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Beyond - Legends THE EIGHTH CORTEX (NJO: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp,others) Completed 5/12/04!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by YodaKenobi, Nov 26, 2003.

  1. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    yes it would..... come on, we can make this the official JOD gossip thread


    Hmmmn. :p As much as I would liek that I'd have to pass. Don't think you'd like what I'd say. ;) :p
     
  2. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    You're doing amusingly evil Kyp/Jaina things... and from what I've seen, a desire torture characters is at least half of shipping 'em...

    oooohhhhhhh, duh. Sorry, makes sense now :p Whether I'm "shipping" Jaina and Kyp has yet to be seen ;)
    No matter what disappoints or excites people in this story, remember there's a third one coming where I can ruin everything completely :p


    Hmmmn. As much as I would liek that I'd have to pass. Don't think you'd like what I'd say.

    okay, now I'm scared :p
     
  3. FamousAmos

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    did I miss something here? When did this become a trilogy :confused:

    Either way, you're really overdue for a new post YK ;)

     
  4. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah, where's the post Yoda? :D
     
  5. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    It was always a trilogy. Since first post of revolution :D Not everything will be resolved in this one, but a lot will. Everything I kind of left hanging in Revolution for instance. The last story will be the end of the Yuuzhan Vong war.


    New post will be up tomorrow, but thanks for the interest FamousAmos, and JOD :)
     
  6. FamousAmos

    FamousAmos VIP star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Date Posted: 4:52pm Subject: RE: THE EIGHTH CORTEX (NJO: Anakin Solo, Jacen, Jaina, Tahiri, H/L, L/M, Kyp, many others) Updated 1 - Date Edited: 5:25pm (1 edits total) Edited By: YodaKenobi
    It was always a trilogy. Since first post of revolution Not everything will be resolved in this one, but a lot will. Everything I kind of left hanging in Revolution for instance. The last story will be the end of the Yuuzhan Vong war.


    Oh, well I guess I should have figured that one out ...

    And post tomorrow, kick ass :cool:

     
  7. Thrawn McEwok

    Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare star 6 VIP

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    YK: oooohhhhhhh, duh. Sorry, makes sense now :p Whether I'm "shipping" Jaina and Kyp has yet to be seen ;)
    No matter what disappoints or excites people in this story, remember there's a third one coming where I can ruin everything completely :p


    :D

    Anything I could say to this would simply spoil the fun, I think... [face_mischief]

    - The Imperial Ewok
     
  8. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    nah, I probably only mentioned it at the "notes" in the beginning, easy to miss :) thanks, Amos.

    Anything I could say to this would simply spoil the fun, I think...

    :p feel free to say what you like. You won't spoil anything ;)
     
  9. the-Admiral

    the-Admiral Jedi Youngling star 1

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    duely said , duely done.

    i said i would read it and i did.. my only comment...

    more soon ?

    the Admiral
     
  10. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    :eek: COOL! a new reader! Thanks for reading, the-Admiral :) I'm working on the next chapter right now. I'll post soon :D
     
  11. YodaKenobi

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    Chapter 6

    A moment of panic filled Leia as she awoke groggily and could not see.

    Have I gone blind?

    After a few minutes or hours of slipping in and out of consciousness, she peeled the dried blood away from her eyelids and was able to separate them.

    The rectangular cabin she was in was no more than three meters in any direction and the walls were made of a reflective surface, polished to a shine.

    Besides the aching pain in her head, Leia felt a tremendous sense of cold. It was then that she realized she'd been stripped down to her most personal of clothing.

    She crawled closer to a wall on one side to see her distorted reflection. Her face was covered in dried blood from her forehead wound above her left eye, which was stiffly swollen and bruised-- leaving the eye half closed. There was also a trail of crusted blood from her nostrils down to her chin that reminded her of a stream in a drought.

    She pulled her raw lips apart and realized how thirsty she was.

    How long have I been here?

