Before - Legends The Game of Death (Qui/Obi, Angst, Hurt/Comfort) *Chapter 11* Updated 12/05/09

Whoa!

?Qui-Gon,? Mace said, and seemed to be choosing his words carefully. ?You must understand that this is very hard for us to believe. Obi-Wan has been gone for a long time now, you yourself said your bond with him was cut the minute the senator?s ship blew. No other sense of him has been found in the Force since then. Your grief has been terrible. Now you enter out of the blue, claiming Obi-Wan is alive based on nothing more than a brief flash of presence after leaving his room. A place you avoided until now. A place soaked in his old Force signature.? He let the words hang for a minute. ?I?m sorry, Master Jinn, but if what you felt was real and not just an echo in the Force, how is it no other felt such a massive disturbance. No Master on this Council sensed any such thing.?

Qui-Gon balled his hands into tight fists to prevent himself from trembling. ?Because, with respect, this Council has become nothing more than a gathering of blind fools.? He ignored the collective shock around him. He didn?t care right now. ?You don?t know how to listen any longer, hobbled as you are by your narrow mindedness.?

?Master Jinn!? Now there was a bite of anger in Mace?s measured tone. ?If you think--?

?Enough. Silent you both will be!? The command stopped them all in their tracks, edged as it was with quiet steel. Qui-Gon turned to Yoda, who had sat quiet and pensive up till now. He had no idea what the ancient Master was thinking. But he would fight him too if he had to.

Yoda seemed to sense his thoughts and gave him a piercing stare. ?Respect for this Council you will have, Qui-Gon,? he said, before turning to Mace. ?Achieve nothing, this bickering does. Going Master Jinn is, whether we grant permission or not.? Here he cast Qui-Gon another level stare. ?Give him what he needs, we might as well. Keep him out of more trouble, it might.?


Awesome post!

 

I was so glad to come back to an update for this incredible story...all I can say is WOW! Great post, great characterizations, do I need to go on?

 

Oh my goodness!! Wonderful job, Glenstorm!! This story is so gripping! I started it two days ago, and it's the only thing I've read since! Lunch break has hardly enough time.

But now I'm caught up and I would like to add to the general clamor. Please post more soon!

On a literary note, I must say that your characterizations are spot on, especially Qui-Gon. And Kyan is very cute. He adds just the right amount of cheeriness to the fic. Keep up the great work!

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~Celeste

 

Please update soon

 

Thanks everyone! Just to let you know that the next chapter is half complete and on the way. I won't make you wait so long this time

And I'd like to give a big welcome to CelseteAntola on my PM list

And a belated, thank you, thank you, thank you for the noms and the subsequent qualifications. You've made my summer

 

bump

 

Very nicely done. Glad that I refound it! Please update soon.
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update please!!!

 

OK, just sat here and read the whole story when I should have been studying...But it was definitely worth it!! WOW! This story is so incredible. You have the ability to make it so heart wrenching yet warm. I applaud that.
I really hope that you will update soon. I patiently await more.

 

Great work... here i am, in my work, at night, 05.07 am reading this story and i love...
up please... Poor Obi... Poor Qui...

 

I just re-read it all again... so I had to bump it