malisia lead him down the hall to his parents? room. Malisia pushed open the door. Luckily, only Luke was there. ?Can we have cookies??

    Luke checked the chrono. ?No, it?s too early for cookies. Would you like breakfast??

    ?I had bwekfast.?

    After they left the room, Ben said, ?Told you.?

    Malisia crossed her arms over her chest. ?You make a plan, then.?

    ??Ready did.?

    ?What is it??

    Ben leaned over and whispered it in her ear. Malisia giggled. ?Okay.?

    They went back into the kitchen. ?Where are the cookies?? Malisia asked.

    ?On the counter. Come help me, Lissie.?

    Malisia joined her cousin, and helped him push a chair across the room. Ben climbed up on it and got onto the counter. He had almost gotten to the cookie jar when Mara walked into the kitchen. ?Ben! What did I tell you about the cookies??

    Ben sighed a big three-year-old sigh. ?No cookies ?til after dinner.?

    ?That?s right. You get down from there right now, mister, and you and Lissie go play in your room.?

    When they got back to his room, Malisia crossed her arms over her chest. ?That wasn?t a very good idea.?

    ?Fine, you try somfin,? her cousin replied.

    Luke Skywalker looked up as the three-year-olds entered his office. ?What?s wrong??

    ?Lissie doesn?t feel good,? Ben said.

    Luke got out of his chair and knelt in front of the little girl. ?What?s wrong, sweetie??

    ?I don?t feel good.?

    ?Well, I can?t do anything if I don?t know what?s wrong.?

    ?You could give me cookies,? she said helpfully. ?Daddy always does what I don?t feel good.?

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  2. JAGSGURL15

    JAGSGURL15 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL that was hilarious and funny! MEH LIKEYS!
     
  3. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Thanks!!! :D

    Nat
     
  4. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Master star 4

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    Hi!
    They are so sweet troublemakers. I like them. :)
    nice viggie!

    Maggy
     
  5. CodeName_Targeter

    CodeName_Targeter Jedi Master star 5

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    Soontir Fel put two cups of milk on the table for his granddaughter and Ben Skywalker. ?How are the cookies??

    ?Gweat! Tank oo, Gwampa!? Malisia said, her mouth full of cookie.

    Soontir smiled and opened Mara?s Weapons Today magazine that Malisia had stolen for him.

    Ben grinned across the table at Malisia. ?You?re right. This is the best way to get cookies.?


    LOL! Very nicely done Natalie! *sucumbs to her allergies again*

    :Targeter:
     
  6. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Maggy: nice viggie!


    Thanks!!! :D

    They are so sweet troublemakers. I like them.

    They get it from the Solo kids ;)

    Jenn: Very nicely done Natalie!

    Thanks!!! :D

    Nat
     
  7. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    [doting voice]Aww... they're so CUTE![/doting voice]

    Adorable, sweet, three-year-old cookie thieves. What more could you ask for?
     
  8. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    Hehe, that was cute. Very funny. I can only imagine what Mara and Luke did when they found out.
     
  9. Vongchild

    Vongchild Jedi Master star 5

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  10. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Shidakis: [doting voice]Aww... they're so CUTE![/doting voice]

    Thanks!!! :D

    Adorable, sweet, three-year-old cookie thieves. What more could you ask for?

    Not much :)

    J_M_Bulldog: Hehe, that was cute. Very funny.

    Thanks!!! :D

    I can only imagine what Mara and Luke did when they found out.

    Oh, they probably wouldn't be too happy.
     
  11. RK_Striker_JK_5

    RK_Striker_JK_5 Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    Oh, that was beyond cute!!!!!

    There honestly should be more stories like this on the boards. Sometimes we should just be able to sit back and giggle, right?
     
  12. green_eyes

    green_eyes Jedi Youngling star 3

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    If you can't get the parents to give you cookies, ask grandpa! Very smart indeed.

    Adorable story. I wonder if Luke and Mara will be so strict when they are grandparents?
    *green_eyes*
     
  13. Jagsgrl412

    Jagsgrl412 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Awesome it was soo cute!!!
    ~Tess
     
  14. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    ?BEN SKYWALKER, PUT DOWN DADDY?S LIGHTSABER! I?M NOT GOING TO SAY IT AGAIN!?

    *snort* Mara, Mara....


    Soontir Fel put two cups of milk on the table for his granddaughter and Ben Skywalker. ?How are the cookies??