    She didn't remember much and it was hard for her to concentrate with the pain all over her face.

    She began to tremble from the shock of seeing her own battered portrait and the cold of space travel until her body was covered in thousands of tiny bumps.

    Leia glanced around the remainder of her small cell and spotted a small vid screen and intercom in the wall to her right. Next to it was the only door to the chamber, sealed shut, no doubt. To her surprise, a tray of food and a mug lay on the floor in front of her.

    Leia lunged for the mug with speed she didn't know she was capable of, and just as quickly, gulped down its contents. Bad Corellian ale; but she didn't care. The liquid run down her dry throat and it made her feel worlds better. Leia was also pleased to see the trey filled with fruits that she hoped were juice filled. As she dug into the produce, the vidscreen lit up with the image of a scruffy looking man, and a view port behind him showing the swirl of hyperspace.

    "Awake, are we?" He asked with the hint of a smile touching the ends of his lips.

    "I apologize for the violent nature of your capture, but its difficult to intercept someone of your standing, Leia Solo."

    Great he knows who I am.

    "So you know who I am; I guess that makes you smarter than you look," Leia snapped.

    "Ha!" He laughed. The man quickly managed a more sincere demeanor and then said, " I'm also sorry to take your cloths, Princess. I had to make sure you weren't carrying any weapons or Jedi devices. I assure you your modesty was not compromised and if it makes you feel any better, it was the droid that stripped you."

    Leia sneered and then remembered the HK droid who'd stormed her cabin after the Harbinger of Peace had been yanked from hyperspace.

    "What have you done with my guards, and the crew on my shuttle?" She asked angrily.

    "They were all alive when we left them. That gas we used was nasty stuff, that's why your nose was bleeding," he added, "but it won't kill anyone."

    "No, I'm sure leaving them in a derelict ship in the middle of nowhere will do that," Leia snapped again.

    The scruffy man grinned. "Nice try, Princess, but I have a feeling that little shuttle of yours will transmit a distress signal and be picked up eventually."

    Leia tried to glare at him but it hurt her bruised eye too much.

    "Who are you?"

    "I'd like to retire without worrying about being hunted down, thank you," he snarled.

    "That won't save you... I have powerful friends." Leia boasted.

    "Precisely why I've gone to great lengths to prevent their intervention," he said, his grin getting slimier with every passing second.

    "What do you..." Leia stopped mid-sentence when she realized what he was referring to. She could not feel the Force-- it was as if her connection to it was lost, or being stifled.

    Ysalamiri!

    If there were ysalamiri on board, she would be unable to use the Force to escape, or call out to Luke or her children. A great sense of helplessness saturated her wounded body.

    "Why?" She screamed. "Where are you taking me?"

    The man looked sympathetic for a brief moment. "Why I'm just a bounty hunter; the why isn't important to me. I will tell you it's the Peace Brigade who contracted me, and you can probably guess what they want you for." He stopped and thought over the rest of his answer. "I suppose there is no problem in telling you where you're being taken either... You're going to Tatooine."

    Leia did her best to hide her despair; she wouldn't allow herself to cry in front of this monster.

    "There's a change of clothes in the small compartment to your left," the bounty hunter offered. "I would appreciate your cooperation, Princess Leia. If you comply, I'm sure we'll get along famously."

    With that, the screen turned blank again.

    Leia put her fruit down and stood for the first time since waking. Her back was stiff from lying on the hard floor and she stretched to relieve the tension. Opening the small compartment the man had mentioned yielded a single set of clothes-- white shirt, pants, and jacket.

    At least the jacket appears to be slightly insulated, she thought.

    Leia dressed quickly and finished her meal. For not the first time, Leia wished she had completed her Jedi training. Though she wouldn't be able to use the Force with ysalamiri creating a Force resistant bubble in the area. Still, she knew Luke would be able to escape the situation.

