<<Waves>> Hi Seb! I've started reading this and have to say- I love your writing style. I'm only a page through (trying to catch up ) but I love your use of dialogue and you're great with the way you write the characters. For some reason I really loved this line: "I gotta wonder if he has an ulterior motive with her," Anakin muttered back, quickly putting an end to that train of thought before Jacen could board it. I don't know if the last part of that is actually a saying or not- if it was, I'd never heard it before and thought it was really clever. Just wanted you to know I'm interested in this story w/ a Dug in the lead- I'm not one usually to read stories centering around alien creatures- but you've definitely got my attention! Keep up the good work!