Saga The Naboo Chronicles: Complete. More replies (9/17/07)

Heh, Obi and Sabe are a funny couple. More of them later. Here is another update to keep everyone entertained. Enjoy!

Chapter 7 {part III)

A sudden sense of apprehension filled him as his eyes focused upon the body lying in the midst of a blooming field surrounded by huge mountains. It was Padmé and she rested motionless with her eyes fixed blankly towards the sky. A frigid chill filled his being as the form of a grinning hooded figure. However, it was overwhelmed by a blindingly bright light. As Anakin bent over to shield his eyes, a voice echoed through the now gusting wind. ?You must wake, Chosen One!?

?Who are you?? he cried out as he could discern a slight figure standing off in the distance.

?It does not matter. All that is important is that you wake and find what is missing.?

Young Anakin immediately sat up in his bed. Unlike his previous nightmares about finding Padmé?s body, this time, the warning had urgently addressed him. Using his newly learned skills, the boy reached out with his feelings into the Force to locate Padmé. Much to his discontent, she was nowhere in the palace, nor were her handmaidens. He quickly reached for his comlink where a message was waiting for him.

?Ani,

I didn?t wish to wake you up since you looked so peaceful. Late last night we received an urgent call from the head council of the village of Torjda, requesting my presence for an urgent meeting this morning. The handmaidens and I will be leaving soon and should be back later this afternoon, so be ready to leave upon our arrival.

-Padmé?

Without thinking, the boy grabbed his lightsaber then ran towards Master Obi-Wan?s quarters. He pounded furiously for several moments until the drowsy eyed Jedi finally answered.

?What?s wrong, Anakin?? the Jedi asked as he rubbed his eyes roughly to remove the sleep.

?Padmé?s in trouble. She needs our help!?

?What??

?My visions, Master. My visions told me that something bad is going to happen to Padmé now.?

Obi-Wan looked at the boy in disbelief. His years of training had taught him that dreams would pass in time. However, he was aware that there were Jedi over the centuries capable of receiving Force induced visions through their dreams.Could Anakin be one such as these? Was he willing to gamble with the Queen?s life to prove the boy wrong?

Noting Anakin?s determined expression, the young Jedi nodded quickly as he turned around to grab his cloak and lightsaber. ?Do you know where she went??

?They went to the village of Torjda. It?s in the mountains so we must hurry.?

The two ran through the halls of the palace and into the main hanger where Anakin?s ship was parked. The boy quickly jumped into the pilot?s seat to power up the ship?s main engines. Ignoring usual take off protocol, Anakin lifted out of the hangar and into the early morning sky. Hopefully they would not be too late.

The Nubian highlands were a remote region full of rugged terrain. The village of Torjda was situated near the Great Mountains that covered the northern hemisphere of Naboo. Torjda was higher than most settlements on the planet, thus making it difficult to grow crops and most goods had to be imported. The Trade Federation decided to use this site as a prison facility and brought people from every region of the planet due to its isolation. It had taken several weeks to return everyone to their homes and only now were they ready to restore public works to the village.

As Amidala?s entire entourage processed from the shuttle, they looked at one another in confusion as nobody was sent to greet them. Concerned, Captain Panaka stepped out of the shuttle to scout the area. He then turned to the Queen and the handmaidens. ?I don?t like this, your highness. Something is wrong.?

Amidala sighed as she thought over the situation. ?Please go into the village and speak with the town?s elders. Perhaps it was a simple miscommunication.?

Her chief of security bowed respectfully in response to her order. ?Sabé, Sa

 

Not good! Most definately not good!

Obi-wan and Ani better hurry!

 

Well that was just a cruel cliffie!

Loving the tentative feelings between Obi-Wan and Sabe. It's fun to see Obi-Wan, who's usually so stoic and in-control, put off-balance by this woman. So great the way Anakin could sense how her signature, and Obi-Wan's, changed when they were in close proximity of one another.

Also liked how Anakin could sense Padme's aura so strongly.

But now, about that cliffie...

 

Astareal: Obi-wan and Ani better hurry!
Let us hope our heroes can make it .