    Leia was awaken again some time later when the door to her cabin opened and the silver HK droid entered. She quickly raised from her place on the floor, sleeping on her right side because the left side of her face was so sensitive.

    The droid stared down at her with it's glowing red eyes and kept it's blaster rifle trained on her.

    "You have been granted shower privileges, Leia Solo," the droid answered in his monotone voice. The assassin tossed a pair of stun cuffs on the floor in front of her and said, "please restrain yourself."

    Leia complied, looking for any way to get out of the tiny room.

    "I would like to remind you that nay attempt to escape will result in your termination," the droid said.

    The menacing nature of the threat was made more troubling by the metallic voice. "The Captain will still receive a large reward for your corpse, but it would be best for both parties if you cooperate fully."

    Leia stood up and the HK droid said, “ladies first. Turn right; third door on the left."

    She stepped around the red eyed killer and entered the hall, following his instructions with the blaster rifle placed firmly between her shoulder blades. She used the opportunity to take in as much of the ship as she could on her short jaunt to the refresher.

    There didn't appear to be anyone else on board, and the bounty hunter had called the assassin, the droid. Chances were, it was just the two of them. Not impossible, she thought.

    Leia knew she had to find a way to escape soon. It would be far easier to over power or trick the two on board then it would be the many Peace Brigade members that were probably waiting for her on Tatooine.

    She reached her destination and entered the refresher after the droid removed her stuncuffs and waited outside. Leia took a quick shower, not wanting to waste the opportunity to wash the blood off her face and clean the wounds. After dressing again hurriedly, she began scavenging the refresher for anything she might be able to use in an escape. She still had no contact with the Force, which meant the ysalamiri bubble was larger than her own cabin.

    Predictably, the refresher was devoid of anything she could possibly use to aid her in an escape. She resigned herself to that fact with a sigh and hit the control switch on the door. It slid open revealing an empty hallway.

    Where's that droid?

    She peeked around the doorway and glanced in both directions down the hall. The HK was nowhere to be seen...

    Is this a trap or my one chance to escape?

    Leia stepped into the hallway and headed down it at a quick pace as noiselessly as she could manage. She didn't recognize the model of the ship, but it appeared to be a small freighter.

    Should she try and find the ysalamiri? Should she kill them? No, she couldn't do that, it was not the creatures fault after all.

    She continued down the hall, afraid her breathing would cause too much noise so she stopped all together. Reaching the end of the hall, Leia found the door standing open revealing the ship's cockpit-- also empty.

    Looking at the controls, she considered pulling the ship out of hyperspace, but that would alert her abductors. Leia needed a plan; she hadn't expected an opportunity like this to just happen without her having a chance to coordinate an escape.

    Spotting a small data pad on a chair, Leia picked it up. Scrolling through it she found bank transfers, names; bounty contracts-- all containing the name Dest Ornax. Obviously it was the scruffy bounty hunter's name.

    A sharp jab to her ribs brought Leia to her knees with a cry. The HK droid was standing over her as he reversed the butt and pointed the weapon at Leia.

    She looked to his right and noticed Dest had snuck up on her as well.

    "What did I tell you about trying to escape, Leia?" He asked.

    "The entire ship is under surveillance. There is no hope for escape. This was a test, and a lesson. Now that you know this, I don't expect anymore trouble," Dest finished. "Kay, take her back to her room."

    She glared at the brown haired man with every ounce of rebel left in her. The HK droid hauled Leia off the ground and escorted her back to her cabin.
     
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  12. forceaddict

    forceaddict Jedi Padawan star 4

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    great post, poor leia
     
  13. Thrawn McEwok

    Thrawn McEwok Co-Author: Essential Guide to Warfare star 6 VIP

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    Ouch. Poor Leia.

    But a great post, all the same. Brilliant echoes of the OT, from Leia in white on through...

    Makes me intensely hungry for more!

