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Saga The Heart of a Smuggler/ Han/ DDC2009/ ESB/ Companion "A Father's Love"/ Mini-Update 2-10

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by The Great No One, Jan 14, 2009.

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  1. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    Title: The Heart of a Smuggler
    Author: Trimaj
    Timeframe: During the course of ESB
    Characters: Han, mention of others
    Genre: Not... quite a diary, but Han's thoughts that he would never put to pad or anywhere else. So it's his mental diary
    Keywords: Diary, Han
    Summary: Han's private thoughts throught the course of ESB
    Notes: This is for [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/29588737/p1/?173]the Dear Diary Challenge 2009[/link] and is also the companion diary to Thrawn1786's diary, [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/29687672/p1/?0]A Father's Love[/link]. Also, this is not my world. I'm just playing in it.

    Also, thanks go out to Qui-Gon_Reborn and DaenaBenjen for betaing this. And to Thrawn1786 for wanting to do this.


    [b]Entry 1[/b]
    [i]Out on a Taun Taun looking for Luke[/i]


    Okay, I?ll give the Alliance this, they sure know how to pick a planet. This gives pirates a run for being inhospitable.

    Damn that Kid for getting lost. Now I?m out here in this fething cold for space only knows how long. This?ll make what, the tenth or so time I?ve managed to pull his rear out of the fire? Or frostbite in this case. Why am I even still here? It?s not like Leia?s ever going to be interested in me. She more or less made that clear earlier.

    Of course the Falcon couldn?t be cooperative. NOOOOOooooo, she had to go on the fritz again and then Chewie went and took some other stuff apart. As much as I love her, I really hate her sometimes. Hunk of junk. But then... where would I be without her? Probably still stuck under Jabba. Can?t believe I used to almost like him. Fething Imps making us dump that cargo. Fething asteroid field swallowing it. Fething universe for sticking me in this situation!

    Damn it Kid, you?re the hero, not me. I just wanna pay off my debt and live my life. You?re the one who?s got all these ideals.

    Stupid asteroids. Stupid, stupid asteroids. Why?d you go look at it kid? That?s what those stupid sensors were for, so we?d know if it was something else. You really gotta stop being so stupid.

    Feth this fething ice burg! Feth the rebels for hiding here and feth that arrogant princess for making me care about something again. Feth it, feth it, feth it. Feth, it?s cold out here!

    [hr]

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  2. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Very nice start!

    You captured Han's character perfectly - I can just picture him muttering half of what he was thinking there [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Please PM me when you update this

    Looking forward to more

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  3. dancing_star

    dancing_star Jedi Master star 4

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    [face_laugh][face_love] Great job! You're writing one of my favorite characters in one of my favorite timeframes. :D I look forward to see where you take this!! :)
    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  4. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Gotta love Han! [face_laugh] =D=
     
  5. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Hello!!! This is great! Your Han is perfect liek star says. :D

     
  6. LASOS

    LASOS Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Yay I love it! Perfect! Whose diary is the companion piece? Can't wait to read that either. Are you doing PMs? I'd love to be on the list if you are, otherwise I'll just keep checking this. You've got me hooked!
     
  7. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Of course the Falcon couldn?t be cooperative. NOOOOOooooo, she had to go on the fritz again and then Chewie went and took some other stuff apart. As much as I love her, I really hate her sometimes. Hunk of junk. But then... where would I be without her?

    Perhaps he would be flying a Fire Fly... only joking. Wrong ship, wrong alliance and wrong SF universe.

    I am glad you are writing again and but me on your PM list. After a long day filled with the usual up´s and down´s of a teacher´s life it feels got to read a jolly good story!
     
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    lovely to see Han muttering about his Falcon
     
  9. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    first off, thanks all for reading.

    KELIA: You captured Han's character perfectly - I can just picture him muttering half of what he was thinking there

    that was at least half of the goal.:p

    Please PM me when you update this

    *nods* sure thing.

    Looking forward to more

    funny, so'm i.;)

    dancing_star: You're writing one of my favorite characters in one of my favorite timeframes. I look forward to see where you take this!!

    han is very easily my favorite character from the original triology. i hope i can do him justice over the course of the year. glad you'll be along for the ride.

    VaderLVR64: yea momma V, you do. always glad to have you reading along.

    Jade_Eyes: Hello!!!

    hello yourself.:p

    This is great! Your Han is perfect like star says.

    don't know if i'd say perfect... but i'm glad you think so.

    LASOS: Yay I love it! Perfect!

    ok... who'm i to argue with three different people? i bow to your unbiased opinions.