Gina: Well that was just a cruel cliffie!
Sorry about that, but they can be loads of fun

t's fun to see Obi-Wan, who's usually so stoic and in-control, put off-balance by this woman.
It is definitely a lot of fun also to see our normally cool as a cucumber Jedi completely lose his nerve. Sabe really has him backpeddling.

And now, for the conclusion...

Chapter 7 (Part IV)

When he stepped onto the Angel?s platform, Anakin noticed the Queen was walking along a cobblestone path in the middle of a grassy field which resembled the one in his dream. Without hesitation, Anakin reached for his lightsaber and hurdled himself down towards the Queen?s entourage. As Obi-Wan emerged from the ship, he noticed what was about to happen and using the Force, he gave chase, hoping his Padawan wouldn?t get himself killed.

While everyone?s attention was turned away, including the security detachment, a tall figure, which had just vanquished two of the Queen?s guards, sharply rose with a bloodied, jagged dagger in his left hand. As the Neimoidian was about to strike Saché with blind fury, Anakin instantly ignited his lightsaber to block the swooping arc. Noxin looked at him in complete surprise since he hadn?t seen where the child had come from. However, unwilling to fail Darth Sidious, he unleashed a strong slash aimed at slicing off the small boy?s head. Surrounded by the Force, Anakin adroitly guided his emerald hued weapon towards the dagger and shattered it into pieces as he swept around to strike at the Queen?s attacker. With two broad swipes, he severed both the Neimoidian?s legs causing him to scream out in utter pain as he collapsed to the ground.

Finally regaining their wits, the four nearby handmaidens collapsed around Amidala who was in a near panic since she was unaware of what was transpiring. Sensing no further danger, Anakin deactivated his lightsaber and returned it to his belt without removing his stare from the injured assassin. Meanwhile, Obi-Wan, who saw the entire event, changed direction towards the two remaining Neimoidians.

Obi-Wan withdrew and activated his recently constructed lasersword as he engaged into combat. The two assassins were both caught off guard as they saw the sapphire blade arcing down on their mini-swords. Both Sabé and Panaka recognized the opening that the Jedi had provided and quickly swept the two aliens off their feet and pointed their blasters at their heads. The chief handmaiden gave the Jedi a slight smile in relief, which was rapidly overtaken in worry. ?The Queen.?

Sabé, along with Obi-Wan and Captain Panaka ran over to find Anakin staring blankly at the fallen Neimoidian. Captain Panaka, both amazed and dismayed, gently placed his hand on Anakin?s shoulder. ?High Protector Skywalker, would you and Master Kenobi please escort the Queen and her handmaidens back to Theed?? With the vacant look still in his eyes, the blond haired boy nodded silently as Panaka shot a concerned glace over at Obi-Wan who was just as awestruck. The Captain informed them, ?I will alert security to await your arrival. We will remain to secure the area and search for additional accomplices.?

Refusing to remove his focus from the assassin, while attempting to suppress his rage over someone wanting to harm Padmé, Anakin barely shook his head as he heard Obi-Wan?s voice speak out. ?Very well, Captain. We shall see to it at once.?

Finally, the boy lifted his gaze from the would-be assassin as he felt the gentle mental nudge through the Force from his Master. He then turned his attention towards the group of huddled women, which he hurried towards. The handmaidens broke their human barrier when they saw him approach. Amidala, uncertain of what just happened, experienced a mixture of relief and worry as she saw her young friend along with his Master approaching.

?Your highness, Miladies, please accompany us back to Anakin?s s

 

Great post. I like how you showed how powerful Anakin really is, and how Palpatine is always watching him from afar, plotting.





POST MORE SOON

 

That was a tense scene. Thankfully, Anakin and Obi-Wan made it in time. And of course Palpy would be pulling the strings.

 

i just caught up on everything, and I LOVE this story.

wow, wow, i can't wait for more! i hope you are able to update more often, you have something really good going here!! i will be looking often for updates!!

 

Well done! The day is saved, the queen is safe, and I'm a very happy reader. I'm sorry I'm gonna have to make this short 'cause I'm preparing for finals ...oh joy. But I still anxiously await the next chapter of this wonderful story of yours!

 

keep it coming rev. Really getting into this now.
When's the next post?

 

Awsome, go Anakin! Watch that temper though. . .

