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Challenge The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 10/07/09

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by FirstSentence, Jan 1, 2008.

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  1. Ceillean

    Ceillean Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Final Sentence as in being the last sentence in the story, right?

    Sorry to hear about work. [:D]
     
  2. moosemousse

    moosemousse CR Emeritus: FF-UK South star 6

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    Coo, I'm envisioning an explosive and quite long vignette. I think I have the perfect OCs too. :D
     
  3. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    Yup :D

    And it's not really that much of a problem, I just haven't really had any time in the past 9 months ;)


    mooosemousse- Great!
     
  4. CodyMonKenobi

    CodyMonKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    I bet I can come up with something for that, I thought you meant final, as in no more after this.
     
  5. Ceillean

    Ceillean Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    This sentence has made me come up with the coolest story ever. :D

    I'm actually setting aside everything else to get this finished.
     
  6. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    I've got an entry :D

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/30348086/p1/]An Insignificant Thing[/link]


    Sorry, didn't mean to frighten you with that thought :D


    I'm ecstatic that it's worked so well with your muse! Can't wait to see the end result :D


    And now, to catch up on my reading of entries....
     
  7. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    I have got an entry and it begins with an older "First sentence" and ends with the last sentence.

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30349181]Water fun[/link]

     
  8. Ceillean

    Ceillean Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I thought I'd already posted this question this afternoon. See how my mind wanders off on its own sometimes?

    Anyway, does the story have to be a vig? Or can it be more than one part?
    Because this would be a very looooooong vig if it has to be a short story.
     
  9. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    Nope, the story doesn't have to be a vig.

    In fact, one of my older stories ([link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23477582/r23492564/]Pleasure & Pain[/link]) started off as a 1st Sentence Viggie. Amusingly enough, it was a final-sentence entry as well ;)
     
  10. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    Here's this week sentence. I'm trying to get the PM Machine working so I have no fun little statements about this... just hope ya'll enjoy it :D

    And now, back to my coding...


    [blockquote]I was twenty-three, I was invincible, because you are when you?re twenty-three, the fact is, life sometimes traps you; sometimes there is no way out and there is no chance to escape; sometimes there is; sometimes you can get away... sometimes you die. -- Memory Sticks by Wood Ingham [/blockquote]
     
  11. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    An older first sentence was used for this small one post

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30388051]Unity[/link]

     
  12. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Awesome quote!! And here's [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30393486/p1/]I Was Invincible[/i] :)
     
  13. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    And here is my story with the challenge and also including the Disney challenge

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/30404543]Last mission[/link]
     
  14. Iverna

    Iverna Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm totally new to this, but my cat woke me up and I couldn't get back to sleep so, naturally, JC time! I read the quote, and came up with this:

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/30407036/p1/]We Were Invincible[/link]

    I changed the punctuation in the sentence, though. So now it's technically several sentences. Is that allowed?
     
  15. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    Another quick sentence as I struggle with the PM Tool...

    [blockquote]?I don?t think you quite understand the importance of the next words the come out of your mouth.? (donated by brodiew)[/blockquote]
     
  16. MiralukaJedi

    MiralukaJedi Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hmm...you know what, to me this just screams prank war! I might have to do something about that....
     
  17. Ceillean

    Ceillean Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    And I'm still stuck writing the Last Sentence Challenge with the kiss. And here you bring along this awesome sentence! :eek: Shame on you! :p
     
  18. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    It may be obvious but I meant ...'next words that come out of your mouth.'
     
  19. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    :oops: y'know, I've been looking at that sentence for months in the Sentence File I have, but it's NEVER struck me that it was grammatically incorrect ...
     
  20. MiralukaJedi

    MiralukaJedi Jedi Knight star 4

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    Done and done! Ladies and Gentlemen, I give you

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/30426627/p1]Of Truth, Justice and the Pursuit of the Perfect Prank[/link]
     
  21. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    I've been reading the We Hav to Take a Trip With Jacen Solo thread over in lit. As such, this particular sentence just jumped right off the page at me, and made sense.... enjoy!

    [blockquote]Then he was down the elevator and back on the sunny plaza, and hovering all around him were the worlds of art and science that all these beings were busy building, and he thought, What if I can have it all? -- Rainbow's End by Vernor Vinge[/blockquote]
    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/literature/b10003/28502184/p1/?1232]We Hav to Take a Trip With Jacen Solo[/link]
     
  22. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    Sorry, I was offline spending time with my Beloved Wife and watching Stargate: Universe, and I kind of failed to post this last night. But, hey, I'm here now, I've got a sentence from you, and I can't wait to see what comes bout from it!


    [blockquote]She learned on the balcony railing, waiting for the end of the world. -- Otherland Volume Three: Mountain of Black Glass by Tad Williams[/blockquote]
     
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