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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by AnakinsFavorite, Dec 14, 2006.

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  1. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I feel so sorry for Aria. At this point her witch of a mother is nothing compared to Vader.
     
  2. palpyisgod2

    palpyisgod2 Jedi Master star 2

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    yum, sadistic unsuited Vader....*shivers in anticipation*

    btw, am I the only one who thinks Vader more scary written out of the suit than in it?
     
  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    You killed Obi and Bail?

    :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

    I'm sure the Rebellion will go on without them, heartbreaking as it will be.

    I shudder to wonder what Vader has in store for Aria.

    Great udpate

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  4. Kelli_LB

    Kelli_LB Jedi Master star 4

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    Vader is really scary, you are doing a great job portraying him. I'm so afraid for your OC; I hope there's going to be some kind of happy ending for her. I can't believe Bail and Obi-Wan are gone. I hope that they somehow got out of there at the last minute.
     
  5. rb657062

    rb657062 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Normally I wouldn't say this, since Obi-Wan and Bail were killed, but that was sort of cool...from a dark side perspective. [face_blush]

    I hope you post another chapter soon.

    - Rachel
     
  6. CrazyAni

    CrazyAni Jedi Master star 4

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    Have I said you that you were evil? Well, I'm saying it now.

    Poor Aria... Vader had gone quite sadistic there. The scene was so disturbing, Vader's good looks making it even more sick and disurbing than it was. Translation: disturbing means that your descriptions were beyond amazing! =D=

    I wonder what her mother is thinking about it, and her father for that matter.

    Obi-Wan and Bail disappearing? Oh my, that couldn't mean anything good! :eek: I refuse to believe that they're dead. I shall bask hope for them. And nothing will stop me.

    Though, I do hope that somehow they are saved...

    And if not, that's not sooo tragic either, on the other hand.

    Wonderful update again, my friend! I can't wait to find out what more your evilness has in store for us!

    Crazy
     
  7. Kitten

    Kitten Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I hope that somehow Bail and Obiwan survived. [face_worried]
     
  8. Darth_Father-in-law

    Darth_Father-in-law Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh dear! What have you done?! I LOVE this story!

    Bail and Obi-wan are dead, Vader is being a total a**hole, and Aria is afraid of him, as well as confused. I can't believe you're this evil! No, wait - I can. You are truly evil!

    Vader is so creepy, so sadistic and full of himself. That's why I love him, of course. :p And your portrayal of him is flawless.

    Sorry that I got in here so late, but please keep me on the PM list. This story is sooo good.

     
  9. AnakinsFavorite

    AnakinsFavorite Jedi Knight star 5

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    Okay, to get this bad boy out of the way- BAIL AND OBI-WAN ARE DEAD! FOR GOOD!

    VA_Parky:
    You can hold onto that if you really want to- but they ARE dead. Thank you- I?m glad you?re liking my Vader!

    randomangel22: He?s got worse qualities, believe me!

    Farra_Sti: Thank you for reading, my dear!

    Jturtle: *snickers* Oh, believe me- things can get much worse?

    darksideyesplease: Thank you for reading, my friend!

    Jade_Max: Well, I just killed off Yoda in another fic- I?ve set a high standard to live up to!

    Amidala66: Aww! Thank you! *hugs Amidala66* Your comments always make me grin!

    RavenNolan: They?re dead. Vader is one complicated cookie- and I wouldn?t expect any chivalry from him in the near future!

    HandmaidenVeme: *Laughs* The mom and Vader almost deserve each other!

    palpyisgod2: He is scary outside the suite- you can see his emotions and know that there is a person in there? something so twisted and terrible.

    KELIA: Or, better yet- what she has in store for him!

    Kelli_LB: Thank you! Don?t worry, she?ll make it to the end? hopefully.

    rb657062: *Winks* I promise to not tell anyone that you said that!

    CrazyAni: Aww! Thank you! I?m glad I?m pulling off Vader- he is rather hard to write!

    Kitten: I?m so sorry to disappoint?

    Darth_Father-in-law: Your first line there cracked me up- such contrasting emotions! Thank you for your sweet words- you positively have me blushing here!

    PM List: If you ever wish to be added or taken off my list, just let me know!

    VA_Parky, randomangel22, Kitten, Amidala66, HandmaidenVeme, KELIA, RavenNolan, star_writer24, darksideyesplease, Darth_Father-in-law, Jturtle, Farra_Sti, Gizzi1213, jedi7, palpyisgod2, Jade_Max, rb657062, Kelli_LB


    Chapter Six: Aria?s Ultimatum


    Aria did not recall having screamed or bursting into tears, but her cheeks were soaked with the salty liquid when Vader furiously whirled her around to face him.

    ?And don?t you forget it, my pet,? he sneered.

    The Sith then turned his attention towards a stern-looking officer waiting a few steps away for further orders. ?Escort Lady Jy?tari to my quarters so she can ready herself.?

    The tears rolling from her eyes quickly turned to ones of shame.

    As the captain led her away, Aria looked back over her shoulder to find that the Dark Lord was smiling with perverse pleasure at her.

    Out of sure fear, the escort seemed unwilling to even do so much as lift his eyes from the ground to look at her, for he was startled when she actually spoke.

    ?And what is your name??

    Surprised, he fairly gaped at her. ?Captain Piett at your service, my Lady.? That said, he dropped her a swift bow though it seemed that he wasn?t comfortable with doing so.

    ?I know what everyone thinks of me- and believe me, I feel the same way about myself and? and my station here,? she confessed nervously, wondering just how much of this conversation would be repeated to him. When they reached what were to be her new quarters, the young woman gazed dully at the large canopy bed. For a minute, it seemed that she wished to speak but was incapable of doing so. ?Do you have any children, Captain??