 

Wow... this is an excellent AU, JediMasterRev! Absolutely outstanding! The characters are extremely well done, and both the romantic and dark undertones are very interesting! Of course, I'm never one to turn down even a hint of Sabewan!

I had a theory as to the identity of the woman Qui-Gon was with early on in the story. Could she be a physical representation of the Force itself?

Once again, wonderful job!

AQ

 

Many, many thanks to everyone who dropped me their comments and thoughts. I truly appreciate it. Now on to responses.

Jek_Windu: I like how you showed how powerful Anakin really is, and how Palpatine is always watching him from afar, plotting.

I'm happy to know that you are enjoying. With Anakin being trained much differently, his limits are only going to be the extent of his own ambition. However, the real question that will become more prominent is how will having a somewhat normal life affect his destiny as the Chosen One.

And for Palpy, he is very much like the puppetmaster controling the strings of the galaxy. He is definitely not any weaker in this universe.

Gina: That was a tense scene. Thankfully, Anakin and Obi-Wan made it in time.
Thrilled to know that I was able to convey the tension well. It is the first of hopefully a lot more action as a story unfolds.

And of course Palpy would be pulling the strings. If nothing else, you have to admire his cunning.

Darksideyesplease: Hi there and welcome. Thank you for your very kind comments. Always warms my heart to know that people like my little story. I hope to update soon. Been moving and my beta has been AWOL; however, I got a great pinch-hitter so Chapter 8 should be coming soon .

AP4EVER: Well done! The day is saved, the queen is safe, and I'm a very happy reader. Yes, all is well and good in our happy alternate universe, for now . I'm happy though that you are happy .

I'm sorry I'm gonna have to make this short 'cause I'm preparing for finals Good luck to you. Can't say though that I miss those days .

More to come soon.

AJ_Nejedi: Glad to know that you are enjoying. Update should be coming soon .

Shinar: Watch that temper though. . . It always seems to be the bane of his existence. Unlike in the movies, he does have a certain young Queen keeping an eye out for him .

AngelQueen: Both the romantic and dark undertones are very interesting! Still blushing after that kind comment. I'm always thrilled to know that I am doing this wonderful characters justice. As far as undertones, when I wrote the original NC, it was only about Ani and Padme and I felt it needed the rest of the universe to make it much more interesting and richer storyline.

Of course, I'm never one to turn down even a hint of Sabewan! Me neither. I think she would have definitely made old Ben much more mellow in the movies .

I had a theory as to the identity of the woman Qui-Gon was with early on in the story. Could she be a physical representation of the Force itself?
The gold star goes to AngelQueen (Love your penname btw). Yes, she was the physical Force and we will see her before we conclude our tale .

Happy to know that you are enjoying. Look out for a new update soon

 

AHH! I just discovered this fanfic and liking the way the story is going so far. Will be watching out for more.

 

Yui-Chan: Welcome to the story. Glad to know that you are liking this, so far.

Thanks again to everyone for your comments and thoughts. Here is some more for weekend viewing pleasure .

Chapter 8 (Part I Homecomings

Count Dooku was thankful to be returning to his family?s estate on Serenno after months of travel. This place had quickly become a refuge after his abrupt departure from the Jedi Order and his subsequent mission to seek out the Sith threat. For many months, he had scoured the cosmos in search of information about the elusive Sith Lord. However, planet after planet, Dooku would turn up nothing but a few rumors and even fewer answers.

Prior to his exodus from the Jedi, he had spent time amongst several Outer Rim worlds and had made several contacts. The discontent towards the Republic was even greater than it was when he had previously reported to the Jedi Council. Many more leaders were becoming vocal about their displeasure over the inaction of the Senate during the Trade Federation crisis, as it was now called and many wondered if the same apathy would exist if their worlds were suddenly occupied.

What further outraged those that took the Count into their confidence was the unusual way that the Trade Federation Viceroy was released from Republic custody. While a trial in the courts still loomed, Gunray and his cronies were released and allowed to return to Neimoidia Prime on their on recognizance. This was unheard of in a case that amongst the many serious charges included high treason. However, whenever Count Dooku would attempt to dig further for the truth, the path of information would abruptly end.

