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Challenge The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 10/07/09

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by FirstSentence, Jan 1, 2008.

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  1. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    At the risk of total and complete [face_blush] embarrassment I present potentially one of the shortest responses yet:



    ?Is that a lightsaber in you pocket?or are you just happy to see me??

    If there was anything to lift Obi-Wan?s spirits after dying on the Death Star, it was this greeting from Siri in the netherworld of the Force.

    His eyes followed hers ? and he gulped. Where was a good cloak when he needed one.

    On the other hand ? things were really looking up after nineteen lonely years. He should have died years ago.


    (I am so going to hide now and never post again [face_talk_hand] - oh, that's right, I am the author of [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/22039704/p1/?34] 2 Shifts at the Ladies Only Bar in Mos Eisely[/link] )

     
  2. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I've been away for a couple of months and this sentence seemed to be the perfect execize to aid my return.

    ?Is that a lightsaber in you pocket?or are you just happy to see me??

    My OCs, Jedi apprentices Lens Eli and Kayla Bix are in [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28517652&brd=10477]Burning Love[/link].

    Enjoy.
     
  3. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28531058&brd=10476]Not ready to remember MMM and first sentence[/link] is a vignette for two challenges, this and MMM.

    I have taken The best time for luck to show up is when all hope is lost.
     
  4. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    I chose this sentence in honor of my cat Tigger. This is the stupid animal that disappeared on us a few weeks ago for an entire week. A week I spent in misery as my wife wasn't happy. This week included me walking the neighborhood nightly, as well as traipsing through the woods just north of our subdivision (where I managed to twist my ankle). Anyways, she's home now, but I've got to say that:

    [blockquote]Little fuzzy animals bother me.[/blockquote]
     
  5. ShadowofLures

    ShadowofLures Jedi Master star 3

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    Okay, it's FINALLY [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28538834&brd=10475&start=28538835]here[/link].

    to quote Chip from Beauty and the Beast: "Here we go!"

    -Lures @};-
     
  6. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    I have another one for the first sentence challenge, a SiriWan

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28565773&brd=10476]Healing[/link]

     
  7. Jedi-Gon

    Jedi-Gon Jedi Master star 1

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    Oh! Oh! *twitchtwitch* Plot bunnies attacking! Little fuzzies... Must... Write... *Scurries off to MicroWord*
     
  8. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Ok, so this vig opens with a sentence from a previous years challenge, but it includes two sentences from the current challege.

    Please enjoy OC Lens Eli with his best friend Ben Skywalker in [link=http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28594206/p1/?0]Friendly Ribbing [/link].
     
  9. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    As some of you may be aware, I have children. Two of them to be precise--both of them are exuberant bundles of hyperactivity. Save for a few hours which we lovingly call bliss.... err.... nap time. As such, I understand this sentence perfectly.


    [blockquote]Our children aren?t sleeping, they?re recharging. [/blockquote]
     
  10. Jedi Gunny

    Jedi Gunny Yahtzee Host star 9 VIP - Game Host

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    That sounds like me. My sentance is "The hyperactive kids were recharging after their rampage of destruction." That'd be a good first sentance.
     
  11. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oh I like it. The muse does too. :p
     
  12. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Okay, got it done.

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/28609495/p1/?0]Recharge[/link]
     
  13. Takianna

    Takianna Jedi Master star 3

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    Here is mine.....

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28611126&brd=10476&replies=0]The Light[/link]
     
  14. Obi-Gon_Skywalker

    Obi-Gon_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 1

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    This is my response to the previous challenge: [link=http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/28624873/p1/?1]These Little Faces[/link]
     
  15. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    Went back a few sentences in order to create an A/T fic, one can read it [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28653420]here[/link]
     
  16. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    I've been having an odd number of dreams lately. Death, destruction, rebirth, those are usual dream fodder for me, but I'm left wondering why I've been getting so many recently. Maybe someone else out there has been having dreams as well, if so, maybe one of those dreams meets up with this sentence, and we can get a nice bunny out of the deal.


    [blockquote]There wasn?t a bacta tank in the galaxy that could heal her mind from the terror that haunted her dreams.[/blockquote]
     
  17. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost star 6

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    Found another inspiration in a first sentence

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28677462&brd=10475]little fuzzy animals bother me[/link]

    A light and humorous vignette with Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon
     
  18. brodiew

    brodiew Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    It's an old sentence, but what the heck, right?

    Ben, Lens, and friends are headed to [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28761010&brd=10477&replies=0]The Principal's Office[/link].

    Enjoy!
     
  19. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    Two weeks ago, I was miserable. I all but had pneumonia, and in the midst of that misery I got bit by a spider and either at the doc's office, or somewhere else, managed to get it infected by staph. While it's all cleared up, and I'm once more my chipper self (except on m/w/f mornings when I torture my body at the gym) I was rather miserable during that time. So, in honor of my renewed health, I'm putting up the the following sentence:

    [blockquote]Have you ever seen a Wookiee with the Shistavanen flu? [/blockquote]
     
  20. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This plot bunny, though very, very short, popped in my head for this sentence at first reading:

    There wasn?t a bacta tank in the galaxy that could heal her mind from the terror that haunted her dreams.

    [link=http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28769887&brd=10476]Forever Seventeen[/link]
     
  21. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    And now it is time, yet again, for a new sentence!! Last week, it was about wookiees with the flu, this time it's about somthing that I manage to acheive too often for my peice of mind.


    [blockquote]Being in the wrong place at the wrong time has always been my specialty.[/blockquote]
     
  22. Jedi-Gon

    Jedi-Gon Jedi Master star 1

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    I am assuming that the missing word 'place' is just a typo, and I can add it into my entry? Lol, I shall have fun with this one.
     
  23. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    :oops: that's a reasonable assumption. I'll fix it when I get to the house tonight
     
  24. FirstSentence

    FirstSentence Jedi Youngling

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    Here's the next sentence, sorry it's late.

    [blockquote]Diamonds are a girl?s best friend. [/blockquote]
     
  25. THE_PIED_PIPER

    THE_PIED_PIPER Chapter Rep Knoxville, TN star 4

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    I have such a thing with diamonds. [face_blush]

    I have a few. [face_blush]


    I can't wait to see the entries, and I may have to do a quick J/J diamond 'fic.

    Good luck everyone! :D
     
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