    ?Gweat! Tank oo, Gwampa!? Malisia said, her mouth full of cookie.

    Soontir smiled and opened Mara?s Weapons Today magazine that Malisia had stolen for him.


    That little wheedler! That was almost too funny! I loved it, Nat!

     
  15. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The Fanfic Manager With The Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    That was so cute! I loved it!

    ?BEN SKYWALKER, PUT DOWN DADDY?S LIGHTSABER! I?M NOT GOING TO SAY IT AGAIN!?

    LOL I can so picture Mara yelling that!


    Soontir Fel put two cups of milk on the table for his granddaughter and Ben Skywalker. ?How are the cookies??

    ?Gweat! Tank oo, Gwampa!? Malisia said, her mouth full of cookie.

    Soontir smiled and opened Mara?s Weapons Today magazine that Malisia had stolen for him.


    I loved that. Maybe I should try that with my grandpa! :D
     
  16. LumiKuningatar

    LumiKuningatar Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I loved it..

    I especially loved the name of the magasine that ws stolen from Mara.. *wonders off* gotta get me one of those..

    The two of them are very cute.. *sighs* oh, if all the kids were like them.. we'd all probably have grey hair and all that but still..
     
  17. Jamie_Fel

    Jamie_Fel Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Hey Nat!! Great story!! Sorry I took so long but you didn't leave me a food trail or nothin'!! *sniffle* I feel so unloved.

    hmmm.. well I just figured I'd come over here, you know, cause some chaos... the usual.
     
  18. Jamie_Fel

    Jamie_Fel Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Just to keep up tradition... this should be called like "Th' Good Ol' Cookie Jar" or something.
     
  19. Darth_Suzi

    Darth_Suzi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Ben and Malisia are adorable! :)

    *Sigh* You've gotta love the resourcefulness of toddlers. Especially when you're babysitting them.

    EDIT: :oops: I seriously need to check which smiley I'm putting in.
     
  20. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Vongchild: Thanks!!

    RK_Striker_JK_5: Oh, that was beyond cute!!!!!

    Thanks!!! :D

    There honestly should be more stories like this on the boards. Sometimes we should just be able to sit back and giggle, right?

    Exactly. I love humor stories.

    green_eyes: Adorable story

    Thanks!! :D

    I wonder if Luke and Mara will be so strict when they are grandparents?


    Someone should write that story :)

    Tess: Thanks!! :D

    Sarah:That little wheedler! That was almost too funny! I loved it, Nat!


    Thanks!!! :D

    Mira_Jade: That was so cute! I loved it!

    Thanks!! :D

    Maybe I should try that with my grandpa!

    Lol!

    LumiKuningator: I loved it..


    Thanks!! :D

    I especially loved the name of the magasine that ws stolen from Mara.. *wonders off* gotta get me one of those..

    Lol she is a former assassin, after all :)

    The two of them are very cute.. *sighs* oh, if all the kids were like them.. we'd all probably have grey hair and all that but still..

    Thanks!! Lol I wish all kids were like that.

    Jamie: Hey Nat!! Great story!!

    Thanks!!! :D

    Sorry I took so long but you didn't leave me a food trail or nothin'!! *sniffle* I feel so unloved.

    Oops, I forgot to leave the marshmellow trail. I love you!! [:D]

    hmmm.. well I just figured I'd come over here, you know, cause some chaos... the usual.

    Lol

    Just to keep up tradition... this should be called like "Th' Good Ol' Cookie Jar" or something.

    Lol I'm actually turning that into a trilogy or quartet of viggies. I just haven't written the next one.

    Nat
     
  21. anna_is_the_greatest

    anna_is_the_greatest Jedi Youngling

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    Hahahahahaha this is too much!
    luv the story!
     
  22. FelsGoddess

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    Awww! That was cute!
     
  23. Jedi_Liz

    Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I am so glad someone bumped this so I saw it on page 1 or 2.......it was soooo cute and hilarious! I can imagine my own older nieces and nephews (well, the baby nephew wouldn't do this) doing this......sometimes grandparents are suckers for giving cookies to grandchildren. [face_laugh]
     
  24. Jaya Solo

    Jaya Solo Jedi Knight star 5

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    Cute. Very cute. :)
     
  25. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    anna is the greatest: Thanks!!!! :D

    FelsGoddess: Thank you!!! :D

    Jedi_Liz: Thanks a bunch!!!! :D My grandparents always give me dessert whenever I ask :D

    Jaya: Thanks!!! :D
     
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