    Though the man had realized that he was in grave danger by merely speaking to his leader?s mistress, Piett looked her in the eyes and said in a restricted voice, ?Yes? a son.?

    Trying to dry her tears, Aria turned her back to him and walked over to the bed, sadly trailing a finger along the pattern of the soft sheets. ?How would you feel if you had a daughter- and she was forced to go through what I am??

    Arms tight at his sides, Piett was obviously not liking the direction their conversation was taking. ?I?d much rather die than her be put to shame.?

    ?And would you blame your daughter for trying to flee said circumstances??

    He thought carefully before answering. ?I would do everything in my power to assist her. My Lady, we might be Im
     
  10. Kelli_LB

    Kelli_LB Jedi Master star 4

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    Gulping, she could only nod her head. ?I will not give you leave to do so until you?ve made me your wife.?

    She certainly is brave, but I fear that she's going to pay for this rebellion. I like that you included Piett in this; I hope that he will become an ally of hers. Great chapter!
     
  11. Darth_Father-in-law

    Darth_Father-in-law Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow! Aria's move was a brave one. I wonder how Vader will react...He won't be happy, I'm sure, but yet - Aria has her right to demand integrity until marriage. How could Vader know her customs? He just seems to wait until he gets hurting her, that's what I'm afraid of.

    Great chapter, I'm looking forward to read more. And I'm fine with Obi's and Bail's death - it's sad, but a cool twist to this story. I won't be here so soon next week - I guess you know where I am...But I'll come here as soon as I have returned. Take care!

     
  12. VA_Parky

    VA_Parky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Go, Aria! Give him all you've got! =D=

    I can't blame her for losing her temper. She's had quite an unfortunate day - and I have to say, she's faring much better than I would be under the same circumstances.

    Nice cliffie - can't wait to see how Vader is going to react to THAT. Oooooh boy... [face_worried]
     
  13. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    :eek::eek::eek:

    Aria is either incredibly brave or incredibly stupid.

    I loved her standing up to Vader though.

    Great update

    =D==D==D==D=
     
  14. randomangel22

    randomangel22 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That's it Aria is definitely done for [face_skull].

    Me thinks Vader's gonna be really pissed [face_worried] [face_skull].

    Excellent job ;)!!
     
  15. Jturtle

    Jturtle Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Gulping, she could only nod her head. ?I will not give you leave to do so until you?ve made me your wife.?

    This brings up a lot of questions on both sides. It's an honorable idea of Aria's but I wonder about Vader's feelings as he has already been married and it obviously didn't work out well in this AU.

    Can't wait to see what happens next.

     
  16. Amidala66

    Amidala66 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Boy, I wish that it were Wednesday everyday. I love your updates.

    I can't wait to see what Vader's response will be to this request. Aria has got alot of guts.
    Love Piett too.:)
     
  17. Kitten

    Kitten Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OMG! :eek: She has a lot of guts. Unfortunately, I have a feeling this burst of confidence and bravery will come back to haunt her. [face_worried]
     
  18. Jade_Max

    Jade_Max Jedi Master star 5

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    *shakes her head sadly* Aria's flight of temper, her discussion with Piett - I keep thinking she's going to throw something at Vader about being a slave - and it'll make him crack. And then she gives an ultimatum.

    Brave, but foolish at the same time. I don't think she realizes just how much trouble she's in... *sighs*

    I do like her as a character though - and I hope she and Piett can become friends ;)

    Becoming Vader's wife though... careful whar you wish for ma'pet, you just might get it



    That was a great update - Thanks for the PM![face_peace]
     
  19. RavenNolan

    RavenNolan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Hmmm... I'm not sure that was such a good ultimatum given the way Vader's last marriage ended. Even if that is not part of this story, his temperment alone might make me think twice about that one. [face_worried] Of course, I'm glad she had the guts to speak up for herself.

    Vader is deliciously bad here, though. I don't know whether to love him or hate him. I think I'll just drool from a distance. =P~
     
  20. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ?I will not give you leave to do so until you?ve made me your wife.?

    I think Aria is trying to make the best out of a horrible situation.

    As Vader's wife she'll have the protection of his name and "Lady Vader" sounds a lot better than "Vader's Whore".


    (That last line made me think of that song by Meatloaf. I forgot the song title but I know the word paradise was in it...)
     
  21. palpyisgod2

    palpyisgod2 Jedi Master star 2

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    Yikes! I was sweating through that (meybe it's 'cos Melbourne's like tatooine right now). Makes me think what Vader's next move will be

     
  22. CrazyAni

    CrazyAni Jedi Master star 4

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    If my younger sister told me she wanted to marry someone like Darth Vader, I'd faint first, and then drag her by her ears to... wherever she'd least wanted to be. Unfortunately, I can't do the same to Aria. Though, I have to admit, that considering Vader's intentions, she'd better be Lady Vader than his... pet. The girl has bravery!

    'perverse pleasure' *pictures it* That's gross.[face_sick]

    Piett sounds like a good friend. I hope he'll help her out in the difficult situation she found herself in.

    Intriguing update, my dear! You have me on the edge of my seat (or of my bed, as I'm lying on it now). So can't wait to see how it resolves.

    *applauds and cheers enthusiastically*

    CrazyAni

     
  23. Farra_Sti

    Farra_Sti Jedi Master star 2

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    Great update. I hope he doesn't force himself on her when she's made it clear that she wants to wait for marriage.
     
  24. IsithTorin_DarkJedi

    IsithTorin_DarkJedi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I love your story [face_love] , could you please add me to your PM list?
     
  25. Jedi-Roxy

    Jedi-Roxy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Oooh, I've read other stories along the same premise and this one is very good. Great job! Can I be added to the PM list?

    Phoenix
     
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