    - The Imperial Ewok
     
  14. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yup, Leia in white reminds me of OT days...*smiles wistfully* :D

    Great post, Yoda. Loved the Leia chapter and I like Dest. He seems like a guy just trying to make his way in the universe... ;)

    Hope Leia will escape though it probably won't be soon.

    :D I think you know what I'm about to ask.


    More soon?

     
  15. YodaKenobi

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    Thanks forceaddict! :) Yeah, Leia is taking a beating in this one :(

    Ouch. Poor Leia.

    Yeah, I felt bad writing it :_|

    But a great post, all the same. Brilliant echoes of the OT, from Leia in white on through...

    Yup, thats what I was thinking ;)

    Makes me intensely hungry for more!

    Thanks again, Thrawn_McEwok! :D

    Yup, Leia in white reminds me of OT days...*smiles wistfully*

    :D

    Great post, Yoda. Loved the Leia chapter and I like Dest. He seems like a guy just trying to make his way in the universe...

    Thanks, JOD :) Yeah, Dest is just a money-hungry jerk, good to see you like him :p

    Hope Leia will escape though it probably won't be soon.

    If she escpes at all. I'll let you in on a secret: Whatever you're thinking is going to happen to Leia, you're wrong. No one will ever guess it [face_devil]

    I think you know what I'm about to ask.
    More soon?


    aww, of course ;) Thanks again, JOD! Shooting for thursday with chapter 7, gunna check in on one of my favorites we haven't seen since Revolution :p
     
  16. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Great post, YodaKenobi! :D

    ~~Jilly
     
  17. Tahiri-Solo

    Tahiri-Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    :eek:
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    i hope she gets even!!!!Great post!!!
     
  18. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    Thanks JainaDurron and Tahiri-Solo :D
     
  19. FamousAmos

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    Great post, YK :D

    Its good to see Leia doing what she does best ;)

    post more soon??
     
  20. Tahi

    Tahi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Omigosh - poor Leia, battered , bruised and humiliated. I pity Dest, I really pity him - hell with have no fury . . . ;)

    I enjoyed the echoes from the OT, too, especially:
    "That won't save you... I have powerful friends." Leia boasted. :D

    I think Dest would have been disappointed if Leia hadn't risen to the bait and tried to escape. Once a Rebel always a Rebel.

    It may sound odd, but I'm enjoying the way you write the droid and its dialogue. It's quite amusing.
    ?ladies first. Turn right; third door on the left." Such attention to detail! :D And that "please restrain yourself" line really made me giggle. Great word play.

    Exciting post. Thanks. :)
     
  21. Tahiri-Solo

    Tahiri-Solo Jedi Master star 4

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  22. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    Thanks FamousAmos :)

    Omigosh - poor Leia, battered , bruised and humiliated. I pity Dest, I really pity him - hell with have no fury . . .

    hehehehe [face_devil]

    I enjoyed the echoes from the OT, too, especially:
    "That won't save you... I have powerful friends." Leia boasted.


    Yeah, I definitley barrowed that one :p

    I think Dest would have been disappointed if Leia hadn't risen to the bait and tried to escape. Once a Rebel always a Rebel.

    Yeah, it was a pretty cruel trick. Leia didn't have any choice but to try and escape. :(

    It may sound odd, but I'm enjoying the way you write the droid and its dialogue. It's quite amusing.
    ?ladies first. Turn right; third door on the left." Such attention to detail! And that "please restrain yourself" line really made me giggle. Great word play.


    LOL! I hadn't thought of that line that way :p
    :D glad you like him. The HK droid comes from Knights of the Old Republic as JOD pointed out earlier, though I tried to give this one a different persona. HK-47 from KOTOR was pure evil.

    Thanks, Tahi :D


    And thanks for the bump, Tahiri-Solo [face_love]
     
  23. YodaKenobi

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  24. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I think "someone's" in love. :p
     
  25. YodaKenobi

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    Why, are we starting the JOD gossip thread now? :p

    new post in a minute.