    Whose diary is the companion piece? Can't wait to read that either.

    that will be written by one Thrawn1786's, and should be coming either today or tommorow. It's going to be the other half of the dynmaic duo, Chewie

    Are you doing PMs? I'd love to be on the list if you are, otherwise I'll just keep checking this.

    consider yourself on it.;)

    You've got me hooked!

    now i need to reel you in.;):p

    AzureAngel2: somehow i doubt han would touch a firefly.:p

    also consider yourself added as well. definitely glad to be writing again as well, and just as glad to be able to brighten your day a bit.

    earlybird-obi-wan: yea, somehow i think that he does that a lot.

    :snoopy
     
  10. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    @};-

    Thanks, Tri!

    :*
     
  11. Tatooine_Ghost

    Tatooine_Ghost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    loved it. please add me to the pm list.
     
  12. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Very true to Han... or "I second and third what Star said up there."


    Very good start, Tri. :)
     
  13. Qui-Gon_Reborn

    Qui-Gon_Reborn Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I can't believe I forgot to comment on this. :oops:

    Excellent work, Tris. Even reading it a second time, I still can hear Han saying this. Very, very, very nice! =D= =D= =D= =D=

    Can't wait to see what goes in the heart of a smuggler next...:p
     
  14. Ramza

    Ramza Administrator Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA VIP

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    Good stuff, Tri! Looking forward to reading more!:D
     
  15. BultarSwan

    BultarSwan Founder: Grand Rapids, MI FF star 10

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    Very well done, bro. [:D] Han is my fave, too. :D
     
  16. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    Azure: welcs.

    Tatooine: done, and hopefully you'll continue to enjoy it.

    Daena ok, i rescind whatever doubts may have still been lurking in the back of my mind. *gets out a whip and forces them to go somewhere else*

    QGR: no worries snips, we all forget things at times. and yet another person who thinks that... am i blind or something?:confused:

    Ramza: glad to have you along my friend.

    Swan: thanks sis. always happy to see you over here.

    :snoopy

     
  17. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    I have a mini update for you today. No, this likely will not become a habit, it was just too perfect. Yes there will be something a bit more substantial in the next few days.


    [b]ENTRY 1.5[/b]


    I'm really starting to hate the color white.

    [hr]

    Comments? (*mutters at habits* seems vaguely pointless this time)

    :snoopy>
     
  18. LASOS

    LASOS Jedi Youngling star 2

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! [face_laugh][face_laugh][face_laugh]
     
  19. Qui-Gon_Reborn

    Qui-Gon_Reborn Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I love it!!! [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] Elegant simplicity.
     
  20. hyperspace_police

    hyperspace_police Jedi Master star 4

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    Nice Han you've got going there...

    Well done.

    [face_laugh]
     
  21. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    [face_laugh]

    I can believe it.
    The only compensation would be dreaming of snugging with Leia. [face_laugh]
    :)
     
  22. Falcon

    Falcon Chosen One star 10

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    [face_laugh] That is so Han in the beginning. Please add me to your pm list
     
  23. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    LASOS: ;)

    QGR: simplicity can be best sometimes. sure makes updating easier at times. even though i don't consider it a real update.

    Hyperspace_Police: danke, i'm glad that you think so. i always enjoy writing him.

    Jade: the snuggles will come later... or thinking about them.;)

    JediFalcon: consider it done. again, glad that people think that's han and that you're along for the ride.


    Next part coming up momentarily

    :snoopy
     
  24. The Great No One

    The Great No One Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    Entry 2
    Finding Luke



    Oh feth. Luke! What in the hells happened to you, kid? Damn it, those cuts didn't come from anything around here. Hope whatever did that isn't still chasing you, otherwise this ain't gonna be pleasant.

    Damn this is cold.

    Hold on kid, I'l-

    Frak! Now we're stuck out here. Luke... Wait. Warmth. That's what you need.

    Crap, kid. You gotta lose some pounds. I didn't think you sky jockey's were into weighing a lot. Just glad that you're not Porkins . Now where is that shiny stick of yours...

    Ah ha! Now to cut open smelly-

    There. Oh feth. Feth, feth, feth this stinks. I knew that things normally smelled when you cut 'em open, but good gods. Hope you don't end up suffocating, kid.

    Now. I guess I can make a igloo, or something. Glad you have this light sword. Hope it'll cut ice pretty well. This is going to be one hell of a night.

    [hr]

    Comments?

    :snoopy>
     
  25. Qui-Gon_Reborn

    Qui-Gon_Reborn Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    *snatches first comment*

    Great work, Tris! =D= Excellently written Han.
     
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