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Saga - Legends The End (very AU; Obi-Wan and Xanatos vignette)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by JediMaster_Jen, Oct 5, 2004.

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  1. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Title: The End
    Summary: A look at the destruction of the Jedi Temple

    Disclaimer: George Lucas owns everything even remotely related to Star Wars. Jude Watson owns the character of Xanatos.

    Listed at: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Fan_Fiction_Resource/b10304/17037796/?20]The Obi-Wan Fan Fic index[/link]


    This vigentte was originally posted on Obi-ew's [link=http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/12763001/?3060]Obi-Wan Challenge Stories[/link] thread a few days ago.
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    [image=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v481/Vegas_Baby/hugh_jackman_photo341.jpg]~Xanatos


    The End

    Kaboooooooom!
    "Noooooo!" "Noooooo!" "Nooooooo!"
    The screams came from all directions.
    The dead and dying littered the halls.
    Bathed in the red glow of his saber, Darth Vader made his way towards the Council Chamber.
    Thrust! Parry! Swipe! Jump! Stab!
    Master Qui-Gon Jinn died on the blade of a former student.
    Vader continued his push towards his goal.
    The Council doors slammed open.
    Evade! Thrust! Spin! Parry! Stab!
    Master Mace Windu died at the hands of a former Jedi.
    Quickly, Vader ran from the chamber.
    There wasn't much time left.
    Kaboooooooooom!

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    His mission was complete.

    The Jedi Temple was a mass of flaming rubble.

    Hundreds of Jedi were now one with the Force.

    Soon their comrades that still lived would join them.

    The Jedi would fall, and the Galactic Republic would go with them.

    The Purge had begun.

    ******************************************************

    "Were Jinn and Skywalker among the dead?," the Sith Master asked.

    "Yes, my Master. Skywalker died in the initial blast and Jinn...I took care of Jinn personally," Vader informed his Master.

    "Good. Very good. Finally, Jinn has paid for his crimes against us both."

    Lifting his hood away, the face of Obi-Wan Kenobi came into view. "Is Sidious next, my Master?," he asked.

    Rremoving his own hood, Xanatos Renashaii looked at the shorter man and smiled evilly. "If you so wish, Lord Vader. I will not miss him."

    With that, Obi-Wan, Vader tossed his dark reddish-blonde head back and laughed before speaking. "I wish to hunt the remaining Jedi."

    ******************************************************

    On Dagobah, Master Yoda closed his eyes in pain and agony.

    All across the galaxy, the warriors of the Light met their fate at the end of Vader's red blade.

    The Force wept for it's fallen soldiers.

    The Jedi had fallen, and the Galactic Republic had gone with them.

    The Purge had ended.

    Where once a Republic stood, an Empire was born.
     
  2. ZaraValinor

    ZaraValinor Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Cool story. Evil Obi, makes me want to shiver. In some ways I think he'd be worse then evil Ani. I like your pictures too, especially Xanatos.
     
  3. SenatorHermione

    SenatorHermione Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 21, 2004
    The picture was a nice little bonus! Great viggie! Evil Obi is interesting.
     
  4. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    ZaraValinor~Thank you. I agree, I think Obi would be much worse that Anakin if he were evil.

    I love your pics too, especially Xanatos

    Thanks, me too. That's my favorite pic of Hugh Jackman--he just looks so....scrumptous.

    SenatorHermoine~Thanks for reading. I love that pic, too.
     
  5. Jedi_Chani

    Jedi_Chani Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Aug 30, 2004
    Now that was good! Where the heck are all these Sithly Obi-Wans coming from? I'm not complaining mind you, but whoa!~
     
  6. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jedi_Chani~Glad you liked it.

    Where the heck are all these Sithly Obi-Wan's coming from?

    Well, I don't know about the others, but mine popped out from under my bed where he's been chained for the last few years. [face_laugh]
     
  7. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Bad Obi, Bad Obi! But he's so darn cute. And the picture of your Xan? Priceless!
     
  8. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thanks VaderLVR. He is cute, isn't he?

     
  9. Arwyn_Whitesun

    Arwyn_Whitesun Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great work, JM Jen! And Hugh Jackman as Xanatos!!! Yum! [face_love] Love it!!!!
     
  10. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Arwyn_Whitesun~Thanks.

    Yum!

    I totally agree. [face_laugh]
     
  11. Skywalker_Angel

    Skywalker_Angel Jedi Master star 1

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    Sep 12, 2004
    Great story, I hadn't read this one before.

    Nice work. =D=
     
  12. Princess Jedi

    Princess Jedi Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I liked this story. Very good...evil Obi! :)
     
  13. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Angel~Thanks, glad you found this one.

    Princess Jedi~Thanks. Evil Obi is delicious, isn't he? [face_mischief]
     
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