Before - Legends The Qui-Gon Jinn Challenge Thread : New Challenge **Qui-Gon as a kid ** updated 5/8/05

Boy oh boy! Folks are juz coming up with even more!

Folks these are juz awesome!! I might come up with a couple... hehehe but only Dooku is on me mind right now... soooooo It might be a bit before I can scrounge one up for Qui or Obi hehehehe

Keep up the good work! I'm so enjoying these Quikus!!

 

Come on! We need more Quiku!

 

ok, me *waves hand* I'll post. I was going to wait until I had some more, but I just rewrote this and was pleased with the improvement. Silly me, I was thinking of two of my unposted stories when I wrote this, not that it will matter, but I wasn't going to post one, perhaps I should now. Anyway....


Stardust
Falling star I see,
just space dust, the dark one says
and then breaks my heart.

A new night, second
son, in awe we watch until
in my arms you sleep.

 

These are great you guys!


VaderLVR LOL at Size Matters Not! Hmmmm..... You really crack me up!!!! Liked the 'Why Him' too!!!

Darth Ishtar Well put on both of those, sums it all up!

AnakinsHeir That is so true of the Jedi, great job.

Diane Those are incredible. Imagry in all of them is great. EEEK!!! The second one even rhymes!!! Love the last one. Great job!

Layren That was incredible too...Oh my gosh these are all so good. I may need to go check out Repercussions now!

Athena Beautiful imagry of Qui!

LukestheMan So sad, and great imagry.

Master LeonaWhither black....oooooh great imagry and yes I can sure see that with Obi-Wan. A second chance. Great job! Poor, poor Qui! Must comfort!!!

AnakinsHeir Once again that was beautiful description of Qui's connection to the force.

Kyn Feel free to do a Dooku one! *hehehe*

 

Athena You snuck some in on me! Those were beautiful!

Had to dedicate this one to my fellow Padawan Kyn

You guys have to forgive me for this!!! Dooku-ku!

Qui-Gon's Master (Like how I try to sneak this into the thread?)



Fierce independence
The Jedi cannot contain
the thoughts of your heart

Dark eyes regard me
A nobility revealed
And secrets concealed

 

Ahh! How sweet! Why thank you t_s!!

Oh boy! A Dooku one! I loved it!!

Hrmmm now I'll have to slide one in next when I get a chance! hehehehe

 

Should be working but am inspired instead!

Cut and Print
Faster, more intense.
Hissing red, brilliant green swords
Crash against Fate's Door


Pride goeth before a Fall
Now to Telos, my
Almost Knight. One last mission.
You will make me proud.

 

AnakinsHeir That's a good one. I like the way it sounds.

tangled_sphere haha, yes I did. Thanks. That's a good description of Dooku. Very him.

Leona Another good one! Great clear description of all of him.

diane I like both of those, especially the second one because it's sorta sad, I think.

 

Well, since I've now posted In the Morning, I guess I can post this one I wrote about the third character who appears in that. He's just someone Obi-Wan brought home one day.


Faramir
Sleep, my Padawan,
and if far I be, over
you our pup will watch.

 

I've been behind in my responses... darn RL.

Anakinsheir Liked that Qui was both Living and Unifying. Good job.
Athena I liked both verses - Qui's two padawans so very different!
tangled_sphere Snuck in the Dooku! LOL. Good job.
Leona Describes Qui to a T.
Athena That was cute and a good tie-in!

Keep them coming everyone. I figure we'll start another challenge next week but a second challenge doesn't mean that the first is over...

 

I continue to be impressed with the talent expressed on these boards. Well done to all!

 

Should be working....

Questions
Pale cheek. Scarring deep,
The Broken Circle never
Healed. Why did he Turn?

A new Beginning
Fiery braid coils warm
In Qui-Gon's outstretched hand. Knight
Kenobi smiles wide.

Not again
"Pathetic life form."
Barbed taunts knife him as blood pours
From his broken nose.

Kids just gotta have fun
Yoda grumbled as
Qui-Gon flew past. Polished floors
Make sock-sliding fun.

 

I love the sock sliding one! We do that all the time here at our house.

 

I agree! The sock sliding was great! (still do it too here Duncan is picking up on moves now hehehehe the sock sliding will continue in the next generation at my place as well! hehehe)

 

We can't do that at my house since I have wall-to-wall carpeting... but I can picture Qui doing it...LOL.

 

Hm... let's try this again...

Finally came up with some!

Phantom Menace

Blue eyes seek the stars.
A shadow? No danger yet...
Strength waits in silence.

And this...

Lessons
Always in motion...
"...a bad feeling about this."
You have much to learn.

 

Ohhhhhh I liked those two!!! Great job!!! I got chills on this You have much to learn.

 

Oh, I liked those two but especially the second one. Great tie-ins!

 

diane I love all of those! But Not Again is my favorite *hugs Qui-Gon*

Mistress_Renata Those are both lovely, particularly the first one, particularly the first line.

Leona I like that point of view. He's just Qui-Gon.


ok, and this will probably be my last for a while. From Dooku's pov, maybe I just got a silly image in my head, but can anyone else see Qui-Gon doing this?

free spirit
Young Padawan mine,
blessed with the Living, loving,
in touch with all life,

relishes nature,
outside dancing barefoot in
silvery moonlight.

 

I normally stick to the Obi-Wan thread, but I figure I should try something a little different.

So here is my first attempt at a haiku.

PRIDE

Heart is filled with pride,
eyes shining brightly with joy
down at Obi-Wan.

 

All these are lovely everyone!I'm sorry I haven't had time to reply individually -- been working and all and it's been a really busy weekend. Keep them coming everyone these are all really well done!