Sar sighed deeply as he entered the sanctuary of his estate; he was long overdue for some much needed meditation. He grinned to himself as he could almost hear his old Master?s voice, admonishing him for not doing this sooner. While Qui-Gon was always foremost in his thoughts, Dooku found himself missing Master Yoda?s enlightened presence; as skewed towards the Code as it always was; yet, it could be reassuring at times. As he rounded the corner hallway towards his chambers, the former Jedi Master knew that this wouldn?t be possible as he sensed two presences that did not belong there.

Instinctively, Dooku reached for his newly crafted arched lightsaber, and with the Force, dampened his footsteps as he approached the living area. The room?s two occupants nearly jumped out of their seats when they heard the echoing snap-hiss of an ignited lasersword. Their recent misfortune with the Jedi made them all too acquainted with the intent behind that sound.

The Count could not hide the look of amazement at who was sitting before him. ?Viceroy Gunray, this is indeed most unexpected.?

The tall Neimoidian, along with this aide, Rune Hakko, immediately stood up and bowed. ?Count Dooku, it is truly an honor to finally meet you in person. Our mutual friends from the Commerce Guilds have spoken highly of the fabled ex-Jedi.? He paused deeply to swallow as he saw the glow of the sapphire lasersword illuminating the room. ?We have been looking for you for quite some time.?

Dooku simply stared at the aliens as he studied the pattern of the Force surrounding them. They were both cowardly, of that he had no doubt. However, something tugged at the edge of his consciousness not to dismiss them outright. The grey bearded man extinguished his weapon as he then turned towards a high backed chair to drape his cape over. ?Why have you sought me out??

?We know of your years of dedicate service with the Jedi and your feelings about the Republic Senate. We feel that we could trust you with our mutual problem.?

Becoming increasingly curious, the Count subtly gestured for the two aliens to sit as he took his seat across from them. ?Mutual problem??

Nute turned to his advisor, who appeared to give him a nod of support rather than permission. The Neimoidian took in a deep breath before he continued. ?The manner in which our blockade against

 

*bites nails nervously* Now, Dooku starts down the dark path... will it forever dominate his destiny? Great post, JMR! Your setup up of the background for the events that take place in AotC is extremely interesting! I've always been curious as to how Dooku came to be what he was. Qui-Gon's master couldn't have been that much of a fool all the time, now could he?

Though, personally, I think he does have a point in some areas. The Jedi are really too entrenched in the Senate's workings and are fast losing their objectivity. And his pain at losing Qui-Gon is all too real. His basic thinking that the Council's dealing with the situation of Naboo was not handled very well is also a good point. If there was even a suspicion of Sith being involved, or even some kind of Dark Jedi, then there certainly should have been more than just a Master and Padawan team sent with Amidala. There should have been an entire platoon of Jedi sent, for Force's sake! Then, there's probably a very good chance Qui-Gon would have lived to irritate the Council another day...

I'm glad you like my little penname. My inspiration was rather similar to Anakin's, when I think about it.

Again, outstanding post!

AQ

 

Isn't that always the way? The rougue goes out to try and do good, only to be decieved and used for evil in the end? It's easier now for me to see how Dooku got started down the dark path. Good job! Can't wait to read more!

 

My thanks again to all who reviwed. Hope there are more out there lurking, but are just being bashful

AngelQueen: I've always been curious as to how Dooku came to be what he was. Qui-Gon's master couldn't have been that much of a fool all the time, now could he?

Thank you for your kind comments. I too have always wondered how Dooku fell to the Darkside. As we have seen in both trilogies, the road to **** is paved with good intentions, especially when pursued by a Jedi.

If there was even a suspicion of Sith being involved, or even some kind of Dark Jedi, then there certainly should have been more than just a Master and Padawan team sent with Amidala.

You bring up a very interesting point. I think the Jedi were too much in denial to even allow the possibility that the Sith had survived throughout the centuries, undetected. I agree, had the Council taken Qui-Gon seriously, possibly Yoda and Windu would have accompanied them to Naboo and would have probably captured Darth Maul instead of him ending up sliced in half at the bottom of the pit.

Glad you are enjoying!

AP4EVER: The rogue goes out to try and do good, only to be decieved and used for evil in the end? It does seem that their idealism does get the better of them. I think Dooku's notion of saving the galaxy clouded his vision as he feel to the Darkside. Thanks again for your comments. Here is more.

A/N: I can't believe I forgot to mention this, but my eternal thanks goes out to Alethia who kindly betaed this chapter. Enjoy!

Chapter 8 (part II)

Several days after the failed assassination attempt, Amidala along with Anakin, Sabé and Obi-Wan boarded the Angel Queen to make way towards the small mountain village of Venato, the location of Padmé?s family home. For the entire journey, Anakin had been entranced by the changing landscape as they flew over prairies, meadows, lakes and streams, which were followed by majestic mountains that filled the distance. In order to protect the safety of the Queen, they had departed Theed fully cloaked without any prearranged flight plan.

While Anakin was busy at the ship?s controls, he would glance over to the co-pilot?s chair where the slumbering girl Queen sat. Although the total flight time would take less than an hour, she had fallen asleep even prior to take off. The boy sighed in relief as he somehow knew that she was safe. The horrible nightmares had ceased and from his limited understanding, the Force felt serene to him, for the first time since he had become consciously aware of it. Hopefully this would remain the case for a long time to come.

Even though the young Queen slept, her mind was wrought with problems. Since the liberation, there had been a growing movement to establish a stronger military presence that could prevent another takeover. Although they were traditionally pacifists, the Naboo were weary of the Republic?s ability to defend them. They were in search of alternatives than solely relying on Jedi intervention. While having a standing military was against Amidala?s innate principles, she was sympathetic to the people?s concerns and was understandably conflicted. Ultimately, she would decide what was in Naboo?s best interests and hopefully she could convince Parliament to support whichever decision she arrived at. The road ahead was not an easy one.

As Anakin reflected on everything, including his numerous training sessions with Obi-Wan, he could overhear him and Sabé talking about their respective childhoods. He had even noticed Obi-Wan holding her hand for a little while, until the Jedi sensed Anakin?s stare causing him to quickly withdraw. Anakin thought that his Master was a bit too tightly wound and needed to have more fun. A flashing on his controls indicated that they were nearing the coordinates that Padmé had provided. This had caught Sabé?s attention as she stood up to join Anakin. She smiled warmly as she looked out the viewscreen.

?Are we there yet?? asked an a

 

*smirks* I already read this, hence I know what happens *grin* But I'm not telling...

You're welcome, by the way. Finally decided that I should actually review this instead of just IMing you about it.

So...I found this chapter very sweet. The way Anakin and Padme interact with one another is so endearing...and you can almost know that it will cause...not problems, but more embarrassement as they get older. Really, his crush on her is quite sweet.

I also loved the Dooku part at the beginning of the chapter- it fits well. I can see how Dooku would believe that and would be interested in Gunray and his 'helper'. And it also goes with his Jedi training- wanting to help, which is nice. I never really thought that Dooku left the Order to be a Sith, more that that happened later on, as an effect rather than the cause. So I really enjoyed the bit with Dooku.

And of course, I loved the bits with Anakin and Padme and Obi-Wan and Sabe and Padme's family. Nice to know that the idyllic nature of Naboo still exists. Then again, this does take place right after TPM, but whatever. I still like it *grins*

 

Awww! Family time! How wonderful! Very nice chapter, JMR! It's good to see Padmé be able to relax amongst those she loves most. And something in perfect hibernation has awoken... Oooo... interesting!

AQ

 

wow, two updates since i've looked, very nice, and padme and anakin continue to grow closer... encore encore!!

 

"Meet the Family" would be a good way to title this post. It was nice seeing the Naberries accepting Anakin into thier home with such love and gratitude. The interactions between Sola & Padme and later A&P at the tree, were well done and...dare I say, sweet.

Great job! Me want more!...Please

 

Padme's family home is definitely something I'd want to visit.

I like the sweet friendship between Padme and Anakin here-- but it's obvious Anakin's hit it rather hard with his crush on Padme.

Keep up the good work!

 

Very intriguing look at Dooku's motivations in the previous chapter, and I loved seeing Padme get to interact with her family. So sad, though, that even Padme's private time has to be marred by talk of politics. It was so sweet how Anakin sent her warm thoughts to help her relax at the end.

Great job!

 

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And as an extra added bonus, if I get a good response to this, I will post o the title and a sneak peak chapter of the sequal to NC. Cheers!

You will? Now I wish I was a lurker...